72 Her face glistened with tears. Beth snatched her up and squeezed her tightly. “Oh, Mommie, I had the scariest dream.” “A dream, yes, yes, a dream...
70 They all raced upstairs, leaving the little stranger sitting on the couch. “Look”, Beth yelled, pointing at the open balcony window. “Don’t see no...
Eloween, sucked in a deep breath. Nikki’s body arched up, stayed arched for several seconds, then convulsed so violently she threw herself out of the...
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I am so sorry
Posted on Sat, 20 Jun 2026
No words can really help, I don't really know you, but my heart goes out to you, if that helps. Your pain, fear, and your struggle will be yours to go through, experience and endure. My prayers are with you and all my care. Just know you are...
I am shocked and saddened and so sorry. You are in my prayers. Please do not feel obligated to read or respond to my stuff, just get better and get all the rest and treatment you need. But if anything I can share with you offer you some small...
My Aunt developed severe mental problems as she aged. She was a brilliant student, but her inner wiring went, well, haywire years before she died, which was odd since my father never learned to read and apparently experienced some of the same...
You got me. Great twist. Addison needed for a moment to reach out from her mezzanine existence to help another embrace and appreciate her life. Sweet ghost story not too many of them, wonderful read Ray
Another well-written piece, your attention to detail is remarkable and instructive, I'm thinking Jenny is about to bump into something that might bump back or nudge her toward some truth about her self and her troubled homelife
Its good kids don't see the world like adults, but the world does not care about their innocence or misplaced confidence in the security the adults provide. When trouble comes, too often they don't see until it's too late, that grownups have to...
Glad Nathen has decided to strike out and find his family. Ben will peobably go with, wonder whats going on out side, have to read on and find out great read Ray
What you are going through is miserable, scary, I pray it passes you, unharmed. Venting is healthy, your experience your illness is your the share or keep, as you see fit. It takes great courage to share such pain, so wish you did not have to...
I am so sorry
Posted on Sat, 20 Jun 2026
No words can really help, I don't really know you, but my heart goes out to you, if that helps. Your pain, fear, and your struggle will be yours to go through, experience and endure. My prayers are with you and all my care. Just know you are...
Read full commentPosted in Diagnosis Of My Appointment
terrible news
Posted on Fri, 08 May 2026
I am shocked and saddened and so sorry. You are in my prayers. Please do not feel obligated to read or respond to my stuff, just get better and get all the rest and treatment you need. But if anything I can share with you offer you some small...
Read full commentPosted in Lung Biopsy Result
Great chapter
Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2026
Really enjoyed it. Is Danielle still alive? Just what will the witch do to Billy? Stay tuned to find out' completely tuned in, Ray Great work
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (26)
grim but well written
Posted on Sun, 26 Jul 2015
My Aunt developed severe mental problems as she aged. She was a brilliant student, but her inner wiring went, well, haywire years before she died, which was odd since my father never learned to read and apparently experienced some of the same...
Read full commentPosted in huts 5 (rewrite)
Clever
Posted on Sun, 23 Oct 2022
You got me. Great twist. Addison needed for a moment to reach out from her mezzanine existence to help another embrace and appreciate her life. Sweet ghost story not too many of them, wonderful read Ray
Read full commentPosted in The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part Two of Two)
Another
Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2022
Another well-written piece, your attention to detail is remarkable and instructive, I'm thinking Jenny is about to bump into something that might bump back or nudge her toward some truth about her self and her troubled homelife
Great read...
Read full commentPosted in The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part One of Two)
Well at least they got a respite
Posted on Mon, 02 May 2011
Now on to find his family, it won't be easy but that's what makes a great story
Good job Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART FORTY SIX )
Youngin's
Posted on Thu, 21 Apr 2011
Its good kids don't see the world like adults, but the world does not care about their innocence or misplaced confidence in the security the adults provide. When trouble comes, too often they don't see until it's too late, that grownups have to...
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART FORTY FOUR )
now what
Posted on Thu, 21 Apr 2011
Glad Nathen has decided to strike out and find his family. Ben will peobably go with, wonder whats going on out side, have to read on and find out great read Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART FORTY THREE )
Brutal honesty
Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2026
What you are going through is miserable, scary, I pray it passes you, unharmed. Venting is healthy, your experience your illness is your the share or keep, as you see fit. It takes great courage to share such pain, so wish you did not have to...
Read full commentPosted in Torment
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