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I have 268 stories published in 28 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1287061 times and 361 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1683 of my 5,235 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1720 votes

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Paul

I am a Brummie living in North Somerset who loves to write but gets distracted with other things. I enjoy horror/fantasy and anything that provokes original thought.

My literary heroes are Clive Barker, Stephen King, Edgar Allan Poe and HP Lovecraft.

Everyone should read George Orwell's Nineteen Eighty-four .

I have work published by AlienBuddha Press, Loft Books, BlackBough Poems, DarkWinter Literary Magazine and Paragraph Planet.

You can find me on SoundCloud at https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685

on Twitter at https://twitter.com/BeeRummie

Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/beerummie/

at Bluesky @marandina.bsky.social

and at Threads https://www.threads.net/@beerummie

 

1683 of my comments have received 1720 Great Feedback votes

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There's a lot of historical

Posted on Tue, 17 Oct 2023

There's a lot of historical and political knowledge in here making it such an interesting read. Politics are complex in the Middle East but, in essence, yes ongoing repression will lead to dire consequences. The whole things seems to be...

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Posted in Ancient and Modern Tales : Past Present and Future : Alfred N.Muggins Tells a Story!

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Audio version added at: https

Posted on Thu, 12 Oct 2023

Audio version added at: https://soundcloud.com/user-62051685/this-england

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Posted in This England

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That's another brave piece of

Posted on Thu, 12 Oct 2023

That's another brave piece of writing. Cancer appears to be a slippery foe. As always, Jean, people in a similar situation will read this and find it helpful that someone can articulate with clarity what's happening along with options and...

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Posted in A LITTLE BIT INTERESTING

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Cleverly done, Rhiannon. A

Posted on Wed, 11 Oct 2023

Cleverly done, Rhiannon. A poem of moving parts that come together to tell an entertaining story. Paul :) 

 

[Think that should say "dinner" in the first line] 

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Posted in 6 (?) to dinner

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"Goblins in Grieg" We should

Posted on Thu, 12 Oct 2023

"Goblins in Grieg" We should all go to the Hall of the Mountain King given a chance.

As creative a poem as I'll see today. Nicely done, Ewan. Paul

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Posted in Music

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"Facts and experiments tucked

Posted on Thu, 05 Oct 2023

"Facts and experiments tucked away in memory
for further understanding,
like my attempt at explaining what a shadow is."

You capture the mystery and joy of explaining the world to 4-year-olds. It's what being a parent/...

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Posted in The puzzle of shadows

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"...as I gaze upon

Posted on Sun, 08 Oct 2023

"...as I gaze upon

upper levels of sky

where clouds

have freedom to fly."

 

A beautiful finale to a beautiful poem. I could see those maple-leaf trees, Richard.

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Posted in A Taste of Autumn

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"...Wolf knows secrets...sees

Posted on Mon, 09 Oct 2023

"...Wolf knows secrets...sees ancient

tree spirits communication with

rivulets..."
Evocative and atmospheric. A dramatic poem, for sure. Enjoyed. Paul :)

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Posted in Through Wolf Eyes

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"...we fall from dreamy

Posted on Tue, 10 Oct 2023

"...we fall from dreamy

waterfall into flowing

inspirational rivers of

thought.."

A lovely anaology and a lingering optimism amongst your words. Nicely done, of course. Paul

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Posted in Curious Magic

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Not sure the Tchaikovsky

Posted on Wed, 04 Oct 2023

Not sure the Tchaikovsky Group has the same menace about it but I know what you mean. Hopefully Alfred will get his trip to Timbuctou soon. It's a long way, you know.. 

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Posted in Holidays in Timbuctou, by Alfred N.Muggins (rogue reporter!)

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