I have 1257 stories published in
7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5212403 times
and 522 of my stories have been cherry picked. 2816 of my 19,559 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2897 votes
The children of the Flying Fish shivered up on deck as they stood in line, each one had accepted their fate, there wasn't a tear in their eyes having...
2816 of my comments have received 2897 Great Feedback votes
1 Vote
Hi there Hades.
Posted on Wed, 26 Jan 2022
It seems like that last line has given you food for thought. I was just wondering why Zeus wants to see Ares? Hope there's more to come, or even the beginning of a new story.
Gosh Rhiannon, this sounds like some trek and quite a challenge with being so slippery in places. I hope you are okay after the fall, it can be very painful.
The poem and photo described give a sense of real adventure to your roaming, and...
A great poem that could be lyrics to a sea shanty Turlogh,
Posted on Tue, 25 Jan 2022
This is so haunting and imaginative, with such great rhythm and rhyme. The explanation of its seductive magnatism reminded me of the many sea shanties sung, of lost fishermen drawn to their death.
this is a fine tribute to the Wishing tree, you have so many beautiful descriptions that I connected with when I went there. We have a similar tree at Avebury, it's up on one of the ridges, and Druids also hang offerings of...
at first I thought the photo was a shower head, but the more I look, it seems to resemble some kind of UFO. I loved the story, always appreciate reading the strangeness of these happenings, especially as I've always been a...
Sorry I'm a bit late to your story, I wanted to read this part through fresh eyes. You've always bought the dialogue together so well throughout this story Hades.Persehphone's devotion to Hades is understandable with what he offers her, but at...
I was so fascinated by Cardinal Father John studying the violin at ten years of age, and to think that he might have been another Paganini had he not been a Doctor of the Church, he must have been so talanted. Also I would agree with him about...
Hi there Hades.
Posted on Wed, 26 Jan 2022
It seems like that last line has given you food for thought. I was just wondering why Zeus wants to see Ares? Hope there's more to come, or even the beginning of a new story.
Wishing you good luck with the future.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment Epilogue
I've never heard of this
Posted on Tue, 25 Jan 2022
I've never heard of this little bird before. Your poem makes me want to go and read up on the Verdin.
Thank you for sharing Rachel.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Verdin, desert and thorn.
Gosh Rhiannon, this sounds
Posted on Tue, 25 Jan 2022
Gosh Rhiannon, this sounds like some trek and quite a challenge with being so slippery in places. I hope you are okay after the fall, it can be very painful.
The poem and photo described give a sense of real adventure to your roaming, and...
Read full commentPosted in Roam with me to the footbridge by the ford
A great poem that could be lyrics to a sea shanty Turlogh,
Posted on Tue, 25 Jan 2022
This is so haunting and imaginative, with such great rhythm and rhyme. The explanation of its seductive magnatism reminded me of the many sea shanties sung, of lost fishermen drawn to their death.
Yet there's a stunning allure that stirs...
Read full commentPosted in Lady Danube
Hi Paul,
Posted on Mon, 24 Jan 2022
Hi Paul,
this is a fine tribute to the Wishing tree, you have so many beautiful descriptions that I connected with when I went there. We have a similar tree at Avebury, it's up on one of the ridges, and Druids also hang offerings of...
Read full commentPosted in The Wishing Tree (of Glastonbury Tor)
Hi Jane,
Posted on Sat, 22 Jan 2022
Hi Jane,
at first I thought the photo was a shower head, but the more I look, it seems to resemble some kind of UFO. I loved the story, always appreciate reading the strangeness of these happenings, especially as I've always been a...
Read full commentPosted in Beavers Fag Break (they mostly come at night, mostly)
Sorry I'm a bit late to your
Posted on Fri, 21 Jan 2022
Sorry I'm a bit late to your story, I wanted to read this part through fresh eyes. You've always bought the dialogue together so well throughout this story Hades.Persehphone's devotion to Hades is understandable with what he offers her, but at...
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 50
I was so fascinated by
Posted on Wed, 19 Jan 2022
I was so fascinated by Cardinal Father John studying the violin at ten years of age, and to think that he might have been another Paganini had he not been a Doctor of the Church, he must have been so talanted. Also I would agree with him about...
Read full commentPosted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 22
Hi Hades,
Posted on Tue, 18 Jan 2022
I think Malbourne got his just reward, Hornblende was right about him, he was a bit of a bad character.
I do hope things work out for Oren Phileus, he's been through so much and deserves some more luck. You've done such a great job with...
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 49
Hi Paul,
Posted on Tue, 18 Jan 2022
Hi Paul,
I think these lines sum up the poem for me:-
Shafts of moonlight-dreams,
memories lost, untold millennia,
torrents that turned to trickles,
tales forged under dark skies
to signposts marked...
Read full commentPosted in Fading of Legends
Pages