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It's a sad fact that we live
Posted on Wed, 31 May 2023
It's a sad fact that we live in an age where you have to be so careful with not only car insurance, but a lot of other things too. I feel especially sorry for old people that don't understand technology. I always use the phone, because I too like...
When I read your comment that this poem was about a true incident, it had me in mind of the strange foods that some people will devour that I've seen on tv. I like how you've given the poem a rhythm and rhyme, gives it such a poetic stance that...
To have a house filled with music is such a treasure. Is this about your son learning a new song Di? If It is, it must be wonderful to have a young person who wants to be a musician, and through your poem it sounds like you give him much...
Hi Paul, This was like watching one of those nature watch programmes on tv, but in written form. It's wonderful that you can record your experience in a poem. I felt the drama of catching a glimpse of these fine creatures.
I'm with you on enjoying imagining wormholes and other life out there. Earth is so small in the grand scheme of the universe, it makes sense that their should be many planets with life and a need to search the galaxies, maybe even...
your words are very welcoming. Yes I did dedicate myself to finishing this story, however long it took me. It was fun empathizing with the characters and how they would react to each situation that arised.
It's a sad fact that we live
Posted on Wed, 31 May 2023
It's a sad fact that we live in an age where you have to be so careful with not only car insurance, but a lot of other things too. I feel especially sorry for old people that don't understand technology. I always use the phone, because I too like...
Read full commentPosted in It Is Enough To Make You Walk!
When I read your comment that
Posted on Wed, 31 May 2023
When I read your comment that this poem was about a true incident, it had me in mind of the strange foods that some people will devour that I've seen on tv. I like how you've given the poem a rhythm and rhyme, gives it such a poetic stance that...
Read full commentPosted in Ladies who lunch at The Entomol
Lovely poem Richard, and a
Posted on Thu, 01 Jun 2023
Lovely poem Richard, and a great tribute to the fine blackbird.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Joy of Flying
To have a house filled with
Posted on Wed, 31 May 2023
To have a house filled with music is such a treasure. Is this about your son learning a new song Di? If It is, it must be wonderful to have a young person who wants to be a musician, and through your poem it sounds like you give him much...
Read full commentPosted in new song
Hi Paul, This was like watching one of
Posted on Tue, 30 May 2023
Hi Paul, This was like watching one of those nature watch programmes on tv, but in written form. It's wonderful that you can record your experience in a poem. I felt the drama of catching a glimpse of these fine creatures.
I can imagine it...
Read full commentPosted in Ranthambore
Another enjoyable amusing
Posted on Fri, 26 May 2023
Another enjoyable amusing read that absorbed my interest.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Ocean Drive (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 19)
Liquid amber ditchwater
Posted on Thu, 25 May 2023
Liquid amber ditchwater
shallows to a page flat
and far away another species
burns both futures
to keep today's wrongs a little longer
I found these lines so profound. The complexity of your poem gives...
Read full commentPosted in inklings
Hi Paul,
Posted on Sat, 11 Jul 2015
Hi Paul,
I'm with you on enjoying imagining wormholes and other life out there. Earth is so small in the grand scheme of the universe, it makes sense that their should be many planets with life and a need to search the galaxies, maybe even...
Read full commentPosted in Dwellers of the New World Chapter Sixteen ( Pt 3 ) Easy Does It
Hi Paul,
Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2015
Hi Paul,
your words are very welcoming. Yes I did dedicate myself to finishing this story, however long it took me. It was fun empathizing with the characters and how they would react to each situation that arised.
There were so...
Read full commentPosted in Dwellers of the New World Chapter Fifteen ( Pt 14 ) Sad Goodbyes
Being able to share this
Posted on Tue, 26 Aug 2014
Being able to share this story is like a tonic Paul. I'm glad that the rhythm of my writing made it easier to follow.
I did get lost in this story as I wrote, and it was good to get my thoughts down and place them within an adventure....
Read full commentPosted in Dwellers of the New World Chapter Fourteen ( Pt 9 ) Mysterious Disappearances
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