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I loved the bus journey,that
Posted on Thu, 24 Nov 2022
I loved the bus journey,that brought back memories :0) It was exactly like that when my son was little. Thankyou
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 21
PHEW!!!
Posted on Wed, 23 Nov 2022
PHEW!!!
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 19
exciting! you are great at
Posted on Tue, 22 Nov 2022
exciting! you are great at building and releasing the tension
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 18
I like very much how you link
Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022
I like very much how you link the light shining in raindrops to a little girl's laughter, the raindrops suspended on cobwebs, and your daughter's delight caught in your memory
Read full commentPosted in Memories from Falls Past
I loved the positivity of
Posted on Mon, 21 Nov 2022
I loved the positivity of "do not lament" joined with rain trickling down a window, and the energy of "at darkest/ hour will fly again,/through untamed wood"
Read full commentPosted in At Winter's Darkest Hour
How on Earth are you writing
Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022
How on Earth are you writing this wonderful stuff? I was right there in Ethan's mind. Your empathy is amazing
Did you say that Miss Megan has not met their Mum? Did she never take Ethan to school before she left?
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 16
Dark forest is the perfect
Posted on Mon, 21 Nov 2022
Dark forest is the perfect description - where my Dad lived, behind the house, was a woods I used to go in every day. He only went there to collect fallen wood for the fire, he had a wood shed and knew how old everything was in there, which logs...
Read full commentPosted in The Woman on the Other Side of the Screen
Loved this :0) "glittering
Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022
Loved this :0) "glittering with sequins and vodka" "they hatch manoevres in the dark" "to glean packets, strew wrappers,/nibble cheese, peck biscuits" "No dawn chorus for them./They finally settle, swooned in soft down to way-past noon." And the...
Read full commentPosted in Teenage Twitterati
Brilliant choice! It is so
Posted on Sat, 19 Nov 2022
Brilliant choice! It is so easy and right that it seems simple, but is so clever with the gentle rhythm, not "dum de dum" at all, but rolling like the hills in your gorgeous photo (that colour, WOW!!!) full of wonderful sound music, like "late...
Read full commentPosted in by Craven Arms
I cannot imagine your garden
Posted on Thu, 17 Nov 2022
I cannot imagine your garden, even in Winter, being like a "withered old crone"! Maybe a kind old lady who is always giving out treats to visiting birds and animals and telling her plants to be brave as spring will catch them in sunshine again :...
Read full commentPosted in To A Brand New Day
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