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In the coolness of the night, millions of jewelled stars sparkle; embroidered on a blackened canvas, but when comes the rising rays of light...images...
I can understand why they included it in their glossy promotional literature. A fine example of what you are seeing is written here, taking the reader on a journey to a place I'm sure not many people have been...I certainly have'nt been and will...
There's nothing better than a sky that's so full of such gorgous colours. I loved your poem of expression, it went with the photo and captured that scene so well.
I think the lock down has given many a new perspective on life. It's like we've entered a new era of living. It's good that you've kept a record of lockdown, it makes for a part of our history that one day others will beable to read about....
I have to say that I echo everything Paul has said, and couldn't have put it better myself. There was so much detail in the Dream Of Gerontius, I can understand why it was so popular. Also to have created so many poems while on his Mediterranean...
It seems like that last line has given you food for thought. I was just wondering why Zeus wants to see Ares? Hope there's more to come, or even the beginning of a new story.
Gosh Rhiannon, this sounds like some trek and quite a challenge with being so slippery in places. I hope you are okay after the fall, it can be very painful.
The poem and photo described give a sense of real adventure to your roaming, and...
A great poem that could be lyrics to a sea shanty Turlogh,
Posted on Tue, 25 Jan 2022
This is so haunting and imaginative, with such great rhythm and rhyme. The explanation of its seductive magnatism reminded me of the many sea shanties sung, of lost fishermen drawn to their death.
This is a charming story,
Posted on Sun, 30 Jan 2022
This is a charming story, full of the wonder of childhood. On to next part.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Locksmith (Part 1)
Hi Turlough,
Posted on Sun, 30 Jan 2022
I can understand why they included it in their glossy promotional literature. A fine example of what you are seeing is written here, taking the reader on a journey to a place I'm sure not many people have been...I certainly have'nt been and will...
Read full commentPosted in Maglic Moments
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Fri, 28 Jan 2022
There's nothing better than a sky that's so full of such gorgous colours. I loved your poem of expression, it went with the photo and captured that scene so well.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Some January colour
Hi there Hades,
Posted on Wed, 26 Jan 2022
thank you so much for coming back and explaining. I'm so thick at times, because I'm sure others understood.
Your story is so inspiring, it's encouraged me to get creative with a new poem, so thank you.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment Epilogue
I think the lock down has
Posted on Wed, 26 Jan 2022
I think the lock down has given many a new perspective on life. It's like we've entered a new era of living. It's good that you've kept a record of lockdown, it makes for a part of our history that one day others will beable to read about....
Read full commentPosted in Creative Life In The Virus Age (Why don't we all just stay at home?)
Hi Jean,
Posted on Wed, 26 Jan 2022
I have to say that I echo everything Paul has said, and couldn't have put it better myself. There was so much detail in the Dream Of Gerontius, I can understand why it was so popular. Also to have created so many poems while on his Mediterranean...
Read full commentPosted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 23
Hi there Hades.
Posted on Wed, 26 Jan 2022
It seems like that last line has given you food for thought. I was just wondering why Zeus wants to see Ares? Hope there's more to come, or even the beginning of a new story.
Wishing you good luck with the future.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment Epilogue
I've never heard of this
Posted on Tue, 25 Jan 2022
I've never heard of this little bird before. Your poem makes me want to go and read up on the Verdin.
Thank you for sharing Rachel.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Verdin, desert and thorn.
Gosh Rhiannon, this sounds
Posted on Tue, 25 Jan 2022
Gosh Rhiannon, this sounds like some trek and quite a challenge with being so slippery in places. I hope you are okay after the fall, it can be very painful.
The poem and photo described give a sense of real adventure to your roaming, and...
Read full commentPosted in Roam with me to the footbridge by the ford
A great poem that could be lyrics to a sea shanty Turlogh,
Posted on Tue, 25 Jan 2022
This is so haunting and imaginative, with such great rhythm and rhyme. The explanation of its seductive magnatism reminded me of the many sea shanties sung, of lost fishermen drawn to their death.
Yet there's a stunning allure that stirs...
Read full commentPosted in Lady Danube
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