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Brad had been lost for words, but suddenly spoke up. “We really need to get out of here quickly, there's no telling when Gregor and his men will come...
For a long while they continued on down the tunnel. Simon began to worry as the owl had not returned, he doubted himself as a sudden cold breeze came...
This is such an endearing read. Living through such a lasting relationship with a real friend who passes can be so sad. But remembering the great times had together is always the best conclusion.
Hi Paul, loved this poem, full of drama and haunting discovery. I think Po would be very grateful to think he inspired this poem. You've really captured his essence.
It seems to me Cece and St John are on different pages. I wonder if they actually talked deeply enough about having this baby. She needs to be careful, because at the moment St John holds all the cards.
I thought you captured Cece's thoughts so well in this part. I also found it fascinating how you described her as a grain of salt inside a giant mouth...a great metaphore.
The outlook for St John and
Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022
The outlook for St John and Cece is certainly bleak. It all sounds so real.
Perfect story telling Jane.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - 15
Your story was so full of
Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022
Your story was so full of clear descriptions, that I felt like I was there. The ending was perfect too.
Some parts reminded me of an old film called Soylent Green. Don't know if you've heard of it, but I think it would be your kind of film...
Read full commentPosted in The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 3 of 3)
Hi insert,
Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022
Hi insert,
I'm so happy you liked this poem, and the cherries made my day. Thank you so much.
I'm feeling a lot better today, but the intense heat has been giving me headaches and aches and pains all over. I do miss my walks too,...
Read full commentPosted in Sweet Violet
Such a depressing future that
Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022
Such a depressing future that I hope isn't a sign of things to come Paul.
I'll look at it as just being a great imaginative story.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 2 of 3)
This is such an engaging poem
Posted on Mon, 20 Jun 2022
This is such an engaging poem Richard.
Moments like this are to be cherished. Put a smile on my face. ...
Read full commentPosted in Orderly Re-Union
This is such an endearing
Posted on Sun, 19 Jun 2022
This is such an endearing read. Living through such a lasting relationship with a real friend who passes can be so sad. But remembering the great times had together is always the best conclusion.
This bought back memories of my own dog who...
Read full commentPosted in I Remember
It's good to beable to read
Posted on Sat, 18 Jun 2022
It's good to beable to read St John's thoughts, and how he percieves his life. You've done a great job at communicating them too.
Believable facts of a midlife crisis...that ring so true.
Still very much enjoying.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in ST Vasectomy Clinic - 14
Hi Paul, loved this poem,
Posted on Fri, 17 Jun 2022
Hi Paul, loved this poem, full of drama and haunting discovery. I think Po would be very grateful to think he inspired this poem. You've really captured his essence.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Raven Returned
Hi Jane,
Posted on Wed, 15 Jun 2022
It seems to me Cece and St John are on different pages. I wonder if they actually talked deeply enough about having this baby. She needs to be careful, because at the moment St John holds all the cards.
It's a very complex situation, that...
Read full commentPosted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - 13
I thought you captured Cece's
Posted on Mon, 13 Jun 2022
I thought you captured Cece's thoughts so well in this part. I also found it fascinating how you described her as a grain of salt inside a giant mouth...a great metaphore.
Still enjoying Jane.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - 12
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