The ABCtales Superpoem Challenge – The Final Outcome

Huge thanks to Turlough for his brilliant idea, his very generous donation to ABCTales, and to all ABCTalers who joined in. I hope you'll agree that the result was most definitely worth it!

 

 

 

 

The ABCtales Superpoem Challenge – The Final Outcome

 

It delights me to be able to announce that our Superpoem is complete. Many, many thanks to everybody who entered a few lines, and to everyone who took the time to read about it even if they didn’t put pen to paper themselves. Well done everybody!

 

The end result is a poem on the theme of ‘Memory’ that everyone at ABCtales can be proud of as it effectively represents us all. It was compiled on the same sort of basis as the Consequences parlour game where no single author knew what any of the other authors had written.

 

You can read it below, first of all as the full picnic without interruptions, and then beneath that I have broken it up on an author-by-author basis. 

 

Please feel free to comment. I’d love to know what you think of it.

 

 

 

The ABCtales Superpoem – The Full Picnic

 

If you remembered, what terror would be raised from its grave? 

Which kind soul buried there instead?

One

word

after

another

not

connected

in

any

way

cut

ups

thanks

to

Tristan

Tzara

a

Frankenpoem

Half-lit corridors

quiescent over time

where thoughts roam

metaphor and allegory

serving their penance

thieves of always

When it’s time, it's time. 

Every treasure floats free of the wreckage. 

Found memories are Jacob’s ladder.

I quite often go down memory lane.

I find it comforting; it keeps me sane.

Memories play tricks on you.  

Like a lover you once trusted, they slip through your heart.

Melt away

Every day

Mindful of now;

Old fears dissolve

Replaced by

Yearning, let there be tomorrow,

Did it happen to me or did I read it?

You’d think I’d know or disbelieve it.

Fragrance of a blood red rose,

gives clarity and energy to this

flower in its purest form.

Madeleines don’t taste the same

Marathons have another name

Memory’s not to blame

When infamy replaces fame

words like clouds

of breath in cold air

our hearts' warmth 

for all to see

soon gone

Memory

Transparent negative

yours

mine

perception

examined

facts differs

conclusion 

debatable

emotions engaged

argument inevitable

reconciliation 

uncertain

In memory we discover ourselves.

United here are the words of poets,

A cascade of wistful voices.

A quick, fickle flash - yes,

remembering's a newt

in a pool of noon sunlight

on the A40.

Remember your memories, hang onto them tight, 

like the warmest of blankets on the coldest of nights.

Memory slides flicker, not in order

Faded, enhanced, the threads of how you lived

deep

within my heart

day or night

seeing…listening…smell…taste…touching

memories 

with you

Navigating life’s storms and reefs

My past is not a safe harbour 

But a wild Atlantic lighthouse 

 

 

 

 

The ABCtales Superpoem – Author by Author

 

If you remembered, what terror would be raised from its grave? 

Which kind soul buried there instead?

Entry 1, by SoulFire77

 

One

word

after

another

not

connected

in

any

way

cut

ups

thanks

to

Tristan

Tzara

a

Frankenpoem

Entry 2, by Anonymous A

 

Half-lit corridors

quiescent over time

where thoughts roam

metaphor and allegory

serving their penance

thieves of always

Entry 3, by Marandina

 

When it’s time, it's time. 

Every treasure floats free of the wreckage. 

Found memories are Jacob’s ladder.

Entry 4, by Celticman

 

I quite often go down memory lane.

I find it comforting; it keeps me sane.

Entry 5, by luigi _pagano

 

Memories play tricks on you.  

Like a lover you once trusted, they slip through your heart.

Entry 6, by GlosKat

 

Melt away

Every day

Mindful of now;

Old fears dissolve

Replaced by

Yearning, let there be tomorrow,

Entry 7, by Anonymous B

 

Did it happen to me or did I read it?

You’d think I’d know or disbelieve it.

Entry 8, by Anonymous C

 

Fragrance of a blood red rose,

gives clarity and energy to this

flower in its purest form.

Entry 9, by skinner_jennifer

 

Madeleines don’t taste the same

Marathons have another name

Memory’s not to blame

When infamy replaces fame

Entry 10, by Lille Dante

 

words like clouds

of breath in cold air

our hearts' warmth 

for all to see

soon gone

Entry 11, by Anonymous D

 

Memory

Transparent negative

yours

mine

perception

examined

facts differs

conclusion 

debatable

emotions engaged

argument inevitable

reconciliation 

uncertain

Entry 12, by Penny4athought

 

In memory we discover ourselves.

United here are the words of poets,

A cascade of wistful voices.

Entry 13, by Jennifer

 

A quick, fickle flash - yes,

remembering's a newt

in a pool of noon sunlight

on the A40.

Entry 14, by queen beatle

 

Remember your memories, hang onto them tight, 

like the warmest of blankets on the coldest of nights.

Entry 15, by Mark P

 

Memory slides flicker, not in order

Faded, enhanced, the threads of how you lived

Entry 16, by Anonymous E

 

deep

within my heart

day or night

seeing…listening…smell…taste…touching

memories 

with you

Entry 17, by Anonymous F

 

Navigating life’s storms and reefs

My past is not a safe harbour 

But a wild Atlantic lighthouse 

Entry 18, by Turlough

 

 

 

 

Comments

Great to be part of that, maybe this could be a regular feature?

 

That's nice to know Mark. I'd certainly be happy to do another one at some point in the future.

Turlough

Well I think that turned out really well. It hangs together beautifully with all our common threads and I enjoyed reading it over a couple of times, one to return to. I do love team work. Well done everyone and thank you to Turlough and Penny too for the original idea.

 

I agree Jane. I think it's come out really well. It's nice that we can all work together. Every entry seems to complement the others. 

And thank you for your bit. 

Turlough

Expertly woven together, a truly superpoem. Well done, Turlough.

 

Thank you Luigi, and thank you for the words you contributed.

Turlough

Snatch a thought, ink it down and share.

Even more delight to be had spotting the telling style of Hey Nonny Mouse authors, think I've managed to pick out a couple.

Cheers Turlough, enjoyed.

Best

L

 

 

I've been trying to identify the secret people too. I thought one of them might have been me but that couldn't be possible.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Turlough

This was my favourite - by Mark P :

"Remember your memories, hang onto them tight, 

like the warmest of blankets on the coldest of nights."

It's only going to be 7 degrees here overnight, so I shall be hugging a few memories smiley

This was a great idea, well done Turlough for doing the collating.

 

I'm glad you enjoyed it Kat, but oh those Thracian winters!

Turlough

Yes those wine dark seas are jolly nippy at the moment.

 

So you're not in Krichim yet? The tortoise continues to be awkward I take it.

Turlough

Oh that Thrace !  Or is it the same one ?  I was thinking of the Odyssey.  Is that in Bulgaria now ?  My geography is terrible.

No tortoise trouble. He's awake (unless he's hibernated again, it really is nippy here.  But he's got underfloor heating in his little house in the garden).  The house owners seem happy to keep it off the market for now.  I have had an offer on mine, but it's far too low, so am still here in Plovdiv.

Thanks for asking !

 

The wee man on the internet said this…

Thrace is a historical and geographical region in Southeast Europe, divided among modern-day southern Bulgaria (Northern Thrace), northeastern Greece (Western Thrace), and European Turkey (East Thrace). Bounded by the Balkan Mountains, Aegean Sea, and Black Sea, this region was anciently inhabited by Thracian tribes and served as a crucial cultural crossroads between Europe and Asia.

And I said…

The Bulgarian bit is just the other side of the Stara Planina (Balkan) mountain range from us, its largest settlement is Plovdiv and the winegrowers of the Thracian Plain have been responsible for some of the best wine I have ever tasted. I saw your reference to ‘wine dark seas’ and wondered if the stress of possible relocation had driven you to the bottle.

Also…

Tortoises roam wild there.

So…

If you moved there you could just release any obstructive tortoises back into nature and all would be well.

Turlough

Not quite driven to drink yet.  The stress of relocation has driven me to quoting Homer. 

Also, I did see free range tortoises in Turkey when I was out riding.  I was on a Haflinger pony which are funny little things and look like they belong in The Hobbit. They're not keen on going at any speed other than an amble, in fact the tortoises were overtaking us.

Unfortunately it doesn't seem possible in the Blogs section to make any feedback as 'great' but please consider your geography lesson above as so marked.  Really interesting.  I've just always thought of Thrace as in Greece. (I did notice South Thrace seemed to be missing though.  Maybe it doesn't exist, like South Riding in Yorkshire).

 

Aye, it's funny how we miss the clicky feedback thing. I'd have clicked your tortoise trekking tale too.

South Thrace is somewhere beneath Watford Gap and consequently nobody really cares or even mentions it. Apparently the story goes that Odysseus and his mates had trouble getting into a wine bar because they all had trainers on so they hid in a wooden Ford Escort XR3i with alloy wheels and a fluffy nodding driver from Billericay. Tracy, his lady indoors, was furious.

Turlough

it was super,  your superpoem, Turlough. 

 

You are one eighteenth of the superpoem CM. That's part of the reason.

Turlough

I loved this! Thank you for allowing me to be a part of it!

 

Many thanks to you too, not only for taking part but for being the first to take part.

I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.

Turlough

It turned out so well Turlough; nice to be involved in something collaborative in these fractious times. And a pleasingly positive poem. I'm in there - somewhere.

 

 

You are indeed in there wwja, preserved in the annals of ABC Tales history for all time. The collaboration and the outcome, as you say, were both very pleasing.

Thank you very much for taking part. There’ll probably be another Superpoem eventually, so I hope you’ll be part of that one too.

Turlough