Mark Burrow

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I have 97 stories published in 4 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 147382 times and 191 of my stories have been cherry picked.
148 of my 874 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 154 votes

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Stories. Flash. Works in progress.

My novella, Coo, is published by Alien Buddha Press and can be found here http://tinyurl.com/CooMarkBurrow
 

My stories

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Weightless

In the beginning, the absence of a body bothered me. I‘d look in the mirror and get upset about my weightlessness. Like all bouts of anxiety and melancholy, it passed.
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Pigeon Variations - Ch 4 - Hero Grill Chef

The hotplate was vicious. Pyser had a shift with Phil one night. Phil was doing the usual. Two greasy wooden sticks to flip strips of chicken, pork, beef, fish, whatever the customers had given them in a bowl to cook.
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Pigeon Variations - Ch 1 - Control

There was this itching sensation swarming over Pyser. He knew something was wrong with him. It went under the skin. Into his blood stream.
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Fairground

“Passports,” said the man from behind a row of tables. We shuffled along. Farther back, by a wall, soldiers watched us going by, one by one. Their berets, khaki uniforms and Russian assault rifles clashed with our tie-die trousers, hats, bracelets and beads.
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Assassin in My Village Supermarket

Buying scotch eggs and a pint of milk in my village supermarket,
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148 of my comments have received 154 Great Feedback votes

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Congrats -- this is our Pick

Posted on Tue, 03 Aug 2021

Congrats -- this is our Pick of the Day. Please do share on Facebook and Twitter 

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Posted in Saccades of Sands

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I like how the momentum of

Posted on Tue, 03 Aug 2021

I like how the momentum of this builds in such a controlled, marshalled way, Great imagery. I was there in the park, watching this unfold. 

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Posted in Tiresias and the Birds

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Enjoyed this, M. Ambitious

Posted on Tue, 03 Aug 2021

Enjoyed this, M. Ambitious and well executed. Made me think of the Tibetan Book of the Dead. “Past thinking determines our present status, and our present thinking determines our future status; for we are what we think."

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Posted in Saccades of Sands

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It's really good, Richard.

Posted on Tue, 27 Jul 2021

It's really good, Richard. Strong imagery and a message that rings true. Thanks for posting. 

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Posted in The Wonder of it All

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Enjoyed this poem, Richard. 

Posted on Tue, 27 Jul 2021

Enjoyed this poem, Richard. 

Please share on Facebook and Twitter as this deceptively simple piece us our Pick of the Day. 

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Posted in The Wonder of it All

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I was going to use a pic of a

Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021

I was going to use a pic of a vending machine! 

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Posted in When Robert Left Helen

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Or "When Helen Left Robert".

Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021

Or "When Helen Left Robert". This made me laugh. It's nicely done.  

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Posted in When Robert Left Helen

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Brilliantly done. Some great

Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021

Brilliantly done. Some great turns of phrase but I love "slick of oil at the boundaries of time". 

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Posted in The First Stars

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It's well deserved! Thank you

Posted on Tue, 08 Jun 2021

It's well deserved! Thank you for posting it smiley

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Posted in Pride

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Congratulations - This is our

Posted on Tue, 08 Jun 2021

Congratulations - This is our Pick of the Day! 

Please do feel free to share on Facebook and Twitter 

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