45 The others exchanged confused looks. “It’s a whole thing, guys,” Silhouette said, “Chase, I mean, Davin here is just a big ol’ lock box of secrets...
42 The sweet, intoxicating smell of hot chocolate swelled his lungs, cleansed his mind and cradled his heart the moment he stepped beneath the great...
Magic carpet ride, and no doubt a wizard. Is Billy an intruder? Is he a summoned guest? Prey, food or ingredient for some hellish brew? Exciting prose, fun to read, easy to see and feel.
Yea for Arvid
Posted on Thu, 14 Apr 2011
They need to take out Jonah.
another compelling chapter good read
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART THIRTY ONE )
its all so sad
Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2011
sure they all find some joy or at least relief. Nicely told story grim but realistic
good job
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART THIRTY )
oops
Posted on Tue, 02 Jun 2026
Sorry about that
Read full commentPosted in Banished To Earth Book One (40)
They need a plan
Posted on Tue, 12 Apr 2011
When and if they find her how will they free her, a good Mother will find a way
very emotional Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART TWENTY NINE )
Oh no that sucks
Posted on Tue, 12 Apr 2011
Surely she won't have cook her own horse, thats awful, now i want kick Jonahs butt
Intense Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART TWENTY EIGHT )
Oh Bella
Posted on Mon, 11 Apr 2011
Jonah is going to get his i hope, another exciting chapter
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART TWENTY SEVEN )
Short but menacing
Posted on Mon, 11 Apr 2011
Now what is this joker up to.
nice tease
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART TWENTY SIX )
Smart horse
Posted on Mon, 11 Apr 2011
Good thing Shadow and Ivan didn't fall into the pit. Glad Joshua had a stroke of like being found by a good man rather Jonah
Nicely written
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART TWENTY FIVE )
Ah Oh
Posted on Wed, 21 Sep 2022
Magic carpet ride, and no doubt a wizard. Is Billy an intruder? Is he a summoned guest? Prey, food or ingredient for some hellish brew? Exciting prose, fun to read, easy to see and feel.
Another great effort really enjoyed
Ray
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Two of Six)
a bit more good fortune
Posted on Fri, 08 Apr 2011
it seems they've made a new friend, crystals? Wonder if the nice lady has bigger plans for. besides healing,
Carried me right along like any good story should
enjoyed Ray
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