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I have 1266 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5764379 times and 531 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2842 of my 19,636 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2922 votes

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Dwellers of the New World Chapter Eighteen ( Pt 5 ) Out Of The Darkness

Brad had been lost for words, but suddenly spoke up. “We really need to get out of here quickly, there's no telling when Gregor and his men will come...

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Blessed with child a flower she blossoms; her arms outstretched reaching to be desired, trying to balance her life her once burlesque figure, those...

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Eighteen ( Pt 4 ) Into The Unknown

For a long while they continued on down the tunnel. Simon began to worry as the owl had not returned, he doubted himself as a sudden cold breeze came...

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Eighteen ( Pt 3 ) Savage Behaviour continued...

Simon dashed over to the owl, but the bird hooted and flew off to one of the entrances hooting again. “Dad!” Said Simon, “I think he wants us to...

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Eighteen ( Pt 3 ) Savage Behaviour

Outside on the moors the air became even thicker, as four figures huddled down below one of the ridges. Every so often the fog would leave a hazy...

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2842 of my comments have received 2922 Great Feedback votes

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The outlook for St John and

Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022

The outlook for St John and Cece is certainly bleak. It all sounds so real.

Perfect story telling Jane.

Jenny.

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Posted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - 15

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Your story was so full of

Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022

Your story was so full of clear descriptions, that I felt like I was there. The ending was perfect too.

Some parts reminded me of an old film called Soylent Green. Don't know if you've heard of it, but I think it would be your kind of film...

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Posted in The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 3 of 3)

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Hi insert,

Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022

Hi insert,

I'm so happy you liked this poem, and the cherries made my day. Thank you so much.

I'm feeling a lot better today, but the intense heat has been giving me headaches and aches and pains all over. I do miss my walks too,...

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Posted in Sweet Violet

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Such a depressing future that

Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022

Such a depressing future that I hope isn't a sign of things to come Paul.

I'll look at it as just being a great imaginative story.

Jenny.

 

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Posted in The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 2 of 3)

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This is such an engaging poem

Posted on Mon, 20 Jun 2022

This is such an engaging poem Richard.

Moments like this are to be cherished. Put a smile on my face. ...

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Posted in Orderly Re-Union

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This is such an endearing

Posted on Sun, 19 Jun 2022

This is such an endearing read. Living through such a lasting relationship with a real friend who passes can be so sad. But remembering the great times had together is always the best conclusion.

This bought back memories of my own dog who...

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Posted in I Remember

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It's good to beable to read

Posted on Sat, 18 Jun 2022

It's good to beable to read St John's thoughts, and how he percieves his life. You've done a great job at communicating them too. 

Believable facts of a midlife crisis...that ring so true.

Still very much enjoying.

Jenny.

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Posted in ST Vasectomy Clinic - 14

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Hi Paul, loved this poem,

Posted on Fri, 17 Jun 2022

Hi Paul, loved this poem, full of drama and haunting discovery. I think Po would be very grateful to think he inspired this poem. You've really captured his essence.

Jenny.

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Posted in The Raven Returned

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Hi Jane,

Posted on Wed, 15 Jun 2022

It seems to me Cece and St John are on different pages. I wonder if they actually talked deeply enough about having this baby. She needs to be careful, because at the moment St John holds all the cards.

It's a very complex situation, that...

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Posted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - 13

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I thought you captured Cece's

Posted on Mon, 13 Jun 2022

I thought you captured Cece's thoughts so well in this part. I also found it fascinating how you described her as a grain of salt inside a giant mouth...a great metaphore.

Still enjoying Jane.

Jenny.

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Posted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - 12

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