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I have 1269 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 6175600 times and 537 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2868 of my 19,735 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2948 votes

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Promises Beyond The Veil Of Light ( PT 17 )

Picture by pixabay free images. Story In Forty Eight Parts. Part Seventeen It was now 9.30pm on that very same Monday that John Chapman set off for...

Promises Beyond The Veil Of Light (PT 16 )

Picture by pixabay free images. Part Sixteen Morning was gradually moving into afternoon as Kendrick's tank purred down road after road. He was...
Cherry

Promises Beyond The Veil Of Light ( PT 15 )

Picture by pixabay free images. A Story In Forty Eight Parts. Part Fifteen Monday morning came, it was always busy for Kendrick, spending a good part...

Promises Beyond The Veil Of Light ( PT 14 )

Picture by pixabay free images. Part Fourteen It was mid morning as the sun appeared to play hide and seek, peeping every now and again from behind...
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Promises Beyond The Veil Of Light ( Pt 13 )

Picture by pixabay free images. Part Thirteen The bell went for start of school as Jason ran across the playground and in through the entrance, eager...

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2868 of my comments have received 2948 Great Feedback votes

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A great story, relevant to

Posted on Wed, 13 Sep 2023

A great story, relevant to the here and now with all the dangerous concerns going on in this troubled world. Yet at the end you leave us with hope that Frank just may survive to see another story written about him by you.

Jenny.

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Posted in Devil's Advocate

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Hi Rhiannon,

Posted on Thu, 14 Sep 2023

Hi Rhiannon,

this poem is so appropriate for any parent or grandparent watching a very young child consume jam on toast.

Perfect for the I P.

Jenny.

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Posted in Toddler Tea!

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Hello Di,

Posted on Sat, 09 Sep 2023

Hello Di,

you know I'm desperate for Autumn to arrive. Those beautiful bohemian colours of fallen leaves, the welcoming wind to brush away the cobwebs of this heat, which leaves me breathless and lethargic.

I just thought with this...

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Posted in Expanding The Mind

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Definitely reminds me of some

Posted on Fri, 08 Sep 2023

Definitely reminds me of some of the jumble sales I went to back in the 1970s...what bargins there were to be found.

I found these lines amusing:-

half dentures ready to chatter

in the hand of the unexpected finder.

It...

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Posted in Clothes for Friendless Men

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Another ideal poem for the I.

Posted on Sat, 09 Sep 2023

Another ideal poem for the I. P. especially with the weather conditions at the moment.

Well done Rhiannon. ...

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Posted in Heatwave

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Hi Rhiannon,

Posted on Fri, 08 Sep 2023

Hi Rhiannon,

I could do with some of your descriptions in your poem. It's far too hot for me at the moment. That's why I really enjoyed this one.

Thank you for sharing.

Jenny.

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Posted in Freshening!

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That wonderful feeling of a

Posted on Fri, 08 Sep 2023

That wonderful feeling of a clear night sky, feeling like you are part of the universe is described perfectly in your poem Richard.

Jenny.

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Posted in Look-Look UP

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Archibald trying to describe

Posted on Fri, 08 Sep 2023

Archibald trying to describe what a bonk was, gave me a smile. smiley He really has a...

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Posted in Sailing (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 34)

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Some great descriptions in

Posted on Thu, 07 Sep 2023

Some great descriptions in this poem Rhiannon. I like how you capture the drama in the first stanza, then the calm in the second. 

Also love the lines:-

water rippling, sunlight stippling;

here and there the river babbling,...

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Posted in Moods of Ocean and River

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Wow! This is a wonderful

Posted on Tue, 05 Sep 2023

Wow! This is a wonderful nature poem Richard. I love all that you convey.

Well deserved cherries too.

Jenny

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Posted in Another World

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