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I have 202 stories published in 25 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 356121 times and 263 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1224 of my 4,056 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1238 votes

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I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

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1224 of my comments have received 1238 Great Feedback votes

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I enjoyed the previous draft.

Posted on Sat, 20 Mar 2021

I enjoyed the previous draft. Looks like you have taken it in a different direction but as enjoyable. Look forward to reading more.

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 2

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The changing of the season

Posted on Thu, 18 Mar 2021

The changing of the season brings many emotions, especially after this particular winter. I honestly think so many more folks have come to appreciate simple things around them such as flora and fauna. Nicely articulated poem.

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Posted in Contrast focussing thought

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Here's hoping ongoing efforts

Posted on Wed, 17 Mar 2021

Here's hoping ongoing efforts using recordings help. That's a precariously low number left in the wild. Such a sad story :(

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Posted in The Silence Of A Regent Honeyeater

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A charming piece of whimsy

Posted on Wed, 17 Mar 2021

A charming piece of whimsy [Willow sauntered?]

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Posted in "Willow's Tail"

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The lines sit up and sparkle

Posted on Tue, 16 Mar 2021

The lines sit up and sparkle in this succint but beautiful piece.

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Posted in Carpe Diem !

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Some great lines, Jenny. Love

Posted on Sun, 14 Mar 2021

Some great lines, Jenny. Love "...Instead I stand in prisoner's rancid tatters.."

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Posted in Escape To Freedom

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A part of history I need to

Posted on Sun, 14 Mar 2021

A part of history I need to read up on. I enjoy your summaries.

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Posted in Succession To The Throne : Some Thoughts On The Subject by Alfred N.Muggins : Part 2 : Particularly Involving Scotland

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It sounds an entrancing place

Posted on Wed, 10 Mar 2021

It sounds an entrancing place and you certainly bring it to life here, Jenny.

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Posted in Lydford Gorge

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I read this and it made me

Posted on Sun, 07 Mar 2021

I read this and it made me think of "Long Lost Family" as I've watched a few recently. The one thing that came up over and over again is that children parted from birth families just needed to know if they were wanted. That missing knowedge...

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Posted in My Mother’s Name

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You have framed a kind of sad

Posted on Thu, 04 Mar 2021

You have framed a kind of sad claustrophobia in a poignant, beautiful way, Jane. Congrats on the POTD.

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Posted in No one comes here.

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