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Banished To Earth Book One (11)
47 “Yeah, and another thing. I can’t. I won’t leave you here by yourself. There are a lot of men out there. Can you tone down your, you know, your...
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Banished To Earth Book One (10)
turned and walked away… Blinding white light suddenly streamed through every window completely washing out the scene. When it faded the white hallway...
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Banished To Earth Book One (9)
The old warrel roared and flung itself at the mahrah as it tumbled high into the air. The moment it flew over Chases’ head, he leaped straight up,...
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Banished To Earth Book One ( 8)
Despite their penchant for cruelty toward fallen men, she loved her sisters and trusted them, and naturally assumed they felt the same. However, some...
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Banished To Earth Book One 7
Lust always ensnared men that trespassed Creichee territory. They eventually tried to take what they yearned for. Only to suffer a horrible death for...
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Book hidden away
Posted on Tue, 17 Feb 2026
In an alcove of darkness the young people find a ancient book of spells, now a witch must find her lost prize, Billy abilities are no doubt linked to the witch and the book probably Danielle too,
great read, plan to finish it wonder how...
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Brave Kids
Posted on Mon, 15 Sep 2025
looks like these have quite an adventure waiting for them, feels like i'm walking right along with them, so a mssing child's name turns up on a headstone in an unknown, land, must still be England, though english words, or name anyway. wonder id...
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A dream...
Posted on Wed, 23 Jul 2025
It's always a dream. Something dark lurking about the edges of a child's mind, soft borders there? Sadly so. Another great read, subtle with an uneasy undercurrent of malice. Sounds like the witch has selected her next victim.
Ray
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much to discuss
Posted on Fri, 17 Apr 2026
An odd discovery, a quaint harmless artefact, or a Pandora's box of darkness and peril? Read on to find out, but then we've already met the witch, so harmless artefact is out the window. But what will fly in that open window? Can't wait to find...
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thank you
Posted on Fri, 15 May 2026
Thank you, for following. I understand you are seriously ill, if my little stories offer you some brief bit of comfort or ecape, that's good, but please don't feel obligated to read my stuff if you're not up for it.
You are in my prayers...
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Time Travel
Posted on Mon, 16 Mar 2026
These kind of stories always leave my head spinning, time travel-fasinating subject, you handled well
Ray
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snappy dialogue crisp but
Posted on Wed, 22 Apr 2026
snappy dialogue crisp but detailed as usual
another good one
Ray
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Immersive
Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025
That poor child, you really took me there, with your detailed description. I was transported to an ominous world, glad to leave yet eager to return. Great Job Ray
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Compelling start
Posted on Fri, 15 May 2026
Lots of rich, effective detail transports the reader into the scene just the way it should. Looking forward to more.
Ray
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Poem comment
Posted on Fri, 15 May 2026
What a beautiful assessment of reality our place in it and what it actually is, elevating.
Ray
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