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I was tired on this Friday evening, from a busy week at work and was looking forward to a relaxing bath then heading out to the pub. As I opened the...
As I gaze on Winter's magic, imagining the Snow God shaving his bushy white beard, flakes plummet like a cascading waterfall, flirting with branches...
Tap the door to the back of my mind, awaken my spirit with a healing touch, rumour has it there's time to linger long as I lavish in the fruits of my...
Grasping fine strands of art is such a joyous encounter; not knowing if what we embrace is our true destiny or a brief moment, Who knows the order of...
2842 of my comments have received 2922 Great Feedback votes
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Hi Penny,
Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2022
I love how this story has progressed, the comination of so many misunderstandings all combined in a magical set of circumstances. The cliff hanger at the end sets this part off nicely.
What a great idea to come up with for the IP Jane. I like how you describe Jai emerging, like he's finding release. I found the ending very moving too,
I think Alistair is making progress concentrating on his Audi, rather than Lynne's passions for humiliating snips and other crazes. At least he's doing something constructive. I'm loving the storyline Jane with all its conflicting emotions....
you know I think it's time to pamper yourself, make time for doing those things that give you the most pleasure. I really hope writing and talking about this period of your life is helping at this difficult period.
You've set the scene, leaving me the reader to ponder on what this man's intentions are. You always deliver these short mystery stories so well Hilary.
Hi Penny,
Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2022
I love how this story has progressed, the comination of so many misunderstandings all combined in a magical set of circumstances. The cliff hanger at the end sets this part off nicely.
Very much enjoyed.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 27
What a great idea to come up
Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2022
What a great idea to come up with for the IP Jane. I like how you describe Jai emerging, like he's finding release. I found the ending very moving too,
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Jai
This is such a charming poem,
Posted on Fri, 15 Apr 2022
This is such a charming poem, to go with such an adorable photo. I really enjoyed reading...gave me a big smile. ...
Read full commentPosted in When One Is One
Clever interpretation of the
Posted on Fri, 15 Apr 2022
Clever interpretation of the arrogant leader, and effective in expression.
Jenny,
Read full commentPosted in two men
Sorry If I said the wrong
Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2022
Sorry If I said the wrong words Jean.
But good luck with all the procedures.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in the Janus Look 7
I think Alistair is making
Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2022
I think Alistair is making progress concentrating on his Audi, rather than Lynne's passions for humiliating snips and other crazes. At least he's doing something constructive. I'm loving the storyline Jane with all its conflicting emotions....
Read full commentPosted in Legend of the Pah - 5 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
This is so delicately written
Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2022
This is so delicately written Rhiannon. Such a pleasure to read, especially as most of our pink blossom has fallen.
I love the close up photo too, did you take it?
Thank you so much for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Blossom
Hi Jean,
Posted on Wed, 13 Apr 2022
Hi Jean,
you know I think it's time to pamper yourself, make time for doing those things that give you the most pleasure. I really hope writing and talking about this period of your life is helping at this difficult period.
As...
Read full commentPosted in the Janus Look 7
A lovely poem of hope for new
Posted on Tue, 12 Apr 2022
A lovely poem of hope for new tomorrows and shared moments.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Forget-Me-Not
You've set the scene, leaving
Posted on Mon, 11 Apr 2022
You've set the scene, leaving me the reader to ponder on what this man's intentions are. You always deliver these short mystery stories so well Hilary.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Telephone
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