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I really liked the sense of
Posted on Tue, 21 Nov 2023
I really liked the sense of change, in your thoughts, the weather, scenery. And the movement words for the train, "crunch, squeezes, charge, snakes". And of leaving a good feeling, with companionship, for a more frightening, lonely one.
Read full commentPosted in Commute
I liked particularly the
Posted on Tue, 21 Nov 2023
I liked particularly the narrator's feelings towards the truck driver. and the change in pace when you describe the crash, which comes across vividly. The graveyard as a still place, with life changing outside
Read full commentPosted in Those We Leave Behind
Really like the first two
Posted on Mon, 20 Nov 2023
That's a question I am always asking! Really like the first two lines :0) And "synapse gaps" with map. I remember being very surprised how much DNA we share with fruit flies, but the word connectome is new to me. And your illustration is very, um...
Read full commentPosted in What's going on inside?
Wonderful!
Posted on Mon, 20 Nov 2023
Wonderful!
Should :
Read full comment“We’d rather hope you’d leave it alone,” said Mr Gwydion"
be : "We rather hoped you'd ..."?
Posted in A hole in the kitchen
really enjoyed this, Thankyou
Posted on Sat, 18 Nov 2023
really enjoyed this, Thankyou
Read full commentPosted in Weary All Hill
"Dreams fade of Palestine"
Posted on Mon, 13 Nov 2023
"Dreams fade of Palestine"
Read full commentI heard on the radio someone in authority in Israel, talking about whom they would allow to govern Gaza. (I think he was one of the more moderate). He said a "pragmatic" Palestinian, which I guess means someone as...
Posted in Eastern Sky
"drip-doodling" is BRILLIANT!
Posted on Thu, 16 Nov 2023
"drip-doodling" is BRILLIANT!!!!!!
Read full commentPosted in The Love of Nature
I was looking forward to the
Posted on Tue, 14 Nov 2023
I was looking forward to the Mum encounter, and it WAS brilliant :0) She is wonderful! And till Claudine said, I hadn't thought who would have screamed, but now I am wondering. Really, really enjoyed
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you....Part 8
I loved the bit about Gordon
Posted on Tue, 14 Nov 2023
I loved the bit about Gordon in Grandpa's boot :0)
Read full commentPosted in 13/11/23
I didn't mean to clog up
Posted on Sun, 12 Nov 2023
I didn't mean to clog up comments for your brilliant, funny poem with stuff about us, I am sorry! He has to travel in, but it's only 3 days a week. Good guesswork :0) Glad you are all well :0)
Read full commentPosted in My Verbal Diary Here
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