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I have 1257 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
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2816 of my 19,559 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2897 votes

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Dwellers of the New World Chapter Thirteen ( Pt 12 ) A Discovery Is Made

Introductions were made as the families got to know one another, though Kalina and Tariq were desperate to tell Evelyne and Nathen what they'd...
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Call Of The River

In Loving Childhood memories of Tales of the River Bank. Beyond the bustling crowded streets where childhood memories are fulfilled, from gathering...

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Thirteen ( Pt 11 ) Together Again

One of the passageways that Derland took Ben and Jay along, led to Meadow Down Valley, where Evelyne and Nathen were staying, it was a maze of steps...

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Thirteen ( Pt 10 ) Meetings

Back at the lodge Liora was tidying up and preparing for the day's events. She thought about Jay as she worked and felt anxious, new feelings had...

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Thirteen ( Pt 9 ) The Importance of Outcomes

Liora lit a torch from the beacon at the entrance and made her way back up Harebell Passage. It didn't take her long to get back to her lodge, but...

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2816 of my comments have received 2897 Great Feedback votes

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That first stanza stands out

Posted on Fri, 18 Feb 2022

That first stanza stands out to me a lot, it represents how I feel, especially in those first three lines. Wouldn't it be great if we could just blow away problems? But then again I suppose we need the bad to balance out the good. 

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Posted in The Storm : All Blow Away

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It must be so hard for Maria

Posted on Wed, 16 Feb 2022

It must be so hard for Maria to up sticks and leave a place she's been so happy living, especially as she's not getting any younger and probably needs stability in life. 

I admire her tenacity in keeping these records of information going...

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Posted in Maria and The Bellasis Family 24

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Hi Paul,

Posted on Tue, 15 Feb 2022

Hi Paul,

a fine poem of how Valentine came about. I was reading up the information myself last week, I think you captured the events perfectly. I suppose there's a touch of saddness to this day if you had lived in the past. 

I...

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Posted in Saint Valentine

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A gorgous scene captured in

Posted on Tue, 15 Feb 2022

A gorgous scene captured in time with your words Rachel. Hares have such a strong connection to the earth, which is why I loved those lines:-

a wide-eyed flash and crouch

to tremble upon dewrooted earth,

 

Writing so...

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Posted in Hares in a Field

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Hi Paul. I've been to Forida

Posted on Sat, 12 Feb 2022

Hi Paul. I've been to Forida twice and never seen a dolphin in the wild, just in captivity, so when I read your poem I got quite excited. We stayed in St Petes where the sand is pure white and though very hot to walk on, feels like velvet to...

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Posted in Florida (1987)

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Hi Paul,

Posted on Thu, 10 Feb 2022

Hi Paul,

you know I wish this story could have gone on longer, it ended and left me wanting more. Definitely a story up my street, and loving the way you write.

Thanks for sharing.

Jenny.

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Posted in The Enchantress of Avalon (Part Two of Two)

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This is the beginning of a

Posted on Wed, 09 Feb 2022

This is the beginning of a master piece story Paul. It's so professional and full of intriuge, just my cup of tea, also I love that it's set in Glastonbury, my all time favourite place.

Off to read part two with anticipation. ...

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Posted in The Enchantress of Avalon (Part One of Two)

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This is such a special piece

Posted on Tue, 08 Feb 2022

This is such a special piece of writing Rhiannon. I love how you've woven information into this poem and let the reader see through your eyes the wonder and creation of a leaf.

Very much enjoyed reading.

Jenny.

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Posted in One-leaf therapy

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I can identify with your

Posted on Tue, 08 Feb 2022

I can identify with your words Jane. It's amazing how many people I see that look like someone I've known, but can't always place where from. Then there's others where I've been tempted to approach and been shocked to find out it's not really...

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Posted in Outline of a Man

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Hi Turlough,

Posted on Fri, 04 Feb 2022

Hi Turlough,

a poem that moves so effortlessly, yet I can see you've put so much care and attention to detail into setting the scene of desperation. 

Jenny.

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Posted in Her Troubles

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