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I have 1266 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5761757 times and 531 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Dwellers of the New World Chapter Fifteen ( Pt 9 ) Dreaming of Home

Back in Grasshopper Valley at Tariq's and Kalina' cabin, Dawson sat by the fire, his face pale and body aching. He sipped the broth that Kalina had...

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Fifteen ( Pt 8 ) Solid News

Ice cold snow lay outside Liora's dwelling, while inside the only sound that could be heard was the cracking of burning twigs, from the fire that...

Fear Inside

I don't wish to hear the whispers of melancholy, my mind musty from too much gabble, curtains twitching snooty looks; gazing at this monstrosity that...
Cherry

Dear Diary Some Days In My Life Keeping It Pure And Simple

Dear Diary, I want to look back at the Summer of 1976, what a Summer that was, even hotter than 1975...which was saying something, the heat seemed to...

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Fifteen ( Pt 7 ) A Quiet Word

It wasn't often that Jomei voiced an opinion, but on this particular occasion he was inclined to agree with Brigs. Touching the woman's shoulder, he...

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2842 of my comments have received 2922 Great Feedback votes

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I can imagine the black bird

Posted on Sun, 15 May 2022

I can imagine the black bird watching crow and wanting to imitate, but no caw coming. The clouds grinning with white teeth, reminded me of scrying the cheshire cat in Alice In Wonderland.

The sky frowned and soured itself into a storm......

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Please...please keep going

Posted on Tue, 05 Oct 2021

Please...please keep going with this story. As you know I love adventures, and Mary is certainly on one big adventure. Mary's impression of the social worker is typical of a child who is unsure of what to believe, but although she's running away...

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Posted in part 10

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I enjoyed reading your

Posted on Sat, 14 May 2022

I enjoyed reading your adaption of this mysterious story. I often wonder if it's based on some facts, your poem makes me think of the many other people that have disappeared into thin air without a trace. Just maybe there are places in the world...

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Posted in An Eternal Debt (The Pied Piper of Hamlin)

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This is such a brilliant page

Posted on Mon, 20 Sep 2021

This is such a brilliant page turner. I do hope you continue this story Di, I'm so enjoying.

Jenny. 

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Posted in part 9

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Brilliant Di! I was smiling

Posted on Wed, 28 Apr 2021

Brilliant Di! I was smiling all the way through like a big Cheshire Cat. smiley Could...

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Posted in part 8

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I can only echo all the above

Posted on Thu, 12 May 2022

I can only echo all the above Jean. My thoughts go out to you and wish you much good health.

Jenny.

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Posted in Hospital 3 and Janus 11

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Hello Di.

Posted on Sat, 09 Jan 2021

Poor Mary. I love the idea of the seagull looking after the child, like a guardian angel. ...

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Posted in part 4

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Can't stop reading this story

Posted on Sat, 02 Jan 2021

Can't stop reading this story Di, it's really captivated me. On to next part.

Jenny.

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Posted in part 3 (redrafted)

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You are able to communicate

Posted on Sat, 26 Dec 2020

You are able to communicate so well Mary's feelings. There is so much confusion between Mary and the adults. Very well written Di.

On to next part with anticipation.

Jenny.

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Posted in part 2

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Hello Di,

Posted on Fri, 06 May 2022

I was just reading your comment to Jane, and just had to let you know my feelings. I think the chrysalise turning into a beautiful butterfly, is a typical example of reincarnation. I truely believe when we die our soul rests, then we wake to...

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Posted in wheels to rotors

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