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Within the lick of passing glow, leaping with determination; chasing moths vision ablaze, as wings flutter without purpose. A mischievous nature led...
Jay watched as the naked Liora entered the pool, he was captivated by this beautiful woman, her sylphlike figure and long slim legs gave him feelings...
Oh! Dear Jean, I'm so sorry to read this news.You've had such a battle lately and it just doesn't seem fair. Please don't give up hope of recovery. I really hope when they contact you again that everything has been a worry for nothing.
I can tell this poem has been so well thought out. I couldn't help feeling pity for the changeling. I think there's a moral, that you shouldn't judge a book by its covers.
Maria was a person who cared about memories, I'm so glad she left her diaries to someone who took care of them. Can you imagine if Edith had been left them, the diaries would have probably ended up on the fire burning, what a waste that would...
Hi Rachel,
Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022
Hi Rachel,
your skill at writing such amazing poetry always so authentic, is like a breath of fresh air, spiriting the reader into your world.
The two stanzas that stood out for me were:
Raven's foot and raven's leek
...
Read full commentPosted in The Wanderer or The Exile’s Lament
Great poem Paul, grasping the
Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022
Great poem Paul, grasping the orignal story with your own poetic skill.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Into the Woods (Hansel and Gretel)
Oh! The ups and downs of
Posted on Wed, 30 Mar 2022
Oh! The ups and downs of married life. These two certainly like winding each other up don't they? Great to read more of this story Jane.
I wonder if Lynne will ever get to France! Or maybe it's just a pipe dream.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Legend of the Pah - 2 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
Oh dear! It sounds like there
Posted on Tue, 29 Mar 2022
Oh dear! It sounds like there's so many misunderstanding going on with Lynne and Alistair. Males never quite see things the same as females do they?
I remember my first real boyfriend used to take his motor bike apart in the kitchen, his...
Read full commentPosted in The Legend of the Pah - 1 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
Oh! Dear Jean, I'm so sorry
Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022
Oh! Dear Jean, I'm so sorry to read this news.You've had such a battle lately and it just doesn't seem fair. Please don't give up hope of recovery. I really hope when they contact you again that everything has been a worry for nothing.
...
Read full commentPosted in Janus Look 4
This is a wonderful story
Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022
This is a wonderful story Jane, and right up my street. I just love that Mai had a happy ending too.
Thank you so much for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Wasted Wish
I can tell this poem has been
Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022
I can tell this poem has been so well thought out. I couldn't help feeling pity for the changeling. I think there's a moral, that you shouldn't judge a book by its covers.
Special and unique.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Changeling
Hi Frances,
Posted on Fri, 25 Mar 2022
Your poem works so well with your daughter's art work. Artistic talant must run in your family. ...
Read full commentPosted in Umbrella Sea
Panicky groundhog days...but
Posted on Thu, 24 Mar 2022
Panicky groundhog days...but a story put together really well and so funny Paul. ...
Read full commentPosted in Groundhog Boris
Maria was a person who cared
Posted on Wed, 23 Mar 2022
Maria was a person who cared about memories, I'm so glad she left her diaries to someone who took care of them. Can you imagine if Edith had been left them, the diaries would have probably ended up on the fire burning, what a waste that would...
Read full commentPosted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 29
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