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Poor little brother sleeps in a corner on the floor, gets woken on a balmy night when he hears his pa pa roar, wiping eyes and sitting up shakes with...
Gran used to tell me: significance gave value to a biscuit tin full of old family photos, lost memories some now hazy, as time moves on ragged at the...
We shot through space resembling bullets from a gun – flew across the milky way as stars exploded all around, souls spirited away, slipping into slow...
2842 of my comments have received 2922 Great Feedback votes
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I'm a sensitive person too,
Posted on Wed, 08 Mar 2023
I'm a sensitive person too, so I can completely understand where you were coming from. It's perfectly normal and shows you're a considerate natured human being, who not only has feelings, but understands the feelings of others too.
Where would we be without dreams, that time to escape reality, to beable to travel and do things we can no longer achieve. I dream every night and look forward to my nightly conquests, moving from one scene to another in seconds.
Oh dear! I'm not sure that's such a great idea to keep the bike. You're keeping the story so interesting and leaving me in suspense as to what will happen next...sign of great writing. ...
This story comes from your rich imagination Jane. It also holds a lot of truth in the idea of the old lady hiding the valued ring in such an obscure place. My admiration goes out to you for this masterpiece of writing.
It sounds like you have collected many memories in your cabinet. It's always sad when you have to downsize and get rid of personal items. This happened to me just before the covid epidemic broke out, we had many trips to the charity shop, it's so...
This reminded me of a cat I once had who would bring home frogs in its mouth. It broke my heart as frogs scream, and they're also poisonous if in the mouth for too long.
I don't have any pets now, can't go through the trauma and worry...
I'm a sensitive person too,
Posted on Wed, 08 Mar 2023
I'm a sensitive person too, so I can completely understand where you were coming from. It's perfectly normal and shows you're a considerate natured human being, who not only has feelings, but understands the feelings of others too.
There's...
Read full commentPosted in Perspective.
Where would we be without
Posted on Thu, 09 Mar 2023
Where would we be without dreams, that time to escape reality, to beable to travel and do things we can no longer achieve. I dream every night and look forward to my nightly conquests, moving from one scene to another in seconds.
I bet...
Read full commentPosted in The Mystery.
Oh dear! I'm not sure that's
Posted on Thu, 09 Mar 2023
Oh dear! I'm not sure that's such a great idea to keep the bike. You're keeping the story so interesting and leaving me in suspense as to what will happen next...sign of great writing. ...
Read full commentPosted in Red Bicycle 8-10
There was so much drama in
Posted on Wed, 08 Mar 2023
There was so much drama in this part, I was on the edge of my seat.
Brilliant writing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Red Bicycle 6-7
Wow! What an extraordinary
Posted on Tue, 07 Mar 2023
Wow! What an extraordinary moment to end on. Now I'm really intrigued to find out more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Red Bicycle 3-5
This story comes from your
Posted on Mon, 06 Mar 2023
This story comes from your rich imagination Jane. It also holds a lot of truth in the idea of the old lady hiding the valued ring in such an obscure place. My admiration goes out to you for this masterpiece of writing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Right to Sparkle
It sounds like you have
Posted on Tue, 07 Mar 2023
It sounds like you have collected many memories in your cabinet. It's always sad when you have to downsize and get rid of personal items. This happened to me just before the covid epidemic broke out, we had many trips to the charity shop, it's so...
Read full commentPosted in Memory Medley
A sad turn of events for this
Posted on Mon, 06 Mar 2023
A sad turn of events for this family. I look forward to reading more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Red Bicycle 1-2
This reminded me of a cat I
Posted on Sat, 04 Mar 2023
This reminded me of a cat I once had who would bring home frogs in its mouth. It broke my heart as frogs scream, and they're also poisonous if in the mouth for too long.
I don't have any pets now, can't go through the trauma and worry...
Read full commentPosted in Numbers Three, Four, Five, Six , Seven, Eight, Nine, Ten ......
Ha! Ha! There's a moral to
Posted on Sun, 05 Mar 2023
Ha! Ha! There's a moral to this poem. If at first you don't suceed try, try again.
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Read full commentPosted in The Tall Bookcase
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