First chapters

First chapters of some possible novels, I'd welcome feedback on which you'd like to see me write

Madness is all in the mind: Chapter 1: first day in the madhouse

I hadn't expected the garden. Not a real, growing, colourful garden, crammed with life-sustaining sunshine.

Brian Wilson was ten years old: Chapter 1

Brian Wilson was 10 years, 3 months and 22 days old when he realised that his dreams were different from other childrens’.
Cherry

The UnSleep - Chapter 1

2 a.m. I stared at the wall in front of me, nothing better to do. The wall was plain, no paintings, no pictures, just greying white. Dull and ever-so-slowly ageing.

The books in the Window

The books in the window have caught my imagination since the first time I saw them. They're in the front window of a house I pass on the way to work, parallel to Brighton seafront.