“Well, that was nice,” Tucker said, helping Pry to her feet. “Ya’ coulda’ helped me too.” “You? What are you doing here?” “I’m Santa Claus. Ask Chase...
sure hope it was a beginning, wonderfully written i cantell you did you your homework
Your prose is so polished a joy to read, and i would love to find out if this Titan mermaid is real or some breach in his suit causing his mind to blur...
Very well done all your details paint a clear picture of space tavel Saturn and family, grounded and so very human, exactly what Sci Fi needs to make relatable and satisfying
well done
Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2011
Four eating insects its wonder the pit isnt full of vomit.
So glad Nathan is rescued
Good job
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART SEVENTEEN )
Another Excellent Chapter
Posted on Mon, 04 Apr 2011
Now how s this boy going ot get Nathan from the pit
another fun read
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART FIFTEEN )
cliff, pit hanger
Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2011
Okay Nathan time to get busy throw some dirt at it maybe get some in its eyes
just don't lay and get eaten!
Nicely done
Enjoyed
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART FOURTEEN )
Now, that ending
Posted on Mon, 12 Jun 2023
sure hope it was a beginning, wonderfully written i cantell you did you your homework
Your prose is so polished a joy to read, and i would love to find out if this Titan mermaid is real or some breach in his suit causing his mind to blur...
Read full commentPosted in Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part Three of Three)
Another Excellent Chapter
Posted on Sun, 11 Jun 2023
Very well done all your details paint a clear picture of space tavel Saturn and family, grounded and so very human, exactly what Sci Fi needs to make relatable and satisfying
wonder read
Ray
Read full commentPosted in Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part Two of Three)
Great start
Posted on Fri, 09 Jun 2023
You fooled me, very well written easy and fun to read .
Not a boy and mermaid but starship captain really cool, Titan sounds so intriguing
loving it so far
Ray
Read full commentPosted in Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part One of Three)
Finally
Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2011
a glimmer of hope, hang on Nathan, help is on the way
Neatly told fun to read
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART THIRTEEN )
nasty lazy bad guy
Posted on Wed, 30 Mar 2011
Jonah will get his sooner or later, i'm sure.
Good job depicting this fool, can't wait to see him taken down
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART TWEVE )
bare necessities
Posted on Wed, 30 Mar 2011
Well ya gotta eat something. A hole in the ground a grave or his last hope, at least they didn't just kill him out right.
Well told short but to the point
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART ELEVEN )
Danielle oh no
Posted on Tue, 26 May 2026
Well the witch has taken another, possesion such a sneaky robbery, terrifying yet so subtle.
You know how to up the suspense and capture the moment.
Another highly enjoyable piece
Ray
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