45 The others exchanged confused looks. “It’s a whole thing, guys,” Silhouette said, “Chase, I mean, Davin here is just a big ol’ lock box of secrets...
42 The sweet, intoxicating smell of hot chocolate swelled his lungs, cleansed his mind and cradled his heart the moment he stepped beneath the great...
your writing is great, easy to read, yet full of depth and detail. You really set the mood and deliver the story in not just an informative, but quite an entertaining way
Billies is about to fall down a rabbit hole it seems
a bit more good fortune
Posted on Fri, 08 Apr 2011
it seems they've made a new friend, crystals? Wonder if the nice lady has bigger plans for. besides healing,
Carried me right along like any good story should
enjoyed Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART TWENTY FOUR )
Another Excellent Chapter
Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2011
So glad they caught a break, exciting, and satisfying
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART TWENTY TWO )
Billie
Posted on Sun, 18 Sep 2022
your writing is great, easy to read, yet full of depth and detail. You really set the mood and deliver the story in not just an informative, but quite an entertaining way
Billies is about to fall down a rabbit hole it seems
Great...
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part One of Six)
good thing he can swim
Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2011
looks like he might make his escape. Maybe he can find help to free the others
fun read
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART TWENTY ONE )
desperation
Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2011
dont blame him i'd try to escape too, never understood how some people would want to enslave others, no empathy whatsoever.
good job Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART TWENTY ONE )
Thoughtful child
Posted on Wed, 06 Apr 2011
I have been in caves can'timagine living in one, children never want mind their parents, but freedom is hard thing to live without.
Nicely written enjoyed
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART TWENTY )
Oh no
Posted on Fri, 29 May 2026
Poor Danielle ,that slamming sound her body flung on the alter, the gates of Hell snapping shut, don't know, except its not good.
Another thrilling piece so atmospheric, chilling, inevitable miserable.
Great Read loved it Ray
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (23)
Another Excellent Chapter
Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2024
Beautifully written, compelling universal premise, as well as existentially demanding , what are we, how are we.
Greif can drive people to places unknown. Loss and the certainty of it is a horror unto itself.
Wonderful piece...
Read full commentPosted in Ghostbot (Part One of Two)
settled in
Posted on Wed, 06 Apr 2011
maybe they can get some rest, looks like it.
Lucky horses. well done
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART NINETEEN )
Short but sweet
Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2011
Ivan seems to be in good way, hope it holds.
Thinking the night will bring danger
Nicely done
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART EIGHTEEN )
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