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image by pixabay free to use. In the Summertime me and my brother Jake can think of nothing better than to fly up – up and away in our red and green...
Hi Paul, I'm glad you liked my poem. I was trying to capture the atmosphere of dark winter, when mystery is all around, and my pen just ran away with the I P this week.
Your writing shows you want the best for Mary. You've created a young teenager with lost dreams, but someone who doesn't give up, but strives to make the best out of her situation. I like how she even surprises herself at times.
You've captured so much of the natural beauty in your photos with this poem Rhiannon. I can imagine the patchwork display of the Shropshire hills, and your lilting rhythm of the river's tumbling sound must have been so healing.
Hello Di, you know with a little help from the fairies we've managed to keep the garden fairly wild and free. But as I get on in age it becomes harder to cope. It was kind of you to notice the connection between the garden and woman kind. I will...
Ah! Young love...they're both
Posted on Mon, 21 Nov 2022
Ah! Young love...they're both smitten.
Looking forward to more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 17
Hi Paul, I'm glad you liked
Posted on Mon, 21 Nov 2022
Hi Paul, I'm glad you liked my poem. I was trying to capture the atmosphere of dark winter, when mystery is all around, and my pen just ran away with the I P this week.
Thank you for reading and your kind words.
Jenny. ...
Read full commentPosted in At Winter's Darkest Hour
Some wonderful use of natures
Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022
Some wonderful use of natures beauty in this poem Richard. Very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Jasper in the Sun 2
An enjoyable read on a cold,
Posted on Mon, 21 Nov 2022
An enjoyable read on a cold, dank Monday afternoon.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Moths Ate My Knickers
Still reading and enjoying.
Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022
Still reading and enjoying.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 16
Your writing shows you want
Posted on Sat, 19 Nov 2022
Your writing shows you want the best for Mary. You've created a young teenager with lost dreams, but someone who doesn't give up, but strives to make the best out of her situation. I like how she even surprises herself at times.
Keep the...
Read full commentPosted in Runaway Mother chapter 15
You've captured so much of
Posted on Sat, 19 Nov 2022
You've captured so much of the natural beauty in your photos with this poem Rhiannon. I can imagine the patchwork display of the Shropshire hills, and your lilting rhythm of the river's tumbling sound must have been so healing.
Such a...
Read full commentPosted in by Craven Arms
You do have a way to go yet
Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022
You do have a way to go yet Jean, but you always manage to keep your spirits up somehow, and for that I commend your strong spirit.
Hope you can surround yourself with love and happiness, so that the time will go by quickly. I wish for...
Read full commentPosted in Chemo 15
Such s visual scene capturing
Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022
Such s visual scene capturing what is seen, not only through a child's eyes, but also the writer's too.
I loved:-
cradled in my arms, legs dangle below,
my daughter carried on gasps of cold air,
roaming through flora...
Read full commentPosted in Memories from Falls Past
Hello Di, you know with a
Posted on Thu, 17 Nov 2022
Hello Di, you know with a little help from the fairies we've managed to keep the garden fairly wild and free. But as I get on in age it becomes harder to cope. It was kind of you to notice the connection between the garden and woman kind. I will...
Read full commentPosted in To A Brand New Day
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