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Within the lick of passing glow, leaping with determination; chasing moths vision ablaze, as wings flutter without purpose. A mischievous nature led...
Jay watched as the naked Liora entered the pool, he was captivated by this beautiful woman, her sylphlike figure and long slim legs gave him feelings...
I liked this piece of writing because I agree that certain colours bring out the best in the imagination. For me it's peach. I painted the walls to the room I write in with this colour and have found it always inspires my imagination.
I feel a real connection with Maria now she is getting older. When you're young life is filled with so much adventure and taking chances, but as we get older we realize we have to put our house in order so that loved ones won't be forgotton....
I'm like you as I come nearer to the age of 70 which seems to creep up so quickly. The mind is saying so much, yet the body is slowing down and just can't cope with all the chaos, it just gives me anxiety thinking about it, just not worth...
Crikey! What a story...a real horror. Your description was so clear, I felt like I was there watching it all transpire. When he's opening the bedroom door and crawling in, I could feel the fear and panic his wife must have felt. Great story to...
Just love a story with a
Posted on Tue, 22 Mar 2022
Just love a story with a happy ending.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in I'm Getting Published!
Congratulations Luigi, my
Posted on Sun, 20 Mar 2022
Congratulations Luigi, my best wishes go out to you and your wife, and you know it's harder to recall as we age, so thank goodness for your daughters.
Much health and happiness for the future.
Take care.
Jenny. xx
Read full commentPosted in Must Make a Note
I liked this piece of writing
Posted on Sat, 19 Mar 2022
I liked this piece of writing because I agree that certain colours bring out the best in the imagination. For me it's peach. I painted the walls to the room I write in with this colour and have found it always inspires my imagination.
I'm...
Read full commentPosted in Inspiration
Hi Penny, the mystery
Posted on Fri, 18 Mar 2022
Hi Penny, the mystery throughout your story has been so well thought out and keeps the reader guessing, you couldn't ask for more.
I'm still indecisive as to who the trouble maker is, but I'm having fun speculating. ...
Read full commentPosted in Willow's Tail" 26
What an adorable story, It
Posted on Thu, 17 Mar 2022
What an adorable story, It was so nice to read a happy ending too.
Very much enjoyed and thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Forever Home
I feel a real connection with
Posted on Wed, 16 Mar 2022
I feel a real connection with Maria now she is getting older. When you're young life is filled with so much adventure and taking chances, but as we get older we realize we have to put our house in order so that loved ones won't be forgotton....
Read full commentPosted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 28
Hi Turlough,
Posted on Sun, 27 Feb 2022
I'm like you as I come nearer to the age of 70 which seems to creep up so quickly. The mind is saying so much, yet the body is slowing down and just can't cope with all the chaos, it just gives me anxiety thinking about it, just not worth...
Read full commentPosted in Brief Moments To Imagine
You paint such a vibrant
Posted on Sun, 13 Mar 2022
You paint such a vibrant picture with words in your poem. It sounds like a wonderful inspiring place to live. Very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Coral Bay
This is gorgeous Rachel, a
Posted on Sun, 13 Mar 2022
This is gorgeous Rachel, a fine tribute to such a stunning bird. A poem I very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Nightingale’s Song
Crikey! What a story...a real
Posted on Thu, 10 Mar 2022
Crikey! What a story...a real horror. Your description was so clear, I felt like I was there watching it all transpire. When he's opening the bedroom door and crawling in, I could feel the fear and panic his wife must have felt. Great story to...
Read full commentPosted in The other half
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