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Ben had felt so lost during the final goodbyes, now all he wanted to do, was return home. It hadn't taken him long to get back to the bay with Brigs...
As Cinnamon was observing the sky, unable to take her eyes off the spectacle above her, she suddenly heard her name in the far distance being called...
Hi insert, funnily enough If I was younger I'd go out into the garden and do a rain dance, you know like they did at Woodstock, hitting tin cans with a spoon and chanting for those rain clouds to appear,...
Very dramatic scenes in your story. Gave me the chills at what that poor woman went through. I hope that her being raped didn't have repercussions. Great storytelling though.
You describe really well just how much there is to learn about ourselves and the world we live in, from birth to death there's always something new to discover. Our home the earth always leaves me full of wonder and wanting to learn more.
Your love of nature really shines through in this part Di. I especially loved when Mary came across the blackbird, she picks the strawberry and gives it to the bird. She comes across as such a gentle child. There's also a feeling of illusion...
This is so enchanting Di. You've created such a magical world. I love all the different mushrooms with their strange features. The part where they were able to choose something to eat put a smile on my face too. ...
I had completely forgotten about this story until I found this part. You really do have a wonderful imagination Di, it takes you away to a place where anything is possible, and I'm so glad to be catching up again.
I have to say that Will is a very tolerant man. I hope Jessica treats him right, she seems hell bent on looking too deeply into situations...but then I suppose it's her inquisitive background with the job she does.
I just love a murder mystery
Posted on Sun, 17 Jul 2022
I just love a murder mystery and you've come up with a great one here Luigi.
Jenny. xx
Read full commentPosted in A Most Mysterious Murder
Hi insert, funnily enough If
Posted on Sat, 16 Jul 2022
Hi insert, funnily enough If I was younger I'd go out into the garden and do a rain dance, you know like they did at Woodstock, hitting tin cans with a spoon and chanting for those rain clouds to appear,...
Read full commentPosted in Silver Birch
Very dramatic scenes in your
Posted on Sun, 17 Jul 2022
Very dramatic scenes in your story. Gave me the chills at what that poor woman went through. I hope that her being raped didn't have repercussions. Great storytelling though.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Ultimate Revenge
I can only echo all the above
Posted on Fri, 15 Jul 2022
I can only echo all the above comments Jean. Each day is so precious.
Take care.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Chemo 3
You describe really well just
Posted on Fri, 15 Jul 2022
You describe really well just how much there is to learn about ourselves and the world we live in, from birth to death there's always something new to discover. Our home the earth always leaves me full of wonder and wanting to learn more.
...
Read full commentPosted in The Age of Discovery
This is such an inspiring
Posted on Fri, 15 Jul 2022
This is such an inspiring poem Paul. You bring to life the photo and much more with your natural flair for words.
Very much enjoyed reading and thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in St Audrey's Bay Waterfall
Your love of nature really
Posted on Fri, 08 Jul 2022
Your love of nature really shines through in this part Di. I especially loved when Mary came across the blackbird, she picks the strawberry and gives it to the bird. She comes across as such a gentle child. There's also a feeling of illusion...
Read full commentPosted in part 13
This is so enchanting Di. You
Posted on Sun, 19 Jun 2022
This is so enchanting Di. You've created such a magical world. I love all the different mushrooms with their strange features. The part where they were able to choose something to eat put a smile on my face too. ...
Read full commentPosted in part 12
I had completely forgotten
Posted on Sun, 15 May 2022
I had completely forgotten about this story until I found this part. You really do have a wonderful imagination Di, it takes you away to a place where anything is possible, and I'm so glad to be catching up again.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in part 11
Hi Luigi,
Posted on Tue, 12 Jul 2022
Hi Luigi,
I have to say that Will is a very tolerant man. I hope Jessica treats him right, she seems hell bent on looking too deeply into situations...but then I suppose it's her inquisitive background with the job she does.
Looking...
Read full commentPosted in Jessica's Life Journey (20) - An Island in the Sun
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