Radiating from the center of the solar system, Sol’s light filtered through Earth’s atmosphere and gathered against the great oak’s faint blue force...
“There are roots, and then there are roots.” “We’re not talking natural roots, are we?” Davin stepped back, admiring the playful living light show. “...
Another Excellent Chapter
Posted on Fri, 12 Jun 2026
Your prose is clean and powerful, your characters heartbreaking and deeply relatable, enjoying immensely
A clash of wills and magic is on the horizon looking forward to more
Ray
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (25)
another good read
Posted on Mon, 18 Apr 2011
Looks like things might finally be coming together, Jonah is the problem her.
Surely his men will soon turn on him
Good Job Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART THIRTY SEVEN )
thank goodness for the kindness of strangers
Posted on Mon, 18 Apr 2011
So sad to be rescued only to have it dashed by horrible news
If only she new was still alive, good read
Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART THIRTY SIX )
Another Excellent Chapter
Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2026
your writing skills are impressive loving your story so far
Ray
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (24)
So beautiful so sad but strong
Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2026
your inner courage shines through like sunshine in this lovely hearbreaking poem
my heart breaks that you having to go though such pain
you are in my prayers, we are eternal Gods love is waiting for you now, the cross
Ray
Read full commentPosted in Torment
Another Excellent Chapter
Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022
That was fun, well written and satisfying.
Thank you for sharing a great story
Ray
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Six of Six)
Strange
Posted on Tue, 19 Apr 2011
Now what is Brad going on about? So far Nathan's luck is holding out if could reunite with his family maybe later I hope
good job Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART FORTY )
Interesting
Posted on Tue, 19 Apr 2011
Glad Nathan has found some decent people to help him. Now JOnah is this out there maybe a bear eats him
good job Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART THIRTY NINE )
Poor Bella
Posted on Tue, 19 Apr 2011
She's got a lot to learn and she learing it the hard way it seems
Nicey written Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART THIRTY EIGHT )
Another Excellent Chapter
Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2011
Oh no maybe the tree will do something just not sure what tree can do, except uproot and walk like the tree in Lord of the Rings
exciting Ray
Read full commentPosted in THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART THIRTY FIVE )
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