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Love that beginning; The wind
Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2015
Love that beginning; The wind puffed soft and soothing...what an original description.
Golden sunlight washed their minds clean of all darkness...another wonderful detail.
You should write poetry with words like these.
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Posted in Chapter 17 Conquest of Chimera
Loved the idea of the pie
Posted on Wed, 01 Jul 2015
Loved the idea of the pie-faced moon and that beautiful blue gown of Kia's sounded wonderful with its gold ribbon.
Will have to wait till tomorrow to read more.
Thanks for sharing.
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Posted in Chapter 13 Conquest of Chimera
Posted on Wed, 15 Jul 2015
what a truelly honest piece of writing. Like you so rightly said. Cancer can leave you in a lonely place, for however much you hear about others having it, no one can fully understand the fight you have ahead of you.
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Posted in A Lonely Place
Thanks a million Tina, just
Posted on Mon, 06 Jul 2015
Thanks a million Tina, just put the next part on.
You've made me very happy. ...Read full comment
Wouldn't it be wonderful if
Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2015
Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could bottle and cork those precious moments we share with loved ones? To be able to open at leisure, so we could with all our senses, enjoy once more.
Your words touched a chord Tina, from one who finds it...Read full comment
Posted in The Letting Go
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
your poems are always reflective of what you see and feel. This one arouses my feelings for nature, being one who suffers a great sorrow when yet another tree is cut down, that has maybe stood for many years and deserves to be...Read full comment
Posted in 'Spirits of the Soul'