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Banished To Earth Book Two (8)
Chapter 5 27 While Silhouette showered, the others caught Trudy and Beth up on everything that had just transpired. A video game had snared Nikki’s...
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Banished To Earth Book Two (7)
“Well, that was nice,” Tucker said, helping Pry to her feet. “Ya’ coulda’ helped me too.” “You? What are you doing here?” “I’m Santa Claus. Ask Chase...
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Banished To Earth Book Two (6)
“We’re different.” He stopped mid-sentence. In perfect unison, they turned toward the ocean. Silhouette unknotted the hooded duster. “Take it, pistol...
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Banished To Earth Book Two (5)
It locked it in place until her fingers wrapped around its grip, instantly releasing it into her hand. Most importantly, this girl would not be...
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Banished To Earth Book Two (4)
Chapter Three 12 That same morning, Silhouette watched Stayner slash his way through mountainous swells as if they were smoke. Eventually, he shrank...
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thank you
Posted on Sun, 24 May 2026
Glad youre enjoying my liitle book its about 148 pages, I have about thirty pages of my third re write of book two, just about to introduce fairies into their new earth.
I'll return to the Chosen soon
Ray
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A lady Priest
Posted on Tue, 07 Apr 2026
Hope she doesn't put a target on her back, or worse get tempted from God toward darkness that can only lie and deliver corruption and death.
Another beautifully written piece a pleasure to read and learn from
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These Hunters
Posted on Tue, 29 Mar 2011
They are everywhere. To lazy to do thier digging or Hunting, crimnals all.
At least they were able to one good night, food always makes things better
Another well written piece
Ray
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Poot Nathan, if he calls for
Posted on Mon, 28 Mar 2011
Poot Nathan, if he calls for help he only attract a bear. If not, he dies a slowly pain death of deprivation.
Nicely written Ray
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Really enjoyable
Posted on Fri, 27 Mar 2026
Now that's the way I want to write, the previous chapter really drives home the threat stalking Billie and Danielle.
This is kind of prose I need to read. to hone my own meager skills.
Will certainly read more
wonderful...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (16)
Excellent
Posted on Fri, 20 Mar 2026
Your prose is wonderful, a joy to read
So the witch is 'free', but scared by evil still doomed by of death, and lust for etenal life.
Her savior her demon tormentor has done her no favors, but that was never his intent.
Again...
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Another Excellent Chapter
Posted on Mon, 28 Mar 2011
great job much enjoyed this portion loving caring people, loss fear, a desperate plan to escape and confront evil people always makes for a rousing story
Great job Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART EIGHT )
Intriguing
Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2011
So they are refugees or colonists from another world, from where and why.
Survivors struggling to adapt to a new world, great premise
Good job Ray
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Oh no, Nathan should bide his
Posted on Sat, 26 Mar 2011
Oh no, Nathan should bide his time, feign obedience then pounce at the clear opportunity
Good Dialogue nicely done
Ray
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Another abusive parent, so
Posted on Wed, 23 Mar 2011
Another abusive parent, so the Hunters don't want children on thier hunting rounds, curious.
Her father better have a good reason for beating his daughter, no there is no good reason for beating a child. He's a butt!
Well, so much...
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