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What a shame you couldn't
Posted on Sat, 16 Jul 2022
What a shame you couldn't mark your sapling in some way Jenny. i'm sure it's very big now - silver birches grow fast - and I think the rain is coming on Wednesday and I for one will be going out into my garden when it does! Thank you for another...
Read full commentPosted in Silver Birch
sounds - and looks wonderful.
Posted on Fri, 15 Jul 2022
sounds - and looks wonderful. I'm putting it on my list of places to visit. thank you!
Read full commentPosted in St Audrey's Bay Waterfall
Brilliant dialogue, both
Posted on Fri, 15 Jul 2022
Brilliant dialogue, both spoken and unspoken, and a sense that some storm is about to break. Lovely to see another apisode of this one - thank you!
Read full commentPosted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - 19
It looks as if it's formatted
Posted on Fri, 15 Jul 2022
It looks as if it's formatted for a poem - how strange! Doesn't detract from the reading at all though Congratulations on your Story of the Week Jean, and keep on writing
Read full commentPosted in Chemo 3
What a wonderful piece. You
Posted on Thu, 14 Jul 2022
What a wonderful piece. You write about your grandmother and uncle with such love (you mentioned her in an earlier piece I think). How nice for her to be surrounded by her family like that A very well deserved set of cherries - congratulations...
Read full commentPosted in Paddy
How amazing for you Jenny -
Posted on Mon, 11 Jul 2022
How amazing for you Jenny - you're so lucky! Do please try to take a pic for us
Read full commentPosted in Unexpected Guests
This is beautiful - well done
Posted on Sat, 09 Jul 2022
This is beautiful - well done!
Read full commentPosted in Twilight Zone
I meant cord as opposed to
Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022
I meant cord as opposed to chord which I think is musical?
Read full commentPosted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part Two of Three)
Nice build up of tension this
Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022
Nice build up of tension this part
couple of things:
bulb dangling from a chord on the ceiling
Her tartan, plaid skirt
Read full commentPosted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part Two of Three)
That reads much better now.
Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022
That reads much better now. About the dialogue: one of the best pieces of writing advice I ever received was from Ewan, years ago - about trying very hard not to make things obvious - eg 'is that a dagger I see before me?'. I always remember that...
Read full commentPosted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part One of Three)
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