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I have 180 stories published in
7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 166236 times
and 7 of my stories have been cherry picked.
37 of my 478 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 38 votes
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Banished To Earth Book One (21)
“Or on your way to the rest home to get your mother?” Beth asked, “Because it’s not that easy. You can’t Portal Shift everyone to make them believe,...
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Banished To Earth Book One (20)
He jumped up, snatched a napkin and wiped his face. 80 Nikki remembered how it was when her daddy was in their life, got up and ran around Pry’s...
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Banished To Earth Book One (19)
Chapter 12 77 They were still calling each other butter beanies when they entered Chase’s bright sunlit living room. Pry was sitting cross-legged on...
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Banished To Earth Book One (18)
Chapter 11 73 Sometime after Chase stroked Pry’s tender cheek with his fingertips, another ‘early arrival’ was tracing the depth and shape of her...
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Banished To Earth Book One (17)
“She’s the best.” Chase chimed in. “If you are not a bad man, you’ve nothing to fear.” “Or a dumb, horn, ah, not nice teenage boy.” Beth quickly...
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terrible news
Posted on Fri, 08 May 2026
I am shocked and saddened and so sorry. You are in my prayers. Please do not feel obligated to read or respond to my stuff, just get better and get all the rest and treatment you need. But if anything I can share with you offer you some small...
Read full commentPosted in Lung Biopsy Result
Now, that ending
Posted on Mon, 12 Jun 2023
sure hope it was a beginning, wonderfully written i cantell you did you your homework
Your prose is so polished a joy to read, and i would love to find out if this Titan mermaid is real or some breach in his suit causing his mind to blur...
Read full commentPosted in Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part Three of Three)
Another Excellent Chapter
Posted on Sun, 11 Jun 2023
Very well done all your details paint a clear picture of space tavel Saturn and family, grounded and so very human, exactly what Sci Fi needs to make relatable and satisfying
wonder read
Ray
Read full commentPosted in Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part Two of Three)
Great start
Posted on Fri, 09 Jun 2023
You fooled me, very well written easy and fun to read .
Not a boy and mermaid but starship captain really cool, Titan sounds so intriguing
loving it so far
Ray
Read full commentPosted in Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part One of Three)
Danielle oh no
Posted on Tue, 26 May 2026
Well the witch has taken another, possesion such a sneaky robbery, terrifying yet so subtle.
You know how to up the suspense and capture the moment.
Another highly enjoyable piece
Ray
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (22)
A lady Priest
Posted on Tue, 07 Apr 2026
Hope she doesn't put a target on her back, or worse get tempted from God toward darkness that can only lie and deliver corruption and death.
Another beautifully written piece a pleasure to read and learn from
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (17)
These Hunters
Posted on Tue, 29 Mar 2011
They are everywhere. To lazy to do thier digging or Hunting, crimnals all.
At least they were able to one good night, food always makes things better
Another well written piece
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART TEN )
Poot Nathan, if he calls for
Posted on Mon, 28 Mar 2011
Poot Nathan, if he calls for help he only attract a bear. If not, he dies a slowly pain death of deprivation.
Nicely written Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART NINE )
Really enjoyable
Posted on Fri, 27 Mar 2026
Now that's the way I want to write, the previous chapter really drives home the threat stalking Billie and Danielle.
This is kind of prose I need to read. to hone my own meager skills.
Will certainly read more
wonderful...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (16)
Excellent
Posted on Fri, 20 Mar 2026
Your prose is wonderful, a joy to read
So the witch is 'free', but scared by evil still doomed by of death, and lust for etenal life.
Her savior her demon tormentor has done her no favors, but that was never his intent.
Again...
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