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and 211 of my stories have been cherry picked. 385 of my 5,087 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 382 votes
A boy tends plants under a foil sky to the monotone of big-bulbed lamps humming in electric unison. White, silver, green colour this pungent world -...
I’ve given up on border control, the making and remaking of beds, there’s pleasure in surrender to the slow creep over and under the hedge. A tangle...
We are not so different, our spirits grow thin in the absence of joy, you wonder how we survive chill lives spent skipping into rocks, cracked by ice...
Really clever use of pronouns, the He giving distance and the I taking ownership. There's something truthful here that you insist the reader confronts.
This really holds the reader, rather too many adjectives in the opening for me, but i'm nit-picking as you're after advice. Welcome to ABCtales - really looking forward to reading more of your work.
I love how this mixes the
Posted on Thu, 09 Nov 2017
I love how this mixes the mundane with the profound. Startling and deeply moving.
Read full commentPosted in At the Arts Council in Manchester
Really clever use of pronouns
Posted on Sat, 07 Oct 2017
Really clever use of pronouns, the He giving distance and the I taking ownership. There's something truthful here that you insist the reader confronts.
Read full commentPosted in .12 wet dreams
This really holds the reader,
Posted on Thu, 31 Aug 2017
This really holds the reader, rather too many adjectives in the opening for me, but i'm nit-picking as you're after advice. Welcome to ABCtales - really looking forward to reading more of your work.
Read full commentPosted in Eyes
Beautiful writing!
Posted on Wed, 23 Aug 2017
Beautiful writing!
Read full commentPosted in Eliza
An engaging story, lots of
Posted on Fri, 18 Aug 2017
An engaging story, lots of intriguing characterisation.
Read full commentPosted in Amended Deep Earth
Love it! Slightly freaky -
Posted on Tue, 25 Jul 2017
Love it! Slightly freaky - but that's a good thing!
Read full commentPosted in A Letter To Remember
A great sense of energy made
Posted on Sat, 08 Jul 2017
A great sense of energy made with these rhythms.
Read full commentPosted in Festival Of Life (Freeform poem)
How wonderfully restful.
Posted on Sat, 08 Jul 2017
How wonderfully restful. Really nice use of rhyme too.
Read full commentPosted in Soothing
Haha, serves him right!
Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2017
Haha, serves him right!
Read full commentPosted in The Errorphobe
Haha! I have long greyish
Posted on Sat, 10 Jun 2017
Haha! I have long greyish hair too - if you do yours I'll do mine.
Read full commentPosted in Not Going With The Flow
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