Beth watched the two of them walk toward the downstairs bathroom by the front of the house. “Okay, now we have three superheroes. That’s a good thing...
“And it might not. Once she meets Nikki, Beth and Trudy, I’m sure she…” “Pry!” Chase could not believe she was sharing such precious information with...
sure hope it was a beginning, wonderfully written i cantell you did you your homework
Your prose is so polished a joy to read, and i would love to find out if this Titan mermaid is real or some breach in his suit causing his mind to blur...
Very well done all your details paint a clear picture of space tavel Saturn and family, grounded and so very human, exactly what Sci Fi needs to make relatable and satisfying
Glad youre enjoying my liitle book its about 148 pages, I have about thirty pages of my third re write of book two, just about to introduce fairies into their new earth.
Another Excellent Chapter
Posted on Mon, 04 Apr 2011
Now how s this boy going ot get Nathan from the pit
another fun read
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART FIFTEEN )
cliff, pit hanger
Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2011
Okay Nathan time to get busy throw some dirt at it maybe get some in its eyes
just don't lay and get eaten!
Nicely done
Enjoyed
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART FOURTEEN )
Now, that ending
Posted on Mon, 12 Jun 2023
sure hope it was a beginning, wonderfully written i cantell you did you your homework
Your prose is so polished a joy to read, and i would love to find out if this Titan mermaid is real or some breach in his suit causing his mind to blur...
Read full commentPosted in Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part Three of Three)
Another Excellent Chapter
Posted on Sun, 11 Jun 2023
Very well done all your details paint a clear picture of space tavel Saturn and family, grounded and so very human, exactly what Sci Fi needs to make relatable and satisfying
wonder read
Ray
Read full commentPosted in Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part Two of Three)
Great start
Posted on Fri, 09 Jun 2023
You fooled me, very well written easy and fun to read .
Not a boy and mermaid but starship captain really cool, Titan sounds so intriguing
loving it so far
Ray
Read full commentPosted in Song to the Siren: A Titan Story (Part One of Three)
Finally
Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2011
a glimmer of hope, hang on Nathan, help is on the way
Neatly told fun to read
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART THIRTEEN )
nasty lazy bad guy
Posted on Wed, 30 Mar 2011
Jonah will get his sooner or later, i'm sure.
Good job depicting this fool, can't wait to see him taken down
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART TWEVE )
bare necessities
Posted on Wed, 30 Mar 2011
Well ya gotta eat something. A hole in the ground a grave or his last hope, at least they didn't just kill him out right.
Well told short but to the point
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART ELEVEN )
Danielle oh no
Posted on Tue, 26 May 2026
Well the witch has taken another, possesion such a sneaky robbery, terrifying yet so subtle.
You know how to up the suspense and capture the moment.
Another highly enjoyable piece
Ray
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (22)
thank you
Posted on Sun, 24 May 2026
Glad youre enjoying my liitle book its about 148 pages, I have about thirty pages of my third re write of book two, just about to introduce fairies into their new earth.
I'll return to the Chosen soon
Ray
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