By Curtis Ray Jones Fri, 17 Jul 2015 503 reads Chrysalis Emerald caverns carved in light, honeycombs of sheer delight And I, a joyful wonderer be, in...
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now what
Posted on Thu, 21 Apr 2011
Glad Nathen has decided to strike out and find his family. Ben will peobably go with, wonder whats going on out side, have to read on and find out great read Ray
What you are going through is miserable, scary, I pray it passes you, unharmed. Venting is healthy, your experience your illness is your the share or keep, as you see fit. It takes great courage to share such pain, so wish you did not have to...
Just how much power do these pretty stones possess, could be more to them than they know. Love the accent and interaction between the characters, story chugging right along
Nathen has fell in with some good folk, maybe thet will help him find his family f the bad Hunters will stir clear and leave the good people alone, butb that's not happening is it?
now what
Posted on Thu, 21 Apr 2011
Glad Nathen has decided to strike out and find his family. Ben will peobably go with, wonder whats going on out side, have to read on and find out great read Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART FORTY THREE )
Brutal honesty
Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2026
What you are going through is miserable, scary, I pray it passes you, unharmed. Venting is healthy, your experience your illness is your the share or keep, as you see fit. It takes great courage to share such pain, so wish you did not have to...
Read full commentPosted in Torment
Hum crystals
Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2011
Just how much power do these pretty stones possess, could be more to them than they know. Love the accent and interaction between the characters, story chugging right along
Good Read Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART FORTY TWO )
Nathen is well
Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2011
Nathen has fell in with some good folk, maybe thet will help him find his family f the bad Hunters will stir clear and leave the good people alone, butb that's not happening is it?
Wonderful read enjoyed Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART FORTY ONE )
Another Excellent Chapter
Posted on Fri, 12 Jun 2026
Your prose is clean and powerful, your characters heartbreaking and deeply relatable, enjoying immensely
A clash of wills and magic is on the horizon looking forward to more
Ray
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (25)
another good read
Posted on Mon, 18 Apr 2011
Looks like things might finally be coming together, Jonah is the problem her.
Surely his men will soon turn on him
Good Job Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART THIRTY SEVEN )
thank goodness for the kindness of strangers
Posted on Mon, 18 Apr 2011
So sad to be rescued only to have it dashed by horrible news
If only she new was still alive, good read
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART THIRTY SIX )
Another Excellent Chapter
Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2026
your writing skills are impressive loving your story so far
Ray
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (24)
So beautiful so sad but strong
Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2026
your inner courage shines through like sunshine in this lovely hearbreaking poem
my heart breaks that you having to go though such pain
you are in my prayers, we are eternal Gods love is waiting for you now, the cross
Ray
Read full commentPosted in Torment
Another Excellent Chapter
Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022
That was fun, well written and satisfying.
Thank you for sharing a great story
Ray
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Six of Six)
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