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As I lay there slithering further down the bath, I suddenly awoke with a jolt as my mouth and nose were now submerged beneath the freezing cold water...
Dear diary...love it or hate it, I was just twelve years old when I discovered marmite...no just kidding! What I'm really trying to say is; that back...
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Feels like a true story of
Posted on Tue, 06 Mar 2018
Feels like a true story of the way many people feel. Makes me glad I'm out of the rat race, as I hated the last job I had and couldn't wait to be made redundant.
I could relate to your writing, needing to leave home as soon as possible and moving away. Those early years I like you thought the only way to experience life was to get out there and take on the challenges that came my way. ...
Great to read such an interesting part of your young history. Making history is what writing is all about and I feel privillaged to have read yours Elsie.
you know I think you were born in the wrong era. Your words are so magical and give me a sense of Pre-Raphaelite which I so adore. Also the love you convey in this poem is so beautifully told.
I loved your impression of my poem. Sunsets are all different as you so rightly pointed out. To have a hospital window facing directly where the sun rises is a unique experience in itself, especially when it looks out over the...
Feels like a true story of
Posted on Tue, 06 Mar 2018
Feels like a true story of the way many people feel. Makes me glad I'm out of the rat race, as I hated the last job I had and couldn't wait to be made redundant.
Good read.
Jenny.
Posted in Filling time - 2
Great piece of writing
Posted on Sun, 04 Mar 2018
Great piece of writing Shackleton and what a great way to be remembered by your children.
Very much enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in I Saw My Old Mate Again
What a great idea for a poem
Posted on Fri, 23 Feb 2018
What a great idea for a poem. Love the idea of the title, 'invisible air is cut and sown' kind of said it all for me.
Enjoyed and thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in emperor's new clothes
Isn't it great to look back
Posted on Mon, 19 Feb 2018
Isn't it great to look back Richard. Those times when we could play all day and chase our dreams.
I enjoyed reading your poem and how you welcomed the snow.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Snow
Just loved your poem, had me
Posted on Thu, 15 Feb 2018
Just loved your poem, had me absorbed in the story within.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Old Dog-Fox In Bleak Midwinter
Hi Elsie,
Posted on Mon, 12 Feb 2018
Hi Elsie,
I could relate to your writing, needing to leave home as soon as possible and moving away. Those early years I like you thought the only way to experience life was to get out there and take on the challenges that came my way. ...
Read full commentPosted in Les Rowse, Philippe and I , final chapter.
Great to read such an
Posted on Tue, 06 Feb 2018
Great to read such an interesting part of your young history. Making history is what writing is all about and I feel privillaged to have read yours Elsie.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Les Rowse, Philippe and I Part 2
The magic and soul most
Posted on Tue, 30 Jan 2018
The magic and soul most certainly do exist. Your piece of writing showed that they do and they're my feelings too completely.
Loved all your ideas here and thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Art of Believing
Hello Geraldine,
Posted on Mon, 22 Jan 2018
Hello Geraldine,
you know I think you were born in the wrong era. Your words are so magical and give me a sense of Pre-Raphaelite which I so adore. Also the love you convey in this poem is so beautifully told.
Engaging, passionate...
Read full commentPosted in Lancelot's Lament.
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2018
Hi Rhiannon,
I loved your impression of my poem. Sunsets are all different as you so rightly pointed out. To have a hospital window facing directly where the sun rises is a unique experience in itself, especially when it looks out over the...
Read full commentPosted in Undying Beauty
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