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385 of my comments have received 382 Great Feedback votes
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Seeringly vivid, you
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2016
Seeringly vivid, you communicate this unbearable pain in such a way that we are all with you both, standing with you on each replay. My thoughts go out to both of you.
I like the visual quality here. It feels like a painting with blocks of stong colour and some sort of sleeping narraive connecting them. Really interesting voice, giving imperatives to self - or is it some sort of controlling external voice? ...
Seeringly vivid, you
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2016
Seeringly vivid, you communicate this unbearable pain in such a way that we are all with you both, standing with you on each replay. My thoughts go out to both of you.
Read full commentPosted in The Silent Witness
The violence is sickening,
Posted on Sat, 25 Jun 2016
The violence is sickening, but I guess that's the point. You take us to the eye of the storm, the ebbing away a relief.
Read full commentPosted in Where people only go to work and from which they come away again at night
I like the strange and
Posted on Tue, 14 Jun 2016
I like the strange and atmospheric; the mystery of the story hinted at.
Read full commentPosted in Something Dead In The Road
I love the imagery here, a
Posted on Sun, 05 Jun 2016
I love the imagery here, a brooding state of tranformation, victim to biology. An interesting interpretation of the painting.
Read full commentPosted in Hope I (Gustav Klimt 1903)
Full of pathos, humour and
Posted on Thu, 26 May 2016
Full of pathos, humour and the ridiculousness of wealth. Such a unique piece. I love it!
Read full commentPosted in Today We Dressed Up And Pretended To Be Rich
I like the visual quality
Posted on Fri, 20 May 2016
I like the visual quality here. It feels like a painting with blocks of stong colour and some sort of sleeping narraive connecting them. Really interesting voice, giving imperatives to self - or is it some sort of controlling external voice? ...
Read full commentPosted in The imperative (Poetry Monthly)
Lovely, light and so heavy
Posted on Thu, 12 May 2016
Lovely, light and so heavy with sadness.
Read full commentPosted in Delicate
A nice reminder of the the
Posted on Sun, 01 May 2016
A nice reminder of the the Narnia subtext.
Read full commentPosted in The Allegory of Aslan’s Sacrifice
I could see this as a black
Posted on Sat, 30 Apr 2016
I could see this as a black and white film, nice sense of drama.
Read full commentPosted in The 100/1 shot
A clever riddle in this well
Posted on Sat, 23 Apr 2016
A clever riddle in this well-structured piece!
Read full commentPosted in QN 4 2DAY
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