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Came from the backwoods unable to back-pedal, no retreating to a world once known...whimpers for her infants as only the moon hears their cold cries...
an effortless night furnished a personal illusion, we're together in the zone... if only for tonight; Uncomplicated dreams...though if truth be told...
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Hi Paul,
Posted on Tue, 05 Oct 2021
Hi Paul,
your poem speaks of those episodes in our lives, when we're like insects passing, aware of the other, yet in the blink of an eye with time forgotton...even when that person has made an impression, we don't recall all memories....
I felt I was there at the festival watching the whole scene pan out, with all the mysterys keeping me reading. Still very much enjoying and wondering about this Max character with his cat.
I can relate to this poem, used to love live music loud and proud, but just not able to cope with speakers turned up to their highest decibels, and the large crowds anymore, they leave my head spinning and body shaking with anxiety.
It's hard to imagine being under the thumb, and not a chance of sharing your own personal feelings for fear you'd offend your husband, life certainly wasn't easy for women back then.
People certainly did a lot of traveling in those days,...
Hi Paul,
Posted on Tue, 05 Oct 2021
Hi Paul,
your poem speaks of those episodes in our lives, when we're like insects passing, aware of the other, yet in the blink of an eye with time forgotton...even when that person has made an impression, we don't recall all memories....
Read full commentPosted in Strangers on a Street
Congrats on the well deserved
Posted on Sun, 03 Oct 2021
Congrats on the well deserved cherries Hades.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 41
You've written the idea of
Posted on Wed, 06 Oct 2021
You've written the idea of Mark moving into death brilliantly Hades, all those moments of meeting loved ones captured so well.
I'm left wondering what will happen next. Looking forward to finding out with anticipation.
Jenny....
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 42
Hi Penny,
Posted on Sat, 02 Oct 2021
Hi Penny,
I felt I was there at the festival watching the whole scene pan out, with all the mysterys keeping me reading. Still very much enjoying and wondering about this Max character with his cat.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 19
I agree with Paul, and couldn
Posted on Sun, 03 Oct 2021
I agree with Paul, and couldn't have put it better myself. You have all the makings of a novel.
I sometimes wonder about whether fantasy is based on truth, and your story comes that close to what I believe could be of some futuristic...
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 41
What a fantastic episode
Posted on Wed, 29 Sep 2021
What a fantastic episode Penny. I was hooked from beginning to end.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 18
I can relate to this poem,
Posted on Wed, 29 Sep 2021
I can relate to this poem, used to love live music loud and proud, but just not able to cope with speakers turned up to their highest decibels, and the large crowds anymore, they leave my head spinning and body shaking with anxiety.
Oh to...
Read full commentPosted in Too Old to Rock and Roll, Too Young to Die
Great poem Ed, all these tiny
Posted on Wed, 29 Sep 2021
Great poem Ed, all these tiny eco-friendly systems supporters working hard are so undervalued, now you've highlighted their achievements.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in I, Caddis
It's hard to imagine being
Posted on Wed, 29 Sep 2021
It's hard to imagine being under the thumb, and not a chance of sharing your own personal feelings for fear you'd offend your husband, life certainly wasn't easy for women back then.
People certainly did a lot of traveling in those days,...
Read full commentPosted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 6
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Tue, 28 Sep 2021
Hi Rhiannon,
how interesting to read about Spinning Caddis flies I've never heard of.
A great poem because you've managed to create a whole other world in this poem, that I had no idea about.
Jenny.
Posted in Complicated lives of the little creatures!
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