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Banished To Earth Book One (23)
Chase dismissed everything, this idiot was sputtering, except the part about Grant knowing about the change and the fall since he was a boy. But it...
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Banished To Earth Book One (22)
87 He knew this entire thing had to look like some scene out of an old-fashioned western movie, the climactic scene where the good guy dutifully...
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Banished To Earth Book One (21)
“Or on your way to the rest home to get your mother?” Beth asked, “Because it’s not that easy. You can’t Portal Shift everyone to make them believe,...
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Banished To Earth Book One (20)
He jumped up, snatched a napkin and wiped his face. 80 Nikki remembered how it was when her daddy was in their life, got up and ran around Pry’s...
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Banished To Earth Book One (19)
Chapter 12 77 They were still calling each other butter beanies when they entered Chase’s bright sunlit living room. Pry was sitting cross-legged on...
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snappy dialogue crisp but
Posted on Wed, 22 Apr 2026
snappy dialogue crisp but detailed as usual
another good one
Ray
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (19)
Immersive
Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025
That poor child, you really took me there, with your detailed description. I was transported to an ominous world, glad to leave yet eager to return. Great Job Ray
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Compelling start
Posted on Fri, 15 May 2026
Lots of rich, effective detail transports the reader into the scene just the way it should. Looking forward to more.
Ray
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Poem comment
Posted on Fri, 15 May 2026
What a beautiful assessment of reality our place in it and what it actually is, elevating.
Ray
Read full commentPosted in Where Thoughts Take Me
thats what good songs do
Posted on Tue, 25 Feb 2025
thats what music does, takes you places and ignites inner longings and pluks your emotions taking you through time and place in unexpected ways great work
Ray
Read full commentPosted in In Twilight Years
Thats wonderful
Posted on Sun, 22 Dec 2024
So sad you had to endure that. But you made it through. I so hope can resume your normal life soon, and so glad you are on the mend.
Ray
Read full commentPosted in Bright Side Of Life
Lovely poem
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2024
What a delight, spent a lot of time in the woods when I lived on a tobacco farm decades ago, it was always a mystical escape, every shadow an inticing mystery. Seems you feel the same.
Really enjoyed your Poem Ray
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I had no idea
Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2024
I had no idea you going through so much diffculty and misery. I'll keep you in my prayers. I breaks my heart, to hear of your troubles, all my concern Ray.
Read full commentPosted in Can Life Get Better?
Charming and exciting
Posted on Fri, 21 Jun 2019
Hi this is rayjones, what charming sweet but interesting story well written easy to read uncle Charlie is a fun character should be a great ride for the reader
Read full commentPosted in "A Timely Adventure" CHAPTER 1
Natural flow
Posted on Wed, 12 Jun 2019
hi its rayjones again, liked your poem It has a natural flow of imagery that ignites the imagination and takes the reader to wonderful threshold of possibilities
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