Beth watched the two of them walk toward the downstairs bathroom by the front of the house. “Okay, now we have three superheroes. That’s a good thing...
“And it might not. Once she meets Nikki, Beth and Trudy, I’m sure she…” “Pry!” Chase could not believe she was sharing such precious information with...
In an alcove of darkness the young people find a ancient book of spells, now a witch must find her lost prize, Billy abilities are no doubt linked to the witch and the book probably Danielle too,
looks like these have quite an adventure waiting for them, feels like i'm walking right along with them, so a mssing child's name turns up on a headstone in an unknown, land, must still be England, though english words, or name anyway. wonder id...
It's always a dream. Something dark lurking about the edges of a child's mind, soft borders there? Sadly so. Another great read, subtle with an uneasy undercurrent of malice. Sounds like the witch has selected her next victim.
An odd discovery, a quaint harmless artefact, or a Pandora's box of darkness and peril? Read on to find out, but then we've already met the witch, so harmless artefact is out the window. But what will fly in that open window? Can't wait to find...
Another abusive parent, so
Posted on Wed, 23 Mar 2011
Another abusive parent, so the Hunters don't want children on thier hunting rounds, curious.
Her father better have a good reason for beating his daughter, no there is no good reason for beating a child. He's a butt!
Well, so much...
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Beautiful Soothing start,
Posted on Wed, 23 Mar 2011
Beautiful Soothing start, made me think of America's Native American past. Easy flowing read
. Much enjoyed
Ray
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Another Excellent Chapter
Posted on Fri, 13 Mar 2026
You really know how to draw the reader in, and hold their attention
Beautifully written
Ray
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Wonderfully written
Posted on Tue, 10 Mar 2026
Terrifying yet majestic prose, transportative.
Such a horror so easily avoided by the slightest touch of human kindness.
Great read Ray
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A lovely picture
Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022
Your story is ripe with magical possibilty, Wonderful imagery and great names. Will be reading more
Ray
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So sad
Posted on Thu, 07 Aug 2025
Hatred and fear take life and never give anything but loss and grief.
Beautifully renderded
Ray
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Book hidden away
Posted on Tue, 17 Feb 2026
In an alcove of darkness the young people find a ancient book of spells, now a witch must find her lost prize, Billy abilities are no doubt linked to the witch and the book probably Danielle too,
great read, plan to finish it wonder how...
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Brave Kids
Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2025
looks like these have quite an adventure waiting for them, feels like i'm walking right along with them, so a mssing child's name turns up on a headstone in an unknown, land, must still be England, though english words, or name anyway. wonder id...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (8)
A dream...
Posted on Wed, 23 Jul 2025
It's always a dream. Something dark lurking about the edges of a child's mind, soft borders there? Sadly so. Another great read, subtle with an uneasy undercurrent of malice. Sounds like the witch has selected her next victim.
Ray
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (4)
much to discuss
Posted on Fri, 17 Apr 2026
An odd discovery, a quaint harmless artefact, or a Pandora's box of darkness and peril? Read on to find out, but then we've already met the witch, so harmless artefact is out the window. But what will fly in that open window? Can't wait to find...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (18)
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