Rhiannonw

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I have 2065 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4541469 times and 641 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Scrooge … (IP)

… began to laugh, began to grieve for those he’d hurt, and treated as dirt, began to leave his miserly misery, began to care, began to share, began...

A tick in time (Revision) (Poetry Monthly)

As encouraged by Tony, I have worked further on the rhythm of this poem, but I would value critical comment. The first version is still posted if any want to compare. [seconds ticking, flicking by …]

A tick in time (Poetry Monthly)

seconds ticking, flicking by – notches on the wall – kids grow

He Pressed On, Though Knowing

[today a a hymn looking towards Easter] He had to go to Calvary to rescue me. He travelled to Jerusalem though knowing men would there reject and...

Ensnared

Enticing coyly, words cloying, oily, teasing, easing, sleazily seizing, trickles of tickly tricking, trapping with sugary wrapping, sweetly lulling,...

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