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Charming and exciting
Posted on Fri, 21 Jun 2019
Hi this is rayjones, what charming sweet but interesting story well written easy to read uncle Charlie is a fun character should be a great ride for the reader
hi its rayjones again, liked your poem It has a natural flow of imagery that ignites the imagination and takes the reader to wonderful threshold of possibilities
The story starts at the end, than wraps around and slaps you in the face. I loved it. I like scary stories especially the ones that creep up on you. This one really got me. Loved it Ray
Charming and exciting
Posted on Fri, 21 Jun 2019
Hi this is rayjones, what charming sweet but interesting story well written easy to read uncle Charlie is a fun character should be a great ride for the reader
Read full commentPosted in "A Timely Adventure" CHAPTER 1
Natural flow
Posted on Wed, 12 Jun 2019
hi its rayjones again, liked your poem It has a natural flow of imagery that ignites the imagination and takes the reader to wonderful threshold of possibilities
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I agree
Posted on Sun, 29 Mar 2015
Briggs is not a murderer, much good came out of his reckless act, I really liked the dialogue, great chapter Ray
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Scary stuff
Posted on Sun, 07 Jun 2015
The story starts at the end, than wraps around and slaps you in the face. I loved it. I like scary stories especially the ones that creep up on you. This one really got me. Loved it Ray
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