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Banished To Earth, Book Two, King Davin (43)
Chapter 70 147 Everything went white. It was as if reality had suddenly crumbled away. Heaviness. But not the strange hulking heaviness of being...
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Banished To Earth Book Two, A Dragon King (42)
142 Far below, great swaths of green blanketed shattered houses, vehicles and buildings. Clearly, sadly, much time had passed. ‘Nothing is moving...
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Banished To Earth Book Two, A Dragon King? (41)
Chapter 69 141 The Urgis looked down from high above Earth’s atmosphere. Fev snorted, assessed and made his determination. Stayner remained their...
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Banished To Earth Book Two, A Dragon King? (40)
Chapter 68 138 The search for Stayner suddenly felt hollow, pointless. Killing him was serving them. Ruling this planet was also serving them. He was...
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Banished To Earth Book Two, A Dragon King? (39)
133 Banished To Earth, A Dragon King? Chapter 67 Several days before Davin escaped from Chase and reunited with Pry, Chase and Mabel stepped out of a...
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Transportive
Posted on Wed, 22 May 2024
You really know how envelope the reader, a rare gift that you use to tell your story, infusing it with a you are there immersive experiencing everything your protagonist is going through.
Well done
Ray
Read full commentPosted in The 16:03 to Purgatory (Part One of Two)
tragic and cruel
Posted on Tue, 08 Feb 2011
People make bad choices everyday, but it is not our job to mete out punishment, only hope, kindness and help, anything less is vile and selfish, so sorry about your friend. Such a waste Ray, well written and neddful
Read full commentPosted in BLUE BIRD ( PART SIX )
Well that was R rated
Posted on Tue, 08 Feb 2011
So glad you held back on the description, i got the drift. Guys and sex, that is our weakness. She probably robbed him of more than his dignity, well done Ray
Read full commentPosted in BLUE BIRD ( PART FIVE )
Now what
Posted on Tue, 08 Feb 2011
Poor Kate, what will she do, bad enough to lose a love one in your own country but being lost in foreign country is rife with all kinds of difficult complications. She got to track down those girls.
Guys after girls, now that's an old...
Read full commentPosted in BLUE BIRD ( PART FOUR )
oh yeah
Posted on Mon, 21 Sep 2026
im reading your story Blue Bird and have left few comments, it quite good Ray
Read full commentPosted in A Seasonal Dance
a flurry of images
Posted on Mon, 21 Sep 2026
I felt like an autumn leaf tumbling on the breeze as i read your beautiful up lifting poem. Delightful imagery and thoughtful observations
great work Ray
Read full commentPosted in A Seasonal Dance
ah oh
Posted on Sat, 05 Feb 2011
Thinking this where her brother gets into trouble, nicely written Ray
Read full commentPosted in BLUE BIRD ( PART THREE )
Things are moving along
Posted on Sat, 05 Feb 2011
Okay Lawrence what are you up to, and why haven't contacted your sister and why the nightmare, whats that about. You write of going to Spain they we write about driving to the other side of the state,mine being North Carolina. Spain feels like a...
Read full commentPosted in BLUE BIRD ( PART TWO )
It was a dream but...
Posted on Sat, 05 Feb 2011
I was wondering why she was trying to get away from him. In fact im still wondering, which is probably the best way to start a story. So far quite compelling
Ray
Read full commentPosted in BLUE BIRD ( PART ONE )
Your discovery
Posted on Tue, 10 Feb 2026
Your discovery would make a great premise for a story, an ancient craved relic buried beneath vines and moss, hidden eyes peeking out through foliage, seeing but unseen, your words clear and evocative really in flames my imagination. Thank you...
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