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I have 231 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 802696 times and 310 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1492 of my 4,700 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1508 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in Northampton who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft. Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

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1492 of my comments have received 1508 Great Feedback votes

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I read both parts. You have

Posted on Tue, 18 Jan 2022

I read both parts. You have such a distinctive voice, Ewan. I could hear you reading this and doing the accents. I enjoyed this noting the underlying irony.

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Posted in Bronte's Inferno II (The Mysterious Mr Mitie)

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The reference to the Reverend

Posted on Tue, 18 Jan 2022

The reference to the Reverend Ian Paisley made me laugh too. I can just see him talking now in that stark, norn iron accent. This is almost Edgar Allan Poe-esque in its telling of a tale within a poem. Entertaining, of course. Paul :)

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Posted in Poking James MacGuigan’s Pig

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Burnham Beeches sounds like

Posted on Tue, 18 Jan 2022

Burnham Beeches sounds like the kinda place I would love to be. A cacophony of wild images and wonderful phrasing. Of course. Paul

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Posted in Burnham Beeches

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Stars filled with hope as we

Posted on Tue, 18 Jan 2022

Stars filled with hope as we approach the finale. Keep going!

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Posted in Disenchantment 49

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"...! sky gods that sail."

Posted on Tue, 18 Jan 2022

"...sky gods that sail." Very beautiful and imagist :)

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Posted in Wolves, blizzard

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A bitter sweet ending to this

Posted on Fri, 14 Jan 2022

A bitter sweet ending to this chapter with Charon extracting another price. Another good read. Keep going! Paul

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Posted in Disenchantment 48

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Ah thanks for reading it,

Posted on Wed, 12 Jan 2022

Ah thanks for reading it, Rachel. Skye tried to write this himself but just couldn't hold the pen properly. Paul :)

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Posted in How I Came to Meet Eric

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Nicely done. I have a poem

Posted on Mon, 10 Jan 2022

Nicely done. I have a poem using rhyme and meter I should post from months ago. Maybe soon. I enjoyed your take on the IP. Paul :)

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Posted in Harness!

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Thanks for reading it,

Posted on Wed, 12 Jan 2022

Thanks for reading it, donignacio. It's a story I have wanted to write for quite a while. Eric/Skye says it's OK so that's good enough for me. Thanks again. Paul :)

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Posted in How I Came to Meet Eric

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It looks to me as though the

Posted on Sun, 09 Jan 2022

It looks to me as though the George George stories will run and run. It's great when you have invested creative capital in a character and it pays off. Well done for this follow up and good luck having future fun with these tales. Paul

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Posted in George George and Mimi (Briefly) Tour the World

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