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It was getting late as darkness began sweeping across the night sky, revealing a full Winter moon and the many stars that twinkled, throwing light on...
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Starry eyed Clare and Marni
Posted on Sat, 26 Feb 2022
Starry eyed Clare and Marni are now in their element, I would have gone so red with embarrassment if I'd been Marni, being wheeled away like that and all dressed up to the nines....
Oh dear! Poor Marni's in a right state. I hope she makes it to the loo, can't imagine the scene otherwise. Their plans are not going at all well. On the edge of my seat to know what happens next.
This was such a sad read and I'm so sorry to hear the news about your cat. It's never easy getting news like that, I know from my own past experience how much they become so much part of the family, it's like loosing a loved one. I really hope...
Wow! Jane this story is so good. I've now read all parts. It sounds like Marni and Clare are really tripping. Clare really made a mistake turning that hairdryer on didn't she?
How absolutely amazing to reach such an age. She sounds so young at heart and it's lovely she can recall those lines. This was such a treasure to read and it must have been such a joy to hear her sing.
It sounds like Maria is out of her comfort zone and desperate to return to her life in London. It must feel strange to be attending an Annual Dinner with Deborah, not being used to such smart occasions and being told she's too drab.
I haven't read all of this story, but this part grabbed my attention. Very true to life of two friends in conversation, almost reminded me of my own young days getting ready to go on a girlie night out.
I love your poem Richard, having those experiences and being able to write about them is so important. Living while your young has always been my formula for a good life.
A birdseye view of what looks like a break in the weather. Your poem describes wonderfully being high up and the wildness with the grassy mounds of the hill fort.
Starry eyed Clare and Marni
Posted on Sat, 26 Feb 2022
Starry eyed Clare and Marni are now in their element, I would have gone so red with embarrassment if I'd been Marni, being wheeled away like that and all dressed up to the nines....
Read full commentPosted in Parables of Clippety (10) - The Medical Room
Oh dear! Poor Marni's in a
Posted on Thu, 24 Feb 2022
Oh dear! Poor Marni's in a right state. I hope she makes it to the loo, can't imagine the scene otherwise. Their plans are not going at all well. On the edge of my seat to know what happens next.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Parables of Clippety (9) - The Big Match
This was such a sad read and
Posted on Thu, 24 Feb 2022
This was such a sad read and I'm so sorry to hear the news about your cat. It's never easy getting news like that, I know from my own past experience how much they become so much part of the family, it's like loosing a loved one. I really hope...
Read full commentPosted in GAR2 RGI1 AEP2 Y922
Wow! Jane this story is so
Posted on Wed, 23 Feb 2022
Wow! Jane this story is so good. I've now read all parts. It sounds like Marni and Clare are really tripping. Clare really made a mistake turning that hairdryer on didn't she?
Looking forward to reading more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Parables of Clippety (8) - The Flying Car
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Wed, 23 Feb 2022
How absolutely amazing to reach such an age. She sounds so young at heart and it's lovely she can recall those lines. This was such a treasure to read and it must have been such a joy to hear her sing.
Many happy returns to a lovely lady...
Read full commentPosted in ‘Twinkle, twinkle … what?’@102
It sounds like Maria is out
Posted on Wed, 23 Feb 2022
It sounds like Maria is out of her comfort zone and desperate to return to her life in London. It must feel strange to be attending an Annual Dinner with Deborah, not being used to such smart occasions and being told she's too drab.
I do...
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Hi Jane,
Posted on Mon, 21 Feb 2022
I haven't read all of this story, but this part grabbed my attention. Very true to life of two friends in conversation, almost reminded me of my own young days getting ready to go on a girlie night out.
Will try and get around to reading...
Read full commentPosted in Parables of Clippety (6) - Never Been High
I love your poem Richard,
Posted on Tue, 22 Feb 2022
I love your poem Richard, having those experiences and being able to write about them is so important. Living while your young has always been my formula for a good life.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in These Tired Feet
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Mon, 21 Feb 2022
A birdseye view of what looks like a break in the weather. Your poem describes wonderfully being high up and the wildness with the grassy mounds of the hill fort.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Three-dimensional landscape around Bache Camp
This is a brilliant take on
Posted on Fri, 18 Feb 2022
This is a brilliant take on the I P. Love the use of William Shakespearean plays, adds so much drama.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Will Cooks Up A Storm
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