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Afternoon drifted on as the sun moved slowly from South around towards West, casting leafy shadows across the lush green lawn. Alice was oblivious to...
Standing at the door that led off from the kitchen down to what her husband called, 'the wine cellar,' Alice bit her bottom lip feeling a slight edge...
Alice was awoken suddenly in the early hours of the morning by the crashing sound of thunder and din of heavy rain pelting against her bedroom window...
2868 of my comments have received 2948 Great Feedback votes
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I always doodle if I'm on the
Posted on Sat, 13 May 2023
I always doodle if I'm on the phone and waiting in a queue. Sometimes I'm surprised at what I create, like faces and flowers. It's fun and passes the time.
reading this part makes me think life can seems so unbelievably cruel, to put you through so much anxiety. You deserve a long break from the worry and pressure.
You are one strong lady who has the courage and strength...
some evocative language described in your poem, of a revered land and its people, that is stunningly beautiful and mysterious. I especially loved stanzas three, four and five.
If only Emily knew what was going on as the plot thickens. You've woven a gripping storyline full of mysterious characters, and I love how you've based it around the dog.
Diana touched so many hearts. I remember working nights when she was in that car crash. I cried so much, I had to go home, my heart was beating so fast, the shock was so great. Even now as I type, my eyes are filling up with emotion.
I always doodle if I'm on the
Posted on Sat, 13 May 2023
I always doodle if I'm on the phone and waiting in a queue. Sometimes I'm surprised at what I create, like faces and flowers. It's fun and passes the time.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Doodle.
It was a pleasure to read
Posted on Sat, 13 May 2023
It was a pleasure to read your story.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Glimpse of brighter skies
You describe the drama of the
Posted on Fri, 12 May 2023
You describe the drama of the sky, and have captured how quickly it can change with the impressive movement of the clouds.
The photos are eye catching too.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Dramatic Sky
Dear Jean,
Posted on Fri, 12 May 2023
Dear Jean,
reading this part makes me think life can seems so unbelievably cruel, to put you through so much anxiety. You deserve a long break from the worry and pressure.
You are one strong lady who has the courage and strength...
Read full commentPosted in Cippy and Bella
Hi Paul,
Posted on Wed, 10 May 2023
Hi Paul,
some evocative language described in your poem, of a revered land and its people, that is stunningly beautiful and mysterious. I especially loved stanzas three, four and five.
Thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Geisha
Was it real, or did he dream?
Posted on Wed, 10 May 2023
Was it real, or did he dream? I like how you leave the reader to make up their own mind as to the ending, combining a deep knowledge of the artist.
Great poem for the I P.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Somewhere Outside Cherbourg
I love that metaphore: a
Posted on Mon, 08 May 2023
I love that metaphore: a green,sea with the froth of flowers, such an imaginative scene to behold, and those photos set the poem off perfectly.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Green 'Sea'
A beautiful and imaginative
Posted on Sun, 07 May 2023
A beautiful and imaginative poem written from the heart.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Creator of skills
If only Emily knew what was
Posted on Sun, 07 May 2023
If only Emily knew what was going on as the plot thickens. You've woven a gripping storyline full of mysterious characters, and I love how you've based it around the dog.
Still very much enjoying.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "The Coffee House Spy" 9
Diana touched so many hearts.
Posted on Sat, 06 May 2023
Diana touched so many hearts. I remember working nights when she was in that car crash. I cried so much, I had to go home, my heart was beating so fast, the shock was so great. Even now as I type, my eyes are filling up with emotion.
I...
Read full commentPosted in Princess Diana Part Two
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