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Copper Books can change your life. For me it was Steinbeck, a blend of Cannery Row and Tortilla Flat . Something from Steinbeck’s mind connected with...
This has a touch of horror to it, I wonder why she has to stay locked up. Very dark but interesting ideas. Still a few gammatical issues, e.g. 'find hersself' should be 'found, 'ringed', 'rang', it seems like tenses need looking at.
Names of flowers are so beautiful, contrasts well with the horror that follows. i've got a beautiful dead butterfly on my table, found it dead, horrible to have it because it is dead, but it is so beautiful, dilemma.
Such a fascinating story!
Posted on Tue, 28 Apr 2015
Such a fascinating story! There are still some issues with tenses and it should be 'her husband' not his. I really like this mix of history and myth.
Read full commentPosted in The Ancient tax on Breast
This has a touch of horror to
Posted on Mon, 27 Apr 2015
This has a touch of horror to it, I wonder why she has to stay locked up. Very dark but interesting ideas. Still a few gammatical issues, e.g. 'find hersself' should be 'found, 'ringed', 'rang', it seems like tenses need looking at.
Read full commentPosted in Strange deeds of Anduin,
Wistful and true, shedding
Posted on Tue, 21 Apr 2015
Wistful and true, shedding the past.
Read full commentPosted in moving in
I quite like the awkwardness
Posted on Fri, 24 Apr 2015
I quite like the awkwardness of 'comfortability' and 'moonlight-less', seems to refelect the feelings in the poem.
Read full commentPosted in Barcelona Midnight
Memories, beautifully
Posted on Thu, 23 Apr 2015
Memories, beautifully captured.
Read full commentPosted in Lady Plays the Blues
If only we could go back,
Posted on Tue, 21 Apr 2015
If only we could go back, haunting writing.
Read full commentPosted in I
Names of flowers are so
Posted on Sun, 19 Apr 2015
Names of flowers are so beautiful, contrasts well with the horror that follows. i've got a beautiful dead butterfly on my table, found it dead, horrible to have it because it is dead, but it is so beautiful, dilemma.
Read full commentPosted in Holly Blue
Like the lifting of the
Posted on Thu, 16 Apr 2015
Like the lifting of the sunglasses especially, a touch of glamour.
Read full commentPosted in a red car coming
This is really interesting,
Posted on Thu, 16 Apr 2015
This is really interesting, it has the feel of a romantic poem from the 19th century but with a modren setting.
Read full commentPosted in Spring in Snow
Romantic and dreamy, love the
Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2015
Romantic and dreamy, love the 'flipside of night'.
Read full commentPosted in Forever frozen on the flipside of the night.
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