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While the others were sleeping, Addie and Dawson had been called up to see Minister Lewington to explain their findings, before they could go and see...
Charley Farley sat on the khazi smoking on his pipe, when all of a sudden out of the blue; he had such a fright, in the depths of night a moth caught...
This is such an endearing read. Living through such a lasting relationship with a real friend who passes can be so sad. But remembering the great times had together is always the best conclusion.
Hi Paul, loved this poem, full of drama and haunting discovery. I think Po would be very grateful to think he inspired this poem. You've really captured his essence.
It seems to me Cece and St John are on different pages. I wonder if they actually talked deeply enough about having this baby. She needs to be careful, because at the moment St John holds all the cards.
I thought you captured Cece's thoughts so well in this part. I also found it fascinating how you described her as a grain of salt inside a giant mouth...a great metaphore.
Time slips away like shifting sand, that's such a fitting sentiment. We never forget those loved ones that have passed over, but time has a way of healing the sad memories, so that we only recall those good times.
Oh dear! Poor Martha has her work cut out with all this truth being revealed. So much thought has gone into this story Penny, it's been a pleasure to read.
Such a depressing future that
Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022
Such a depressing future that I hope isn't a sign of things to come Paul.
I'll look at it as just being a great imaginative story.
Jenny.
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This is such an engaging poem
Posted on Mon, 20 Jun 2022
This is such an engaging poem Richard.
Moments like this are to be cherished. Put a smile on my face. ...
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This is such an endearing
Posted on Sun, 19 Jun 2022
This is such an endearing read. Living through such a lasting relationship with a real friend who passes can be so sad. But remembering the great times had together is always the best conclusion.
This bought back memories of my own dog who...
Read full commentPosted in I Remember
It's good to beable to read
Posted on Sat, 18 Jun 2022
It's good to beable to read St John's thoughts, and how he percieves his life. You've done a great job at communicating them too.
Believable facts of a midlife crisis...that ring so true.
Still very much enjoying.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in ST Vasectomy Clinic - 14
Hi Paul, loved this poem,
Posted on Fri, 17 Jun 2022
Hi Paul, loved this poem, full of drama and haunting discovery. I think Po would be very grateful to think he inspired this poem. You've really captured his essence.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Raven Returned
Hi Jane,
Posted on Wed, 15 Jun 2022
It seems to me Cece and St John are on different pages. I wonder if they actually talked deeply enough about having this baby. She needs to be careful, because at the moment St John holds all the cards.
It's a very complex situation, that...
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I thought you captured Cece's
Posted on Mon, 13 Jun 2022
I thought you captured Cece's thoughts so well in this part. I also found it fascinating how you described her as a grain of salt inside a giant mouth...a great metaphore.
Still enjoying Jane.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - 12
Time slips away like shifting
Posted on Sun, 12 Jun 2022
Time slips away like shifting sand, that's such a fitting sentiment. We never forget those loved ones that have passed over, but time has a way of healing the sad memories, so that we only recall those good times.
Your poem was moving in...
Read full commentPosted in Anniversary
Oh dear! Poor Martha has her
Posted on Sat, 11 Jun 2022
Oh dear! Poor Martha has her work cut out with all this truth being revealed. So much thought has gone into this story Penny, it's been a pleasure to read.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 31 ( Conclusions Part 1 of 2)
There's no place like home,
Posted on Fri, 10 Jun 2022
There's no place like home, especially when there's a down pour and you're safe and dry inside.
I always feel lucky to have a roof over my head whatever the weather.
Inspiring poem Richard.
Jenny.
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