I have 166 stories published in
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My stories have been read 608585 times
and 212 of my stories have been cherry picked. 400 of my 5,342 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 398 votes
This is such a powerful piece. It would be worth correcting things like capital letters, paragraphing, also slight niggles like wind can't pierce skin etc, only so the piece is given the justice it deserves.
strong plot and sharp writing
Posted on Fri, 03 Apr 2015
strong plot and sharp writing.
Read full commentPosted in The Fifth Star - Chapter 12 (2/2) - Separation
Such a strong sense of time
Posted on Thu, 02 Apr 2015
Such a strong sense of time and place.
Read full commentPosted in Motorway Dawn
Bleakly brilliant.
Posted on Wed, 01 Apr 2015
Bleakly brilliant.
Read full commentPosted in Burial At Sea
This is such a powerful piece
Posted on Tue, 24 Mar 2015
This is such a powerful piece. It would be worth correcting things like capital letters, paragraphing, also slight niggles like wind can't pierce skin etc, only so the piece is given the justice it deserves.
Read full commentPosted in Warning
The agony of waiting, reading
Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2015
The agony of waiting, reading too much into things, love hurts, but it's an enjoyable sort of pain.
Read full commentPosted in left for five minutes
Simple but powerful!
Posted on Thu, 19 Mar 2015
Simple but powerful!
Read full commentPosted in Love and Hate
I really like these super
Posted on Sun, 15 Mar 2015
I really like these super short stories, very clever.
Read full commentPosted in romance-fiction
A lovely moment, the devotion
Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2015
A lovely moment, the devotion very young children can have to their teachers and mum there to pick up the pieces.
Read full commentPosted in Chicks
Beautifully structured, has
Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2015
Beautifully structured, has the rythm of trains, a brief encounter, melancholic and romantic- if trains can be.
Read full commentPosted in Passing Trains in Winter Rain
Always at the back of our
Posted on Mon, 09 Mar 2015
Always at the back of our minds, slipping on that stair. (Just thinking you wanted 'too' not 'to' in the second line.)
Read full commentPosted in I CAN NOT BE CYNICAL
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