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I don't wish to hear the whispers of melancholy, my mind musty from too much gabble, curtains twitching snooty looks; gazing at this monstrosity that...
Dear Diary, I want to look back at the Summer of 1976, what a Summer that was, even hotter than 1975...which was saying something, the heat seemed to...
It wasn't often that Jomei voiced an opinion, but on this particular occasion he was inclined to agree with Brigs. Touching the woman's shoulder, he...
2842 of my comments have received 2922 Great Feedback votes
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I can imagine the black bird
Posted on Sun, 15 May 2022
I can imagine the black bird watching crow and wanting to imitate, but no caw coming. The clouds grinning with white teeth, reminded me of scrying the cheshire cat in Alice In Wonderland.
The sky frowned and soured itself into a storm......
Please...please keep going with this story. As you know I love adventures, and Mary is certainly on one big adventure. Mary's impression of the social worker is typical of a child who is unsure of what to believe, but although she's running away...
I enjoyed reading your adaption of this mysterious story. I often wonder if it's based on some facts, your poem makes me think of the many other people that have disappeared into thin air without a trace. Just maybe there are places in the world...
I was just reading your comment to Jane, and just had to let you know my feelings. I think the chrysalise turning into a beautiful butterfly, is a typical example of reincarnation. I truely believe when we die our soul rests, then we wake to...
I can imagine the black bird
Posted on Sun, 15 May 2022
I can imagine the black bird watching crow and wanting to imitate, but no caw coming. The clouds grinning with white teeth, reminded me of scrying the cheshire cat in Alice In Wonderland.
The sky frowned and soured itself into a storm......
Read full commentPosted in Blackbird
Please...please keep going
Posted on Tue, 05 Oct 2021
Please...please keep going with this story. As you know I love adventures, and Mary is certainly on one big adventure. Mary's impression of the social worker is typical of a child who is unsure of what to believe, but although she's running away...
Read full commentPosted in part 10
I enjoyed reading your
Posted on Sat, 14 May 2022
I enjoyed reading your adaption of this mysterious story. I often wonder if it's based on some facts, your poem makes me think of the many other people that have disappeared into thin air without a trace. Just maybe there are places in the world...
Read full commentPosted in An Eternal Debt (The Pied Piper of Hamlin)
This is such a brilliant page
Posted on Mon, 20 Sep 2021
This is such a brilliant page turner. I do hope you continue this story Di, I'm so enjoying.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in part 9
Brilliant Di! I was smiling
Posted on Wed, 28 Apr 2021
Brilliant Di! I was smiling all the way through like a big Cheshire Cat.
Could...
Read full commentPosted in part 8
I can only echo all the above
Posted on Thu, 12 May 2022
I can only echo all the above Jean. My thoughts go out to you and wish you much good health.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Hospital 3 and Janus 11
Hello Di.
Posted on Sat, 09 Jan 2021
Poor Mary. I love the idea of the seagull looking after the child, like a guardian angel. ...
Read full commentPosted in part 4
Can't stop reading this story
Posted on Sat, 02 Jan 2021
Can't stop reading this story Di, it's really captivated me. On to next part.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in part 3 (redrafted)
You are able to communicate
Posted on Sat, 26 Dec 2020
You are able to communicate so well Mary's feelings. There is so much confusion between Mary and the adults. Very well written Di.
On to next part with anticipation.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in part 2
Hello Di,
Posted on Fri, 06 May 2022
I was just reading your comment to Jane, and just had to let you know my feelings. I think the chrysalise turning into a beautiful butterfly, is a typical example of reincarnation. I truely believe when we die our soul rests, then we wake to...
Read full commentPosted in wheels to rotors
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