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I have 1259 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5281109 times and 523 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2831 of my 19,605 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2913 votes

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Dwellers of the New World Chapter Eighteen ( Pt 4 ) Into The Unknown

For a long while they continued on down the tunnel. Simon began to worry as the owl had not returned, he doubted himself as a sudden cold breeze came...

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Eighteen ( Pt 3 ) Savage Behaviour continued...

Simon dashed over to the owl, but the bird hooted and flew off to one of the entrances hooting again. “Dad!” Said Simon, “I think he wants us to...

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Eighteen ( Pt 3 ) Savage Behaviour

Outside on the moors the air became even thicker, as four figures huddled down below one of the ridges. Every so often the fog would leave a hazy...

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Eighteen ( Pt 2 ) Night Time Expedition Continued...

Simon wanted to get down too. “No son – wait till we reach the boulders.” Simon felt a sudden stroke of jealousy at Varden's independence, but knew...

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Eighteen ( Pt 2 ) Night Time Expedition

Darkness drifted across the night sky as a thick fog travelled inland, it would get thicker as the night progressed, leaving an even more unfriendly...

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2831 of my comments have received 2913 Great Feedback votes

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Hi Jane,

Posted on Wed, 15 Jun 2022

It seems to me Cece and St John are on different pages. I wonder if they actually talked deeply enough about having this baby. She needs to be careful, because at the moment St John holds all the cards.

It's a very complex situation, that...

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I thought you captured Cece's

Posted on Mon, 13 Jun 2022

I thought you captured Cece's thoughts so well in this part. I also found it fascinating how you described her as a grain of salt inside a giant mouth...a great metaphore.

Still enjoying Jane.

Jenny.

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Time slips away like shifting

Posted on Sun, 12 Jun 2022

Time slips away like shifting sand, that's such a fitting sentiment. We never forget those loved ones that have passed over, but time has a way of healing the sad memories, so that we only recall those good times.

Your poem was moving in...

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Oh dear! Poor Martha has her

Posted on Sat, 11 Jun 2022

Oh dear! Poor Martha has her work cut out with all this truth being revealed. So much thought has gone into this story Penny, it's been a pleasure to read.

Jenny.

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There's no place like home,

Posted on Fri, 10 Jun 2022

There's no place like home, especially when there's a down pour and you're safe and dry inside.

I always feel lucky to have a roof over my head whatever the weather.

Inspiring poem Richard.

Jenny.

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Posted in A Spasm of Storm

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Still reading Penny and

Posted on Sat, 11 Jun 2022

Still reading Penny and enjoying.

Jenny.

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 30 ( narrowing down the suspects)

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My goodness it must be that

Posted on Thu, 09 Jun 2022

My goodness it must be that Italian passion coming out in your writing Luigi. The name Nigella Damascena certainly is an enchanting name for Love In The Mist. I got quite carried away with your love making in the fog. I actually had a night of...

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Posted in Morning Love

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Still enjoying Jane.  Jenny.

Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022

Still enjoying Jane. 

Jenny.

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I love everything about this

Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022

I love everything about this poem Rhiannon, gave me a real sense of the countryside at its best. It goes so well with the photo too.

Jenny.

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When I first started reading

Posted on Sun, 05 Jun 2022

When I first started reading your story Jane, I actually thought it was real, about someone you knew, but then realized as I read on that it was from your imagination. It could be based on truth though, there must be so many kids like Mole who...

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