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This poem was inspired by an unforgettable and award winning video from Iceland, conceived by and supervised by the musical group:- Sigur Ros / Svefn...
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"It's just like the Mystery
Posted on Thu, 09 Mar 2023
"It's just like the Mystery Machine," Archibald said, happily, bouncing in his seat with excitement as they pulled out of the car lot, "I feel like Scooby-Doo!"
I could just visulize the scene of this flowery vehicle, and Archibald loving...
I'm a sensitive person too, so I can completely understand where you were coming from. It's perfectly normal and shows you're a considerate natured human being, who not only has feelings, but understands the feelings of others too.
Where would we be without dreams, that time to escape reality, to beable to travel and do things we can no longer achieve. I dream every night and look forward to my nightly conquests, moving from one scene to another in seconds.
Oh dear! I'm not sure that's such a great idea to keep the bike. You're keeping the story so interesting and leaving me in suspense as to what will happen next...sign of great writing. ...
This story comes from your rich imagination Jane. It also holds a lot of truth in the idea of the old lady hiding the valued ring in such an obscure place. My admiration goes out to you for this masterpiece of writing.
It sounds like you have collected many memories in your cabinet. It's always sad when you have to downsize and get rid of personal items. This happened to me just before the covid epidemic broke out, we had many trips to the charity shop, it's so...
"It's just like the Mystery
Posted on Thu, 09 Mar 2023
"It's just like the Mystery Machine," Archibald said, happily, bouncing in his seat with excitement as they pulled out of the car lot, "I feel like Scooby-Doo!"
I could just visulize the scene of this flowery vehicle, and Archibald loving...
Read full commentPosted in "Oh!" (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 8)
This poem is absolutely
Posted on Fri, 10 Mar 2023
This poem is absolutely stunning Paul. Your metaphors are spot on, letting the poem come alive.
One of my favourites of yours and thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Spring Skies (After the Dogs of Winter)
I'm a sensitive person too,
Posted on Wed, 08 Mar 2023
I'm a sensitive person too, so I can completely understand where you were coming from. It's perfectly normal and shows you're a considerate natured human being, who not only has feelings, but understands the feelings of others too.
There's...
Read full commentPosted in Perspective.
Where would we be without
Posted on Thu, 09 Mar 2023
Where would we be without dreams, that time to escape reality, to beable to travel and do things we can no longer achieve. I dream every night and look forward to my nightly conquests, moving from one scene to another in seconds.
I bet...
Read full commentPosted in The Mystery.
Oh dear! I'm not sure that's
Posted on Thu, 09 Mar 2023
Oh dear! I'm not sure that's such a great idea to keep the bike. You're keeping the story so interesting and leaving me in suspense as to what will happen next...sign of great writing. ...
Read full commentPosted in Red Bicycle 8-10
There was so much drama in
Posted on Wed, 08 Mar 2023
There was so much drama in this part, I was on the edge of my seat.
Brilliant writing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Red Bicycle 6-7
Wow! What an extraordinary
Posted on Tue, 07 Mar 2023
Wow! What an extraordinary moment to end on. Now I'm really intrigued to find out more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Red Bicycle 3-5
This story comes from your
Posted on Mon, 06 Mar 2023
This story comes from your rich imagination Jane. It also holds a lot of truth in the idea of the old lady hiding the valued ring in such an obscure place. My admiration goes out to you for this masterpiece of writing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Right to Sparkle
It sounds like you have
Posted on Tue, 07 Mar 2023
It sounds like you have collected many memories in your cabinet. It's always sad when you have to downsize and get rid of personal items. This happened to me just before the covid epidemic broke out, we had many trips to the charity shop, it's so...
Read full commentPosted in Memory Medley
A sad turn of events for this
Posted on Mon, 06 Mar 2023
A sad turn of events for this family. I look forward to reading more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Red Bicycle 1-2
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