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A great story, relevant to
Posted on Wed, 13 Sep 2023
A great story, relevant to the here and now with all the dangerous concerns going on in this troubled world. Yet at the end you leave us with hope that Frank just may survive to see another story written about him by you.
you know I'm desperate for Autumn to arrive. Those beautiful bohemian colours of fallen leaves, the welcoming wind to brush away the cobwebs of this heat, which leaves me breathless and lethargic.
A great story, relevant to
Posted on Wed, 13 Sep 2023
A great story, relevant to the here and now with all the dangerous concerns going on in this troubled world. Yet at the end you leave us with hope that Frank just may survive to see another story written about him by you.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Devil's Advocate
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Thu, 14 Sep 2023
Hi Rhiannon,
this poem is so appropriate for any parent or grandparent watching a very young child consume jam on toast.
Perfect for the I P.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Toddler Tea!
Hello Di,
Posted on Sat, 09 Sep 2023
Hello Di,
you know I'm desperate for Autumn to arrive. Those beautiful bohemian colours of fallen leaves, the welcoming wind to brush away the cobwebs of this heat, which leaves me breathless and lethargic.
I just thought with this...
Read full commentPosted in Expanding The Mind
Definitely reminds me of some
Posted on Fri, 08 Sep 2023
Definitely reminds me of some of the jumble sales I went to back in the 1970s...what bargins there were to be found.
I found these lines amusing:-
half dentures ready to chatter
in the hand of the unexpected finder.
It...
Read full commentPosted in Clothes for Friendless Men
Another ideal poem for the I.
Posted on Sat, 09 Sep 2023
Another ideal poem for the I. P. especially with the weather conditions at the moment.
Well done Rhiannon. ...
Read full commentPosted in Heatwave
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Fri, 08 Sep 2023
Hi Rhiannon,
I could do with some of your descriptions in your poem. It's far too hot for me at the moment. That's why I really enjoyed this one.
Thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Freshening!
That wonderful feeling of a
Posted on Fri, 08 Sep 2023
That wonderful feeling of a clear night sky, feeling like you are part of the universe is described perfectly in your poem Richard.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Look-Look UP
Archibald trying to describe
Posted on Fri, 08 Sep 2023
Archibald trying to describe what a bonk was, gave me a smile.
He really has a...
Read full commentPosted in Sailing (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 34)
Some great descriptions in
Posted on Thu, 07 Sep 2023
Some great descriptions in this poem Rhiannon. I like how you capture the drama in the first stanza, then the calm in the second.
Also love the lines:-
water rippling, sunlight stippling;
here and there the river babbling,...
Read full commentPosted in Moods of Ocean and River
Wow! This is a wonderful
Posted on Tue, 05 Sep 2023
Wow! This is a wonderful nature poem Richard. I love all that you convey.
Well deserved cherries too.
Jenny
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