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I have 272 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1310108 times and 366 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1696 of my 5,268 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1739 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

1696 of my comments have received 1739 Great Feedback votes

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"or maybe I'm a feathered

Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2022

"or maybe I'm a feathered ghost..." "Lovely imagery and layered meanings. Enjoyed, of course. Paul :) 

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Posted in View Beyond

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I am sure Beatles fans will

Posted on Sat, 27 Aug 2022

I am sure Beatles fans will Let it Be. Exciting parks in Liverpool - that sounds like a plan! 

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Posted in Magical Mystery Tour Part 5 : Mission Accomplished (Into the Liverpool Docklands!) by Alfred N.Muggins Section 1

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"It's a hot summer night on

Posted on Sat, 27 Aug 2022

"It's a hot summer night on the edge of farewell.."

 

Beautiful imagery, Richard. Congrats on the well deserved POTD. Paul 

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Posted in Crossing the Line

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Adroitly done,  Luigi.  I

Posted on Fri, 26 Aug 2022

Adroitly done,  Luigi.  I missed it being International Dog Day too.  My collie cross is 16 years old these days so I can relate to the theme of the poem.  He is very definitely my best friend.  Enjoyed your poem,  of course.  Keep well.  Paul 

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Posted in Best Friend

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Enjoyed another meditation

Posted on Wed, 24 Aug 2022

Enjoyed another meditation with you,  Jenny.  Some of these diaries are Zen-like.  Words to close your eyes to and breathe.  Paul :) 

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Posted in What I Love

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Your walks are real

Posted on Tue, 23 Aug 2022

Your walks are real adventures that filter into your poems. 

 

"gossamer satellite dishes.."

 

Some lovely expressions,  as always.

 

Enjoyed.  Paul 

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Posted in WWW

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Ah thanks for reading it, 

Posted on Sun, 14 Aug 2022

Ah thanks for reading it,  David.  I do like the fantasy genre and this is probably where you will often find me.  A part 3 would unpick the sliding doors idea so here the story rests.  Thanks again.  Paul 

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Posted in Charmed (Part Two of Two)

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Gosh 103! Sounds like a

Posted on Tue, 23 Aug 2022

Gosh 103! Sounds like a lovely,  family use of time.  A lovely read.  Paul :) 

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Posted in 103, not out!

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Hope the rest week's gone

Posted on Tue, 23 Aug 2022

Hope the rest week's gone well.  Sounds like lots to think about and deal with.  Take care of yourself,  Jean.  Paul x

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Posted in Chemo 6

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"...whole lotta snoring goin’

Posted on Tue, 23 Aug 2022

"...whole lotta snoring goin’ on still..." Ouch. After all that glorious singing!

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Posted in There’s A Whole Lotta Karaoke Goin’ On (In The Turkish Hotel Restaurant!) by Alfred N.Muggins

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