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I have 272 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1302136 times and 366 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1694 of my 5,262 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1737 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

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1694 of my comments have received 1737 Great Feedback votes

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It sounds like Mr and Mrs

Posted on Mon, 25 Jul 2022

It sounds like Mr and Mrs Muggins teamed up well to overcome their issues. And being seduced by Turkish music sounds like a good thing! 

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Posted in Turkish Dancing Part 2: Coming To Terms With (Temporary!) Life In Turkey (and in particular how to manage your holiday money in a Strange Land!) by Alfred N.Muggins

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Beautiful shades of light and

Posted on Mon, 25 Jul 2022

Beautiful shades of light and dark. Steeped in myth and legend. Tis a wondrous thing :) 

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Posted in Ceiba (Silk-Cotton Tree)

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Yes, the SHT acronym made me

Posted on Sun, 24 Jul 2022

Yes, the SHT acronym made me laugh too. An intriguing premise for a story and you have your own distinctive style of writing. Which is a very good thing. Looking forward to more. Paul 

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Posted in "The Coffee House Spy" 2

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Ooh a new story. I will move

Posted on Sat, 23 Jul 2022

Ooh a new story. I will move onto part 2 in a bit! 

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Posted in "The Coffee House Spy"

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"...save wind's unseen tongue

Posted on Fri, 22 Jul 2022

"...save wind's unseen tongue howling vowels round consonants of stone left millennia.." Lots of wonderfully, poetic lines in this, Di. Enjoyed Ewan's poem and enoyed this one just as much. Paul

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Posted in sound escape

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All credible, of course. Let

Posted on Sat, 23 Jul 2022

All credible, of course. Let;s hope that this proves an alternate history and doesn't come to pass!

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Posted in The Adventures Of Vladimir Plutinplot In The Modern Age (Grim Version) by Alfred N.Muggins

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I think the trolls are mainly

Posted on Wed, 20 Jul 2022

I think the trolls are mainly bots. Not sure if it is true but it did make me smile the story yesterday about Erdigan making Plutinpot wait before meeting him. 

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Posted in We Are In The ‘Empire Strikes Back’ Phase? By Mr A.N. Muggins

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Posted on Fri, 08 Jul 2022

Ah thanks for reading it, David. And for the invaluable feedback. Part 3 could be longer, for sure. Paul 

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Posted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part Three of Three)

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I would love to visit Turkey.

Posted on Sun, 17 Jul 2022

I would love to visit Turkey. I have only ever heard good things. It sounds like a wonderful country! 

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Posted in Turkish Dancing! Part 1: The Evening of Day 1 / The End of Chill Day! By Alfred N.Muggins

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Sound like Alfred enjoyed the

Posted on Sun, 17 Jul 2022

Sound like Alfred enjoyed the Turkish folk music. Good to see him enjoying himself. 

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Posted in Turkish Dancing! Part 1: The Evening of Day 1 / The End of Chill Day! By Alfred N.Muggins

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