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He scowls at the back Carves his name in the desk Sneers in your face Spits on the floor Prowls from the room Read what he scrawled: Caravaggio. She...
I think you are missing a bit on the last sentence. Some interesting ideas here, the comfort of ignorance and a tough of magic around the eruption. On to part 2!
This is such a powerful piece. It would be worth correcting things like capital letters, paragraphing, also slight niggles like wind can't pierce skin etc, only so the piece is given the justice it deserves.
Such an interesting
Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2015
Such an interesting perspective, really compelling.
Read full commentPosted in My brother, the murderer.
A lovely description of being
Posted on Tue, 07 Apr 2015
A lovely description of being carried away with music, most atmospheric.
Read full commentPosted in Dancing Alive
I think you are missing a bit
Posted on Tue, 07 Apr 2015
I think you are missing a bit on the last sentence. Some interesting ideas here, the comfort of ignorance and a tough of magic around the eruption. On to part 2!
Read full commentPosted in Huluppu Tree, Ch. 1
The truth of mortality, some
Posted on Mon, 06 Apr 2015
The truth of mortality, some lovely images here.
Read full commentPosted in The River shows us truth
This builds so well!
Posted on Sun, 05 Apr 2015
This builds so well!
Read full commentPosted in "I have seen the Lord!"
strong plot and sharp writing
Posted on Fri, 03 Apr 2015
strong plot and sharp writing.
Read full commentPosted in The Fifth Star - Chapter 12 (2/2) - Separation
Such a strong sense of time
Posted on Thu, 02 Apr 2015
Such a strong sense of time and place.
Read full commentPosted in Motorway Dawn
Bleakly brilliant.
Posted on Wed, 01 Apr 2015
Bleakly brilliant.
Read full commentPosted in Burial At Sea
This is such a powerful piece
Posted on Tue, 24 Mar 2015
This is such a powerful piece. It would be worth correcting things like capital letters, paragraphing, also slight niggles like wind can't pierce skin etc, only so the piece is given the justice it deserves.
Read full commentPosted in Warning
The agony of waiting, reading
Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2015
The agony of waiting, reading too much into things, love hurts, but it's an enjoyable sort of pain.
Read full commentPosted in left for five minutes
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