By Curtis Ray Jones Fri, 17 Jul 2015 503 reads Chrysalis Emerald caverns carved in light, honeycombs of sheer delight And I, a joyful wonderer be, in...
Chapter 59 99 ‘I did that?’ Davin thought… ‘Not so dead after all. How? He made me mad. I lashed out. I just don’t know how. Anyway I hurt his head…...
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Heart pounding chase
Posted on Sat, 04 Jul 2026
Desperate to get away, all the while being funneling onto a killing floor it seems, good stuff. Death looming over our little hero, surely this is not the end, maybe a slight chance, a little peek, a bit of forbidden knowledge leaking out giving...
My Aunt developed severe mental problems as she aged. She was a brilliant student, but her inner wiring went, well, haywire years before she died, which was odd since my father never learned to read and apparently experienced some of the same...
You got me. Great twist. Addison needed for a moment to reach out from her mezzanine existence to help another embrace and appreciate her life. Sweet ghost story not too many of them, wonderful read Ray
Another well-written piece, your attention to detail is remarkable and instructive, I'm thinking Jenny is about to bump into something that might bump back or nudge her toward some truth about her self and her troubled homelife
Its good kids don't see the world like adults, but the world does not care about their innocence or misplaced confidence in the security the adults provide. When trouble comes, too often they don't see until it's too late, that grownups have to...
Glad Nathen has decided to strike out and find his family. Ben will peobably go with, wonder whats going on out side, have to read on and find out great read Ray
What you are going through is miserable, scary, I pray it passes you, unharmed. Venting is healthy, your experience your illness is your the share or keep, as you see fit. It takes great courage to share such pain, so wish you did not have to...
Just how much power do these pretty stones possess, could be more to them than they know. Love the accent and interaction between the characters, story chugging right along
Heart pounding chase
Posted on Sat, 04 Jul 2026
Desperate to get away, all the while being funneling onto a killing floor it seems, good stuff. Death looming over our little hero, surely this is not the end, maybe a slight chance, a little peek, a bit of forbidden knowledge leaking out giving...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (27)
Great chapter
Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2026
Really enjoyed it. Is Danielle still alive? Just what will the witch do to Billy? Stay tuned to find out' completely tuned in, Ray Great work
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (26)
grim but well written
Posted on Sun, 26 Jul 2015
My Aunt developed severe mental problems as she aged. She was a brilliant student, but her inner wiring went, well, haywire years before she died, which was odd since my father never learned to read and apparently experienced some of the same...
Read full commentPosted in huts 5 (rewrite)
Clever
Posted on Sun, 23 Oct 2022
You got me. Great twist. Addison needed for a moment to reach out from her mezzanine existence to help another embrace and appreciate her life. Sweet ghost story not too many of them, wonderful read Ray
Read full commentPosted in The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part Two of Two)
Another
Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2022
Another well-written piece, your attention to detail is remarkable and instructive, I'm thinking Jenny is about to bump into something that might bump back or nudge her toward some truth about her self and her troubled homelife
Great read...
Read full commentPosted in The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part One of Two)
Well at least they got a respite
Posted on Mon, 02 May 2011
Now on to find his family, it won't be easy but that's what makes a great story
Good job Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART FORTY SIX )
Youngin's
Posted on Thu, 21 Apr 2011
Its good kids don't see the world like adults, but the world does not care about their innocence or misplaced confidence in the security the adults provide. When trouble comes, too often they don't see until it's too late, that grownups have to...
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART FORTY FOUR )
now what
Posted on Thu, 21 Apr 2011
Glad Nathen has decided to strike out and find his family. Ben will peobably go with, wonder whats going on out side, have to read on and find out great read Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART FORTY THREE )
Brutal honesty
Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2026
What you are going through is miserable, scary, I pray it passes you, unharmed. Venting is healthy, your experience your illness is your the share or keep, as you see fit. It takes great courage to share such pain, so wish you did not have to...
Read full commentPosted in Torment
Hum crystals
Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2011
Just how much power do these pretty stones possess, could be more to them than they know. Love the accent and interaction between the characters, story chugging right along
Good Read Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART FORTY TWO )
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