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Jay watched as the naked Liora entered the pool, he was captivated by this beautiful woman, her sylphlike figure and long slim legs gave him feelings...
Hi Paul. I've been to Forida twice and never seen a dolphin in the wild, just in captivity, so when I read your poem I got quite excited. We stayed in St Petes where the sand is pure white and though very hot to walk on, feels like velvet to...
you know I wish this story could have gone on longer, it ended and left me wanting more. Definitely a story up my street, and loving the way you write.
This is the beginning of a master piece story Paul. It's so professional and full of intriuge, just my cup of tea, also I love that it's set in Glastonbury, my all time favourite place.
This is such a special piece of writing Rhiannon. I love how you've woven information into this poem and let the reader see through your eyes the wonder and creation of a leaf.
I can identify with your words Jane. It's amazing how many people I see that look like someone I've known, but can't always place where from. Then there's others where I've been tempted to approach and been shocked to find out it's not really...
A great read Rhiannon, reminding me of my chamber maid days, working at the Holiday Inn in Bristol. We had to change about fifteen to twenty five beds a day, I think I became an expert by the time I left that job.
Hi Jean, I'm so glad there wasn't any permanent damage and you're getting the help you need. Your daughter sounds so supportive and beneficial to you getting better.
Hopefully writing this could help someone else in the same situation to...
Oh dear, you seem to have been through so much with not only the shock of finding yourself with Bels Palsy, but having to sit and wait for four hours on your own. It reminded me of my experience in A & E waiting for eight hours to see a...
A gorgous scene captured in
Posted on Tue, 15 Feb 2022
A gorgous scene captured in time with your words Rachel. Hares have such a strong connection to the earth, which is why I loved those lines:-
a wide-eyed flash and crouch
to tremble upon dewrooted earth,
Writing so...
Read full commentPosted in Hares in a Field
Hi Paul. I've been to Forida
Posted on Sat, 12 Feb 2022
Hi Paul. I've been to Forida twice and never seen a dolphin in the wild, just in captivity, so when I read your poem I got quite excited. We stayed in St Petes where the sand is pure white and though very hot to walk on, feels like velvet to...
Read full commentPosted in Florida (1987)
Hi Paul,
Posted on Thu, 10 Feb 2022
Hi Paul,
you know I wish this story could have gone on longer, it ended and left me wanting more. Definitely a story up my street, and loving the way you write.
Thanks for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Enchantress of Avalon (Part Two of Two)
This is the beginning of a
Posted on Wed, 09 Feb 2022
This is the beginning of a master piece story Paul. It's so professional and full of intriuge, just my cup of tea, also I love that it's set in Glastonbury, my all time favourite place.
Off to read part two with anticipation. ...
Read full commentPosted in The Enchantress of Avalon (Part One of Two)
This is such a special piece
Posted on Tue, 08 Feb 2022
This is such a special piece of writing Rhiannon. I love how you've woven information into this poem and let the reader see through your eyes the wonder and creation of a leaf.
Very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in One-leaf therapy
I can identify with your
Posted on Tue, 08 Feb 2022
I can identify with your words Jane. It's amazing how many people I see that look like someone I've known, but can't always place where from. Then there's others where I've been tempted to approach and been shocked to find out it's not really...
Read full commentPosted in Outline of a Man
Hi Turlough,
Posted on Fri, 04 Feb 2022
Hi Turlough,
a poem that moves so effortlessly, yet I can see you've put so much care and attention to detail into setting the scene of desperation.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Her Troubles
A great read Rhiannon,
Posted on Fri, 04 Feb 2022
A great read Rhiannon, reminding me of my chamber maid days, working at the Holiday Inn in Bristol. We had to change about fifteen to twenty five beds a day, I think I became an expert by the time I left that job.
Your poem definitely took...
Read full commentPosted in Duvet!
Hi Jean, I'm so glad there
Posted on Tue, 01 Feb 2022
Hi Jean, I'm so glad there wasn't any permanent damage and you're getting the help you need. Your daughter sounds so supportive and beneficial to you getting better.
Hopefully writing this could help someone else in the same situation to...
Read full commentPosted in Janus Look 2
Oh dear, you seem to have
Posted on Mon, 31 Jan 2022
Oh dear, you seem to have been through so much with not only the shock of finding yourself with Bels Palsy, but having to sit and wait for four hours on your own. It reminded me of my experience in A & E waiting for eight hours to see a...
Read full commentPosted in The Janus Look 1
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