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I forgot to comment before

Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2022

I forgot to comment before but was struck by the powerful message in this cri de coeur - much food for thought and some very chilling imagery, especially 'your country needs you'. Awful thought, and as in Maradina's inspiration, I fervently hope...

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Posted in rage, rage against the Dying of your Rights

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We're all very invested in

Posted on Mon, 27 Jun 2022

We're all very invested in them Jane!

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Posted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - 16

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I'm glad all went so well and

Posted on Tue, 28 Jun 2022

I'm glad all went so well and that you enjoyed meeting up with old friends Grace

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Posted in The Journey. Part Three.

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Just found this final part. I

Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022

Just found this final part. I can totally imagine the murdoch-type newspaper 'articles' on the social responsibility of euthanasia. So bleak and very very believable.

One small typo:

also a place where people could took matters into...

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Posted in The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 3 of 3)

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Hurrah for Freddie and his

Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022

Hurrah for Freddie and his cheerios! What a lovely story monodemo - thank you for posting!

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Posted in Freddie

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bleak, but beautifully

Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022

bleak, but beautifully observed

'Instead she spent more and more time in the confines of their expansive garden at The Driffold, brutalising the flowering shrubs and applying an exhausting zero tolerance approach to weeds.' 

I think...

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Posted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - 15

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Beautiful Jenny. hope you're

Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022

Beautiful Jenny. hope you're feeling better today?

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Posted in Sweet Violet

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Firstly your final sentence

Posted on Sun, 19 Jun 2022

Firstly your final sentence is cut off halfway through? Perhaps this needs to be split into two parts

Secondly: '"YOU DIDN'T FIND THE WAND, IT FOUND YOU, AND HELPED YOU GET HERE BECAUSE IT WANTS US HELP SOME MORE."

because it wants...

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Posted in part 12

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Thanks for checking about the

Posted on Sun, 19 Jun 2022

Thanks for checking about the picture Grace. I used a beautiful pink rose on social media for your story which I thought suitable as it was a pink coffin. A photo of your mum and her sister would be a wonderful illustration but perhaps check with...

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Posted in The Journey. Part One.

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Well this is an interesting

Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022

Well this is an interesting and unexpected second part!

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Posted in The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 2 of 3)

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