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One of the passageways that Derland took Ben and Jay along, led to Meadow Down Valley, where Evelyne and Nathen were staying, it was a maze of steps...
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That first stanza stands out
Posted on Fri, 18 Feb 2022
That first stanza stands out to me a lot, it represents how I feel, especially in those first three lines. Wouldn't it be great if we could just blow away problems? But then again I suppose we need the bad to balance out the good.
It must be so hard for Maria to up sticks and leave a place she's been so happy living, especially as she's not getting any younger and probably needs stability in life.
I admire her tenacity in keeping these records of information going...
a fine poem of how Valentine came about. I was reading up the information myself last week, I think you captured the events perfectly. I suppose there's a touch of saddness to this day if you had lived in the past.
Hi Paul. I've been to Forida twice and never seen a dolphin in the wild, just in captivity, so when I read your poem I got quite excited. We stayed in St Petes where the sand is pure white and though very hot to walk on, feels like velvet to...
you know I wish this story could have gone on longer, it ended and left me wanting more. Definitely a story up my street, and loving the way you write.
This is the beginning of a master piece story Paul. It's so professional and full of intriuge, just my cup of tea, also I love that it's set in Glastonbury, my all time favourite place.
This is such a special piece of writing Rhiannon. I love how you've woven information into this poem and let the reader see through your eyes the wonder and creation of a leaf.
I can identify with your words Jane. It's amazing how many people I see that look like someone I've known, but can't always place where from. Then there's others where I've been tempted to approach and been shocked to find out it's not really...
That first stanza stands out
Posted on Fri, 18 Feb 2022
That first stanza stands out to me a lot, it represents how I feel, especially in those first three lines. Wouldn't it be great if we could just blow away problems? But then again I suppose we need the bad to balance out the good.
Great...
Read full commentPosted in The Storm : All Blow Away
It must be so hard for Maria
Posted on Wed, 16 Feb 2022
It must be so hard for Maria to up sticks and leave a place she's been so happy living, especially as she's not getting any younger and probably needs stability in life.
I admire her tenacity in keeping these records of information going...
Read full commentPosted in Maria and The Bellasis Family 24
Hi Paul,
Posted on Tue, 15 Feb 2022
Hi Paul,
a fine poem of how Valentine came about. I was reading up the information myself last week, I think you captured the events perfectly. I suppose there's a touch of saddness to this day if you had lived in the past.
I...
Read full commentPosted in Saint Valentine
A gorgous scene captured in
Posted on Tue, 15 Feb 2022
A gorgous scene captured in time with your words Rachel. Hares have such a strong connection to the earth, which is why I loved those lines:-
a wide-eyed flash and crouch
to tremble upon dewrooted earth,
Writing so...
Read full commentPosted in Hares in a Field
Hi Paul. I've been to Forida
Posted on Sat, 12 Feb 2022
Hi Paul. I've been to Forida twice and never seen a dolphin in the wild, just in captivity, so when I read your poem I got quite excited. We stayed in St Petes where the sand is pure white and though very hot to walk on, feels like velvet to...
Read full commentPosted in Florida (1987)
Hi Paul,
Posted on Thu, 10 Feb 2022
Hi Paul,
you know I wish this story could have gone on longer, it ended and left me wanting more. Definitely a story up my street, and loving the way you write.
Thanks for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Enchantress of Avalon (Part Two of Two)
This is the beginning of a
Posted on Wed, 09 Feb 2022
This is the beginning of a master piece story Paul. It's so professional and full of intriuge, just my cup of tea, also I love that it's set in Glastonbury, my all time favourite place.
Off to read part two with anticipation. ...
Read full commentPosted in The Enchantress of Avalon (Part One of Two)
This is such a special piece
Posted on Tue, 08 Feb 2022
This is such a special piece of writing Rhiannon. I love how you've woven information into this poem and let the reader see through your eyes the wonder and creation of a leaf.
Very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in One-leaf therapy
I can identify with your
Posted on Tue, 08 Feb 2022
I can identify with your words Jane. It's amazing how many people I see that look like someone I've known, but can't always place where from. Then there's others where I've been tempted to approach and been shocked to find out it's not really...
Read full commentPosted in Outline of a Man
Hi Turlough,
Posted on Fri, 04 Feb 2022
Hi Turlough,
a poem that moves so effortlessly, yet I can see you've put so much care and attention to detail into setting the scene of desperation.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Her Troubles
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