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For a long while they continued on down the tunnel. Simon began to worry as the owl had not returned, he doubted himself as a sudden cold breeze came...
Darkness drifted across the night sky as a thick fog travelled inland, it would get thicker as the night progressed, leaving an even more unfriendly...
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Hi Jane,
Posted on Wed, 15 Jun 2022
It seems to me Cece and St John are on different pages. I wonder if they actually talked deeply enough about having this baby. She needs to be careful, because at the moment St John holds all the cards.
I thought you captured Cece's thoughts so well in this part. I also found it fascinating how you described her as a grain of salt inside a giant mouth...a great metaphore.
Time slips away like shifting sand, that's such a fitting sentiment. We never forget those loved ones that have passed over, but time has a way of healing the sad memories, so that we only recall those good times.
Oh dear! Poor Martha has her work cut out with all this truth being revealed. So much thought has gone into this story Penny, it's been a pleasure to read.
My goodness it must be that Italian passion coming out in your writing Luigi. The name Nigella Damascena certainly is an enchanting name for Love In The Mist. I got quite carried away with your love making in the fog. I actually had a night of...
When I first started reading your story Jane, I actually thought it was real, about someone you knew, but then realized as I read on that it was from your imagination. It could be based on truth though, there must be so many kids like Mole who...
Hi Jane,
Posted on Wed, 15 Jun 2022
It seems to me Cece and St John are on different pages. I wonder if they actually talked deeply enough about having this baby. She needs to be careful, because at the moment St John holds all the cards.
It's a very complex situation, that...
Read full commentPosted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - 13
I thought you captured Cece's
Posted on Mon, 13 Jun 2022
I thought you captured Cece's thoughts so well in this part. I also found it fascinating how you described her as a grain of salt inside a giant mouth...a great metaphore.
Still enjoying Jane.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - 12
Time slips away like shifting
Posted on Sun, 12 Jun 2022
Time slips away like shifting sand, that's such a fitting sentiment. We never forget those loved ones that have passed over, but time has a way of healing the sad memories, so that we only recall those good times.
Your poem was moving in...
Read full commentPosted in Anniversary
Oh dear! Poor Martha has her
Posted on Sat, 11 Jun 2022
Oh dear! Poor Martha has her work cut out with all this truth being revealed. So much thought has gone into this story Penny, it's been a pleasure to read.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 31 ( Conclusions Part 1 of 2)
There's no place like home,
Posted on Fri, 10 Jun 2022
There's no place like home, especially when there's a down pour and you're safe and dry inside.
I always feel lucky to have a roof over my head whatever the weather.
Inspiring poem Richard.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in A Spasm of Storm
Still reading Penny and
Posted on Sat, 11 Jun 2022
Still reading Penny and enjoying.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 30 ( narrowing down the suspects)
My goodness it must be that
Posted on Thu, 09 Jun 2022
My goodness it must be that Italian passion coming out in your writing Luigi. The name Nigella Damascena certainly is an enchanting name for Love In The Mist. I got quite carried away with your love making in the fog. I actually had a night of...
Read full commentPosted in Morning Love
Still enjoying Jane. Jenny.
Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022
Still enjoying Jane.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - (11)
I love everything about this
Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022
I love everything about this poem Rhiannon, gave me a real sense of the countryside at its best. It goes so well with the photo too.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Evening peace
When I first started reading
Posted on Sun, 05 Jun 2022
When I first started reading your story Jane, I actually thought it was real, about someone you knew, but then realized as I read on that it was from your imagination. It could be based on truth though, there must be so many kids like Mole who...
Read full commentPosted in Mole
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