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I love this! I like to write
Posted on Tue, 05 May 2015
I love this! I like to write about the changing nature of the city too. I think this is beautiful, the natural world making use of what humans made and no longer want. Love 'the dust of men and machines'.
This has a touch of horror to it, I wonder why she has to stay locked up. Very dark but interesting ideas. Still a few gammatical issues, e.g. 'find hersself' should be 'found, 'ringed', 'rang', it seems like tenses need looking at.
I love this! I like to write
Posted on Tue, 05 May 2015
I love this! I like to write about the changing nature of the city too. I think this is beautiful, the natural world making use of what humans made and no longer want. Love 'the dust of men and machines'.
Read full commentPosted in Rust
Full of strangeness, which I
Posted on Sun, 03 May 2015
Full of strangeness, which I really like.
Read full commentPosted in The Ravens of Portobello
This great, full of energy
Posted on Sun, 03 May 2015
This great, full of energy and perverseness of being human.
Read full commentPosted in The Protest
Oh my! I just googled it and
Posted on Sat, 02 May 2015
Oh my! I just googled it and if it's the one set in NZ it sounds close to my childhood, I'm going to try and get it! Thank you Vera.
Read full commentPosted in Measles
Such a fascinating story!
Posted on Tue, 28 Apr 2015
Such a fascinating story! There are still some issues with tenses and it should be 'her husband' not his. I really like this mix of history and myth.
Read full commentPosted in The Ancient tax on Breast
This has a touch of horror to
Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2015
This has a touch of horror to it, I wonder why she has to stay locked up. Very dark but interesting ideas. Still a few gammatical issues, e.g. 'find hersself' should be 'found, 'ringed', 'rang', it seems like tenses need looking at.
Read full commentPosted in Strange deeds of Anduin,
Nearly there! This reminds
Posted on Sun, 26 Apr 2015
Nearly there! This reminds me of 'Wild', the camaraderie and how far you have all come.
Read full commentPosted in Camino 14 – 2 October 2014
Wistful and true, shedding
Posted on Tue, 21 Apr 2015
Wistful and true, shedding the past.
Read full commentPosted in moving in
I quite like the awkwardness
Posted on Fri, 24 Apr 2015
I quite like the awkwardness of 'comfortability' and 'moonlight-less', seems to refelect the feelings in the poem.
Read full commentPosted in Barcelona Midnight
Memories, beautifully
Posted on Thu, 23 Apr 2015
Memories, beautifully captured.
Read full commentPosted in Lady Plays the Blues
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