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I have 17 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 426408 times and 170 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1954 of my 13,996 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2002 votes

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1954 of my comments have received 2002 Great Feedback votes

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You took me right there with

Posted on Thu, 28 Jan 2021

You took me right there with you - thank you, and congratulations on the very well deserved pick!

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Posted in A Secret Forest

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Onemore my cat did EXACTLY

Posted on Mon, 25 Jan 2021

Onemore my cat did EXACTLY the same thing! 

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Posted in A Day in the Life

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I don't remember the social

Posted on Sat, 09 Jan 2021

I don't remember the social worker having a name before - perhaps you could add her job along with her name when she's first mentioned in this part? I'm really enjoying this Di - please keep going!

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Posted in part 4

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Ladybell, please don't worry

Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021

Ladybell, please don't worry about giving the wrong impression - 20 is still very young. I think we all assumed you were UK based and when we say 'school' here we mean actual school (4 - 18) whereas in many other countries it can also mean...

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Posted in How do you forgive a parent?

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Ladybell I'm so sorry to read

Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021

Ladybell I'm so sorry to read about your worries which, as you say, must be amplified in the current situation. There are supposed to be measures in place where if you are in an abusive situation (and abuse isn't just physical) you absolutely don...

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Posted in How do you forgive a parent?

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Just read this for the first

Posted on Sat, 02 Jan 2021

Just read this for the first time. It's beautifully done Di. You really capture the child's eye view of events in this piece (which I think I said about the previous part!). It's so sad. Do keep on writing!

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Posted in part 3 (redrafted)

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yes, you have to be carefukl

Posted on Sun, 10 Jan 2021

yes, you have to be carefukl with some things don't you, and others not so much. But it's nice your animals had a treat at least! 

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Posted in It Goes In The Fridge With Good Intensions ...........

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That's a charming little

Posted on Sat, 09 Jan 2021

That's a charming little rhyme Rhiannon - and it would lend itself so well to being read out loud, with pictures and actions too - well done!

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Posted in Imagine …

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This is our Poem of the Week

Posted on Mon, 04 Jan 2021

This is our Poem of the Week - Congratulations!

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Posted in Memento

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Another beautiful and very

Posted on Fri, 08 Jan 2021

Another beautiful and very moving piece - thank you onemore

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Posted in Night With Her Train Of Stars

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