Mark Burrow

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I have 97 stories published in 4 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 147380 times and 191 of my stories have been cherry picked.
148 of my 874 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 154 votes

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Stories. Flash. Works in progress.

My novella, Coo, is published by Alien Buddha Press and can be found here http://tinyurl.com/CooMarkBurrow
 

My stories

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Minefield

Too close to the playground. I told Pete we needed to stay by the garages, near our block of flats, but he never listened. We got spotted by the older boys who hung about by the swings.
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Danger Mouse

The outsourced HR lady had a mole on her cheek and I swear it expanded as the videocall went on. “We appreciate all the hard work you’ve done for us and we’ve really considered every option available. This hasn’t been an easy decision.”
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Death of a Power Station

The four giant chimneys stick up like the legs of a table turned upside down. Smoke used to billow out of those stacks. Thick black plumes rising into the sky.
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The Grizzling

Anne scrunched up a wet flannel and pressed it against my eye. The coldness made me flinch.
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Story of the week

Dayroom Conversation

It was the girls who starved themselves at school. Never the boys. No-one could explain why.
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148 of my comments have received 154 Great Feedback votes

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This really flows beautifully

Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022

This really flows beautifully. Loved it. 

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Posted in Life Through a Prism

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That's wonderful and I'm very

Posted on Sun, 13 Mar 2022

That's wonderful and I'm very grateful given all the superb writing across the site. Thank you!

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Posted in Nor There

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Much appreciated. That's

Posted on Tue, 25 Jan 2022

Much appreciated. That's really nice of you to offer to take a look when it's done -- thank you. You're right, thinking about it, there are shades of Barget. 

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Posted in Weightless v2

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I can hear you reading this,

Posted on Tue, 28 Sep 2021

I can hear you reading this, Rhiannon. It's a lovely poem. 

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Posted in Complicated lives of the little creatures!

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Lovely poem. I spent quite a

Posted on Thu, 02 Sep 2021

Lovely poem. I spent quite a bit of time up there last year, wandering lonely as a deviant, and you've captured the energy of the landscape beautifully.  

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Posted in Trees Called To Me

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This hilarious story is our

Posted on Sat, 18 Apr 2020

This hilarious story is our Pick of the Day -- it was performed superbly by Sean at our virtual reading last week. It's so well constructed -- the pacing of the dialogue and action, combined with little descriptions, are executed with immense ...

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Posted in Look Up The Inferno

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That second stanza is

Posted on Wed, 25 Aug 2021

That second stanza is wonderful, but then so is the whole poem. Beautiful work. 

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Posted in It Is A Sin To Kill A Quetzal

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I've read this a few times,

Posted on Tue, 24 Aug 2021

I've read this a few times, Di. It's excellent. 

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Posted in jormungandr

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Lovely poem. 

Posted on Tue, 17 Aug 2021

Lovely poem. 

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Posted in It's A Wonderful Life

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Bloody hell. This is great. 

Posted on Tue, 17 Aug 2021

Bloody hell. This is great. 

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Posted in Leaving Home

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