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As Cinnamon began explaining about the children, Brad didn't understand what she was telling him about the youngsters. “What do you mean – taken from...
Back at Lena and Addie's apartment, their son Luke had now also awoken from his sleep absolutely starving, he was tucking into nut and jam sandwiches...
In the darkness of space, the atmosphere became filled with an electric storm that raged over Obsidian. It was obvious from its size, that the cloud...
How wonderful to have this fantastic scene close enough to walk, really spectacular photos and your poem describes well the wild beauty that makes this climb so special.
You can't help but love snow as it falls, making the most of each flake that conjures up Christmas cards of old, your poem is like an illustration in words.
It's good to see you writing again Jean. The message of being careful who you go off with, comes across neatly in this piece, especially if you're a child.
I had a young life of being caught up with people who took drugs, but never felt pressured by them to join in. I once took acid and had an incredible eight hour trip, but never took it again after. I've only ever smoked once and...
Oh dear! Poor Alistair has so much on his plate. Those dreams seem terrifying, but it's hardly surprising. Lynne doesn't seem to have any idea what's going on in his mind, and he can't really tell her, because she wouldn't understand. How...
I love how this story has progressed, the comination of so many misunderstandings all combined in a magical set of circumstances. The cliff hanger at the end sets this part off nicely.
What a great idea to come up with for the IP Jane. I like how you describe Jai emerging, like he's finding release. I found the ending very moving too,
I agree with the above
Posted on Sat, 23 Apr 2022
I agree with the above comments. I too hope everything balances out for you in time.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Janus Look 8
I like Ugly Puggly, those
Posted on Thu, 21 Apr 2022
I like Ugly Puggly, those last three lines said it all for me, exactly how I feel. Still enjoying Jack.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Ugly Puggly 8
How wonderful to have this
Posted on Thu, 21 Apr 2022
How wonderful to have this fantastic scene close enough to walk, really spectacular photos and your poem describes well the wild beauty that makes this climb so special.
Beautifully done Rhiannon.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Climbing up from Minton
Hi Richard,
Posted on Thu, 21 Apr 2022
You can't help but love snow as it falls, making the most of each flake that conjures up Christmas cards of old, your poem is like an illustration in words.
Beautifully written.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Pure and White
It's good to see you writing
Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2022
It's good to see you writing again Jean. The message of being careful who you go off with, comes across neatly in this piece, especially if you're a child.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Straw Hat
Hi Rachel,
Posted on Mon, 18 Apr 2022
Hi Rachel,
I had a young life of being caught up with people who took drugs, but never felt pressured by them to join in. I once took acid and had an incredible eight hour trip, but never took it again after. I've only ever smoked once and...
Read full commentPosted in Drugs - where's the harm?
Oh dear! Poor Alistair has so
Posted on Mon, 18 Apr 2022
Oh dear! Poor Alistair has so much on his plate. Those dreams seem terrifying, but it's hardly surprising. Lynne doesn't seem to have any idea what's going on in his mind, and he can't really tell her, because she wouldn't understand. How...
Read full commentPosted in Legend of the Pah - 6 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
A comforting poem indeed
Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2022
A comforting poem indeed Richard, and very nicely put.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Wisdom
Hi Penny,
Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2022
I love how this story has progressed, the comination of so many misunderstandings all combined in a magical set of circumstances. The cliff hanger at the end sets this part off nicely.
Very much enjoyed.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 27
What a great idea to come up
Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2022
What a great idea to come up with for the IP Jane. I like how you describe Jai emerging, like he's finding release. I found the ending very moving too,
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Jai
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