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I have 1182 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2724066 times and 1208 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1674 of my 15,608 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1707 votes

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Angel 51 (good cop, bad cop)

Angel quickly established a routine with Lisa and Adam. They quickly established their own counter-routine which included staying up all night and...
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Angel 50 (dinner and dates)

After Angel fed the twins her nipples were chaffed, but she wanted to make sure they had settled. To distract herself, she picked up the remote and...
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Angel 49 (getting acquainted)

Angel heard the click of a switch from the room next to her and the bump and sound of a hoover. The twins didn’t notice, but it buoyed Angel, the...
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Angel 48 (new beginnings)

The Caribbean nurse came to see Angel and her twins before she left the ward. Church and Sarah stood by the door waiting to escort her back to prison...
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Angel 47 (scrap)

Angel could see from her mum’s face that Karen was in huff when she spotted Pizza Face. Karen made a point of cuddling Lisa and kissing her wee face...

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1674 of my comments have received 1707 Great Feedback votes

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we're good at building

Posted on Tue, 23 Aug 2022

we're good at building oursleves up and knocking ourselves down. The ethical worry of non-NHS NHS is a worry. But you've got enough to worry about. 

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Posted in Chemo 6

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Good question. I dnn't know

Posted on Tue, 23 Aug 2022

Good question. I dnn't know if it rains in heaven. What lies beyond the last breath? I'm not sure either. Factor in faith and the kindess of strangers? I'm not sure about that either. Many questions. Many answer. Multifaceted poem. 

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Posted in Does it Rain in Heaven?

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I changed it, insert. Change

Posted on Sat, 20 Aug 2022

I changed it, insert. Change anything you like. I will if I edit. 

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 73

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makes sense of stigma. 

Posted on Mon, 22 Aug 2022

makes sense of stigma. 

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Posted in Stop the stigma

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I thhoght all cigarettes were

Posted on Sun, 21 Aug 2022

I thhoght all cigarettes were emergency ones. The Solomon touch is weird enogh to be true. 

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Posted in Thirteen Letters. Chapter Six.

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I guess marriage was part of

Posted on Sun, 21 Aug 2022

I guess marriage was part of the plan. 

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Posted in Thirteen Letters. Chapter Five.

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blessed indeed. 

Posted on Sun, 21 Aug 2022

blessed indeed. 

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Posted in Thirteen Letters. Chapter Four.

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I was one of a family of five

Posted on Sun, 21 Aug 2022

I was one of a family of five. My mum lost two (perhaps three kids) I was too young to count. God, how did she do it, I ask now. You provide some answers. 

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Posted in Any room for a small one?

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sadly true. 

Posted on Sun, 21 Aug 2022

sadly true. 

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Posted in The war

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if you don't ask you don't

Posted on Sat, 20 Aug 2022

if you don't ask you don't get. I won't be tryng that at home. 

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Posted in Thirteen Letters. Chapter Two.

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