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The football player
Once upon of time, there was a little boy named Daniel. He LOVED to play football. He was the best on his team; everybody loved him! He was so good,...
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The Last Night Chapter 21 A Past Recaptured
The Last Night Chapter21 A Past Recaptured 60 None of them were particularly surprised by Patrice’s unsolicited knowledge of them. Automatic facial...
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The Last Night Chapter 20 Home?
The Last Night Chapter 20 Home? 57 The ‘eggs’ entrance was a swirling rectangle of gold, silver and blue mist, an example of Terratuan art, very...
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The Last Night Chapter 19 Home?
The Last Night Chapter 20 Home? 57 The ‘eggs’ entrance was a swirling rectangle of gold, silver and blue mist, an example of Terratuan art, very...
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The Last Night Chapter 19 Settling In
The Last Night Chapter 19 Settling In 54 “All of a sudden I feel like the cowardly lion in the Wizard Of Oz.” Wyatt said as they started walking down...
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thats what good songs do
Posted on Tue, 25 Feb 2025
thats what music does, takes you places and ignites inner longings and pluks your emotions taking you through time and place in unexpected ways great work
Ray
Read full commentPosted in In Twilight Years
Thats wonderful
Posted on Sun, 22 Dec 2024
So sad you had to endure that. But you made it through. I so hope can resume your normal life soon, and so glad you are on the mend.
Ray
Read full commentPosted in Bright Side Of Life
Lovely poem
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2024
What a delight, spent a lot of time in the woods when I lived on a tobacco farm decades ago, it was always a mystical escape, every shadow an inticing mystery. Seems you feel the same.
Really enjoyed your Poem Ray
Read full commentPosted in Playful Elven Folk
I had no idea
Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2024
I had no idea you going through so much diffculty and misery. I'll keep you in my prayers. I breaks my heart, to hear of your troubles, all my concern Ray.
Read full commentPosted in Can Life Get Better?
Charming and exciting
Posted on Fri, 21 Jun 2019
Hi this is rayjones, what charming sweet but interesting story well written easy to read uncle Charlie is a fun character should be a great ride for the reader
Read full commentPosted in "A Timely Adventure" CHAPTER 1
Natural flow
Posted on Wed, 12 Jun 2019
hi its rayjones again, liked your poem It has a natural flow of imagery that ignites the imagination and takes the reader to wonderful threshold of possibilities
Read full commentPosted in Ghost Riders
I agree
Posted on Sun, 29 Mar 2015
Briggs is not a murderer, much good came out of his reckless act, I really liked the dialogue, great chapter Ray
Read full commentPosted in Dwellers of the New World Chapter Fifteen ( Pt 7 ) A Quiet Word
Scary stuff
Posted on Sun, 07 Jun 2015
The story starts at the end, than wraps around and slaps you in the face. I loved it. I like scary stories especially the ones that creep up on you. This one really got me. Loved it Ray
Read full commentPosted in Corruption