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Painting by Jenny. How I imagine a part of the New World to look. Liora crept across to the entrance of the chamber on her hands and knees, to where...
The day of the wedding arrived and Chris was his usual calm self, while I on the other hand was quite nervous about meeting so many strangers. Chris...
2816 of my comments have received 2897 Great Feedback votes
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It's good to see you writing
Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2022
It's good to see you writing again Jean. The message of being careful who you go off with, comes across neatly in this piece, especially if you're a child.
I had a young life of being caught up with people who took drugs, but never felt pressured by them to join in. I once took acid and had an incredible eight hour trip, but never took it again after. I've only ever smoked once and...
Oh dear! Poor Alistair has so much on his plate. Those dreams seem terrifying, but it's hardly surprising. Lynne doesn't seem to have any idea what's going on in his mind, and he can't really tell her, because she wouldn't understand. How...
I love how this story has progressed, the comination of so many misunderstandings all combined in a magical set of circumstances. The cliff hanger at the end sets this part off nicely.
What a great idea to come up with for the IP Jane. I like how you describe Jai emerging, like he's finding release. I found the ending very moving too,
I think Alistair is making progress concentrating on his Audi, rather than Lynne's passions for humiliating snips and other crazes. At least he's doing something constructive. I'm loving the storyline Jane with all its conflicting emotions....
It's good to see you writing
Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2022
It's good to see you writing again Jean. The message of being careful who you go off with, comes across neatly in this piece, especially if you're a child.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Straw Hat
Hi Rachel,
Posted on Mon, 18 Apr 2022
Hi Rachel,
I had a young life of being caught up with people who took drugs, but never felt pressured by them to join in. I once took acid and had an incredible eight hour trip, but never took it again after. I've only ever smoked once and...
Read full commentPosted in Drugs - where's the harm?
Oh dear! Poor Alistair has so
Posted on Mon, 18 Apr 2022
Oh dear! Poor Alistair has so much on his plate. Those dreams seem terrifying, but it's hardly surprising. Lynne doesn't seem to have any idea what's going on in his mind, and he can't really tell her, because she wouldn't understand. How...
Read full commentPosted in Legend of the Pah - 6 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
A comforting poem indeed
Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2022
A comforting poem indeed Richard, and very nicely put.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Wisdom
Hi Penny,
Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2022
I love how this story has progressed, the comination of so many misunderstandings all combined in a magical set of circumstances. The cliff hanger at the end sets this part off nicely.
Very much enjoyed.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 27
What a great idea to come up
Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2022
What a great idea to come up with for the IP Jane. I like how you describe Jai emerging, like he's finding release. I found the ending very moving too,
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Jai
This is such a charming poem,
Posted on Fri, 15 Apr 2022
This is such a charming poem, to go with such an adorable photo. I really enjoyed reading...gave me a big smile. ...
Read full commentPosted in When One Is One
Clever interpretation of the
Posted on Fri, 15 Apr 2022
Clever interpretation of the arrogant leader, and effective in expression.
Jenny,
Read full commentPosted in two men
Sorry If I said the wrong
Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2022
Sorry If I said the wrong words Jean.
But good luck with all the procedures.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in the Janus Look 7
I think Alistair is making
Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2022
I think Alistair is making progress concentrating on his Audi, rather than Lynne's passions for humiliating snips and other crazes. At least he's doing something constructive. I'm loving the storyline Jane with all its conflicting emotions....
Read full commentPosted in Legend of the Pah - 5 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
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